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Posted: 15 August 2006 at 2:18am | IP Logged

 

PYAAR     YA    DUSHMANI

 

 

 

The story revolves around two families: Goenkas and khandelwal's……Their family fued……set in the backdrop of rajasthan

 

Their war started years ago when Mansen goenka's brother and Siddhart khandelwal's sister's marriage was fixed…….Sidhart's sister used to love mansen's brother…….but mansen's brother loved someone else…….so on the marriage day he ran off from the mandap…….hearing this news….. sidhart's sister commited suicide…….not being able to bear the loss of his daughter……Sidhart's father shot Mansen's brother and father…….and for this was given a death imprisonment………

 

This war continued for years to come…….and was further aggravated when in a family fight satya sigh jaiswal was shot dead…….satya singh jaiswal was Mansen's Son-in-law……..its presumed that sidhart's elder son suraj shot him…….but its not proved yet

Mansen Goenka, his wife gunawanti have two children

    Mansvi : widow of Satya singh jaiswal, strong, yet nice, presumes suraj to be the killer of her husband and hates him for the same……a doctor by profession
  • Arjun: ruthless businessman, but yet has a soft side to him, he too hates suraj and his family,clever and manipulative, protective towards his sister

Sidhart khandelwal, wife shakuntala have three children;

    Suaraj: nice, clever, very good businessman, loves mansvi very deeply Yuvraj: ruthless,selfish Shefali: (yuvraj's wife) sweet,kind, mansvi's friend(before marriage)
  • Bhumi: sweet innocent beautiful vulnerable,friendly

In heritage(Goenka's) house……..

Mv: papa main suraj ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti……Angry

A: aur karna bhi nahi chaihiye didi….hum us suraj ko nahi chodoonga who kanoon se to bach gaya….par mujhse nahi bach payega…didi ki iss halat ki saza use zaroor milegi

Saying he goes out………..arjun goes and stands in a deserted place….its a desert….where the hot air is flowing....he comes here whenever he is sad……

In the roadside near this desert……..a car stops with a screeching sound……The  driver comes out to check…… a girl comes out wearing a blue chudidaar

The girl is  bhumi who is returning to udaipur after completing her studies in Mumbai…she is been kept away from this family war in  Mumbai near her maasi…

 B: driver uncle kya huwa

D: pata nahi beta……

B: ofo mera surprise….. kahi papa mama ko pata naa chal jayen main aa rahi hoon aaj

D: jee apne kuch kaha…..waise gaadi ko theek karne main time lagega……

B: OH!!!

Saying she wanders about in the desert …….

D: (warns) array suniye….wahan naa jayen wahan slope hai gir gayi to mushkil hove….

She goes off in the desert……..there she sees a man standing alone……

That was arjun standing near the slope…..She goes near him and calls him…….

B: excuse me!!!!!

Arjun turns around to look around but because of the slope both of them fall……hugging each other……they roll down the slope……..they keep rollin….

After sometime the slope ends and they stop rollin……

Arjun and bhumi lay together…..bhumi beneath arjun….. he looks at her and keeps looking at her……she appears beautiful and very innocent to him

Bhumi has eyes still closed due to fear…..but she slowly opens her eyes……

B: hum kaha hai??

Just then she sees a man……the same man who was standing there…. She is not able to take her eyes off him……they both just keep staring without thinking anything else………

A: (in his mind) kitni khoobsurat ho tum…….. kaun ho tum?Embarrassed

Bhumi smiles shyly…….he is bessoted by her beautyEmbarrassed……Just then the driver's voice comes….

D: beta!! Oh beta kahan ho aap!!

B: who driver

A: aapka driver

B; haan…..erm……mera matlab taxi driver

A: oh……(saying he gets up)

She too gets up and tries to walk up the slope …….but is unable to do so and falls…arjun looks at her…..she tries again and again but is unsuccessfull…..since its fully sand……ultimately she looks at him……

He comes to her as if he understood her eyes….Comes near her and takes her in his arms and walks up the slope with less difficulty…bhumi feels shy in his arms….arjun just smiles…….they both reach the flat surface and he releases her……Embarrassed

Bhumi runs away without saying a thanku…….and goes away in the car……she blushes inside the car……..and suddenly remembers that she had not said even a thanks to him….but it was too late……

She reaches home…….everyone is surprised lookin at her

Sf: bhumi tum aaj

B: bhabhi!!!!!(huggin shefali)

Shakuntala: kaise hai hmm hume batay bhi nahi…warna tayriyan karte naa

B: oh mama(hugs her) but suraj bhaiyya yuvraj bhaiyya papa sab?

Sf: office dear …..main phone karti hoon sab milne ke liye daud kar aayenge

In night…….Meanwhile arjun is still immersed in bhumi's thoughts…….

Mansen: arjun tum parso Mumbai chale jao humari client ke saath ek meetin hai

A: okay dad

In kahndelwal house……..bhumi too is thinking abt the desert incident

Sf: array bhumi kya huwa eat ur food naa

B: (startled) huh yeah bhabhi…..arrey haan bhaiyya parso mujhe mumbai jaana hai kuch kaam hai

Su: theek hai par apna khaya rakhna…..kab tak kaam hai

B: bas kuch dino ka kaam hai……..

Day after tomorrow

…..Bhumi goes to the airport……there she bumps on a man and both fall down…….She looks up and this time too its arjun itself…….

B: Aap!!

A: wahi to aap phirse!! Lagta hai humari mulakat humesha aisi hi honi hai

B: (laughs) hmm shayad…….(sees around)

Arjun too sees around….people were lookin at them…… he gets up!!

B: waise I am sorry

A: jee nahi sorry hume kehna chahiye

B: nahi nahi sorry mujhe kehna chahiye

A: bas warna hum sirf ek doosre ko sorry kehte reh jayenge……chaliye flight nahi pakadni hai…..

B: Oh! Haan chaliye waise aap kahan jaa rahein hai(walkin to the check in counter)

A: Mumbai…..

B: arre wah ye to achchi baat hai……safar main achcha humsafar mil gaya hai….

A:hmm……

They get inside the flight and just then realize that they both have the adjacent seats

B: array ye aapka seat hai ……aur ye mera aapke adjacent…..chalo achcha hai

A: hmm….(sits down) waise aap Mumbai kyon jaa rahi hai

B: mujhe kuch kaam hai……apne university ke kuch papers lene hai

A: oh!!waise aapka naam kya hai

B: bhumika……aur aap

A; arjun goenka

They keep chatterin and the flight lands….

A: aap Mumbai main kaha reh rahi hai

B: main…… hotel centaur…..near the airport….

A: OMG!! I cant believe that….. even I have my room booked over there….aur aapka room no.

B: 201

A: OH gosh mera 202……

B: kya!! So many coincidences……

A: hmm(suddenly a lovely look appears) u see destiny….ok lets have dinner together

B: done….waise aap yahan kitne dino ke liye hain

A: hmm 2 days…..now don't say me u too

B: well u see ….u guessed it right(laughs)

They reach the hotel change and have the dinner…..

Next morning…….bhumi comes out of her room and meets arjun outside her room…..

A: array tum itni subah subah

B: haan university jaa rahi thi…..

A: Oh!!then shall I drop u?

B: no its fine by me I will manage

A: oh no it will be a pleasure for me infact…..pls feel free…..come I will drop you….

They both sit in the car……after some time…….

A: waise tum udaipur main kaha rehti ho…..

B: main khan…..

Just then arjun's phone rings…….

A: excuse me…..(on the phone) Hello…what aap itne jaldi…okay I am comin

B: kya huwa

A: I am sorry I am in a bit hurry…..but will droop u

B: arjunjee my university is already here….

They have already reached the university….

A: Oh that's nice…..okay see u then

B: ya and All the best for ur meetin

A: thanks…… ab to meeting achcha hi jaayega

B: huh?

A: erm nothing bye!!

Both go off to their respective destinations…….

In the evening……in the hotel lobby..

A: arre bhumika tum wapas kab aayi

B: main to dopahar ko hi aa gayi thi par aap abhi aa rahe hai

A: hmm

B: arre aapki meeting kaisi thi?

A: hmm….maine kaha tha naa….achchi jaayegi….tumne All The Best jo kaha tha

Bhumi smiles…….

A: u have a very beautiful smile……

B: thanks…..waise aaj shaam …..yani abhi …… aap kya kar rahen hai?

A: kisi ke saath bahar jaa raha hoon

B: (a bit disappointed) achcha kiske saath

A: hai ek larki….bhavri naam hai uska…..

B: oh!!

A: hey why don't u join us

B: nahi main aapke aur aapke girlfriend ke beech nahi aaongi

A: girlfriend?? Who said this

B: I know….she must be ur girl friennd naa….

A: oh really if u insist so she is my girlfriend then…but I wanna show her to u

B: me…..par

A: no par war lets go get ready…..

B: okay baba

They go to a romantic place…..the place is silent and soft cold winds are blowin

B: hmm aapki girlfriend kaha hai

A: yaha!!(pointing at bhumi)

B: (lookin back) par yahan to koi nahi hai

A: hai naa look properly…..

B: nahi koi nahi hai

A: kya mere alawa yahan koi nahi hai……jo hai mere alawa wahi bhavri hai

B:main…….MAIN aapki girlfriend……

A: maine nahi aise kaha…. aapne kaha.u said ur my girlfriend

B: par aapne to who….erm…maine…bahvri…isiliye…main to ….woh

Suddenly arjun nears her and holds her tightly

A: kya tumhe koi aitraaz hai

B: (a bit stunned) kisse

A: meri bhavri banne main

B: (her mouth open is astonishment……he was proposing her)main erm……

A: I love you!!

Bhumi is not able to say anything…….

B: main aap who

A: uffo….just say Do u love me……Yes Or No???????

B: main…er….

A: Yes!! Or ……..(confidently)

B: (smiles shyly) yes……

Arjun looks at her lovely…….his expression changes a bit…..

A: (his voice husky) I love u a lot bhavri!!

Saying he approaches for a kiss…….bhumi doesn't stop him either…twined in their emotions they kiss……

Next morning…….bhumi did not sleep the whole night…..it was her first kiss and arjun had made it so special ……she cudnt believe that he too loves her……

She wakes up lazily ….smiles or rather blushes……and gets ready…..packs her things………she has to leave for udaipur today…..

She comes outside only to see arjun waiting for her in the lobby……

A: Good Morning bhavri (putting on a charming smiles)

B: Good morning(blushing)

A: kya baat hai ab tak kal raat ka asar dikh raha hai……

B: arjunnnnnn please….

He smiles…….both sit in the car and catch the flight back to rajasthan…

In udaipur………Arjun is driving the car….they are silent…after some time

A: waise bhavri main didi se aaj hi baat karronga

B: hmm kiske bare main……yahan se left lena(showing him the way to her house)

A: jee  humari shaadi ki baat

B: sach(happy)!!

A: (smiles) hmm

B: I love u!!(she slants against his arms)

A:waise bhavri tumne bataya hi nahi udaipur main tum kaha rehti ho……

B: main….arrey mera ghar to aa gaya……khud hi dekh lo

A: (looks in the direction she points) ye(he is shocked) khandelwal house

B: haan main bhumika khandelwal hoon sidhart khandelwal ki beti…..

Arjun is shocked…..he cudnt believe his first love and his enemy's daughter….

B: achcha arjun main chalti hoon papa dekhenge to naaraz honge bye

Saying she kisses his cheek and goes in…….Arjun is left in a lurch…..he drives back home quietly……..

In khandelwal house…….

B: bhaiyya

Su: array bhumi kaisa tha Mumbai ka safar

B: best …….superb!!!!

Su: lagta hai humari behen ko iss safar main bahut maza aaya

B; haan ye meri zindagi a sabse khoobsurat safar hai

Su: huh?

B: kuch nahi bhaiyaa I am tired goin to sleep

Su: good night

Shefali who is watching all this silently wonders and goes to bhumi's room…….

Bhumi is lookin at the mirror and blushin

Sf: ahem ahem

B: (startled) bhabhi

Sf: kya baat hai humari bhumi bahut badli badli lag rahi hai

B: (still blushin) aisi to koi baat nahi hai

Sf: oh bhumi ab  mujhse kya chupana….say naa…..whom did u meet in Mumbai

B: bhabhi(surprised)

Sf: batao

B: abhi nahi baad main sahi waqt aane par

Sf: oho bhumi(not able to wait)

B: bhabhi main apko hi sabse pehle baatongi….happy

Sf: oh bhumi……

Meanwhile in heritage house……..

Arjun is still under shock

A: bhavri……suraj ki behen hai…kahndelwal ki beti hai nahi aisa nahi…par aisa hai

Just then mansvi enters……

Mv: arjun tumhara safar kaisa tha

A: huh(startled) theek tha bhabhi

Seeing him tensed…….goes to him

Mv: kya baat hai koi pareshani

A: uh!! Nahi who business ki baat hai

Mansvi understands he's lying…..but why? She doesn't probe him further….she leaves

Arjun meanwhile looks at mansvi and thinks to  himelf

A: nahi main apne pyaar ke liye didi aur jeeju ke inteqaam ko nahi rok sakta….main bhavri ko bhol jaaonga par didi ko insaaf zaroor milega

Just then he remembers bhumi's innocent face……

A: tumhari galti yahi hai bhavri ki tum khandelwal ki ghar se ho…...I am sorry

Next day in khandelwal house…….

Bhumi comes down……happily……..Yuv approaches her…….

Y: bhumi ……bhumi

B: whats that bhaiyya

Y: ek khushkhabri hai

B; what……(sees shefali's disaapointed face and is confused)

Y: tumhari shaadi pucci ho gayi hai aur kal tumari sagai hai

Bhumi is shocked……

B: what!! Par bhaiyya aapne mujhse to poocha hi nahi

Sidhart suraj and yuvraj all look at bhumi wid a stunned look……sidhart approaches her

Si: beta humare ghar main bachon se poochkar shaadi nahi tayr hoti…..

B: par papa

Si: BAS!! Tumhari shaadi  Vikram rana se tayr ho chuki hai…..do hafte baad shaadi hai aur kal sagai……main isme koi aur behas nahi chahta……SAMJHI!!!!!!!

Bhumi's eyes is welled up with tears and she leaves the room……shefali goes behind her

In bhumi's room…..

B: bhabhi(hugs shefali)

Sf: ro mat bhumi….ye sab yuv aur bhaiyya papa ne kab fix kiya mujhe bhi nahi pata

B: par bhabhi main iss vikram rana se shaadi nahi karna chahti hoon

Just then Yuvraj calls shefali……shefali leaves bhumi alone……

B: arjun …..mujhe arjun se abhi baat karni hogi

She dials his no. but his cell is switched off……

B: shayad kisi meeting main hoga…..pls pick up the phone naa

But in vain……she keeps trying his no.,……….later in the night….bhumi is still trying arjun's no.

Sf: bhumi bhumi tune subah se kuch nahi khaya hai….come eat something……

Just then arjun's cell rings……and bhumi is happy

B: ab to uthao phone…..pls

Meanwhile arjun comes out of the washroom……mansvi who is in his room picks up his mobile……and sees the name " BHAVRI"…….

A: phone didi

Mv: yeh bhavri kaun hai

A: (shocked) bhavri!!!!

Mv: hmm usiika phone hai

A: (takes the phone from her) who koi nahi

Saying he cuts the ccall ……doing so he feels as if some stone is put over his heart….

Bhumi is stunned…..she again tries his call……he again cuts the call

Mansvi: phone utha lo na

A: nahi didi…..yeh aise hi wrong no hai aap jaakar araam Karen

After mansvi leaves the phone ringe again…….this time he is unable to cut the phone

A: WHAT!!the hell

B: arjun(cryin) arjun pls kuch karo

A: (tensed…..hearin bhumi cry) bhavri tum ro rahi ho(concernedly)

B: arjun papa ne meri shaadi kahi aur tayr kardi hai……kuch karo pls

A: (shocked) erm

B: arjun pls kuch karo warna main mar jaaongi

A: nahi  bhavri……erm…….(tears well up his eyes)

He cuts the call……

B; (shocked) ARJUN ARJUN!!!!!

 

Shefali who hears this……..approaches bhumi

Sf: bhumi

B: (cryin) bhabhi who mujhse baat kyon nahi karna chahta….main uske alawa kisi ki nahi ho sakti

Sf: bhumi tum kiski baat kar rahi ho….kaun hai ye

B: Arjun ……Arjun goenka

Sf: (shocked) Arjun goenka…..

B: haan pata nahi phone nahi utha ta

Sf: who nahi uthayega bhumi

B: bhabhi(surprised)

Shefali narrates the family war, about which bhumi is still unaware……

Sf: bhumi usse bhool jaao….woh humse bahut nafrat…apni behen se bahut pyaar karta hai

Saying shefali is abt to  leave the room…….just then she sees yuv and is shocked

B: nahi arjun mujhe dhoka nah de sakta

Y: DE SAKTA HAI DHOKA

Saying he comes near bhumi and slaps her……..

Y: TERI HIMMAT KAISI HUWI USS ARJUN GOENKA SE PYAAR KARNE KI

B: bhaiyya par

Y: BAS….ye baat papa ne jaan li to toofan aa jaayega

Lookin at shefli……

Y: smabahlo aur smajho isse arjun ne hume chot pahunchane ke liye iska isthamal kiya hai

B; nahi arjun aisa nahi hai

Y: SHUTUP!tumhe yahan aaye huye do din huwe hai…main use barson se jaanta hoon

Sf: par yuv

Y: Shut up!! Uss arjun ko nahi chodoonga…...aur tu kal sagai hai tayariyan kar uski

He leaves the room dragging shefali along with him…leaving a crying bhumi

Next evening ……

Y: shefali bhumi kaha hai….sagai ka muharat nikal jaa raha hai

Sf: main dekhti hoon……

She comes to bhumi's room and is shocked…..yuv comes behind her and is shocked…..

Bhumi has run away…….She somehow manages to……she is running away from her house…..just then she hits a car and falls unconscious……

Its mansvi's car……mansvi comes out……

Mv: driver ye to…hume ise ghar le jaana chahiye….ghar paas hai….chot zyaada nahi hai…….

They somehow manage to bring her home…..she takes bhumi to a guest room .........Mansvi attends to her wound…….bhumi gains conscious meanwhile…..

B: main kaha hoon?

Mv: tum humare ghar main ho….dont worry tumhe zaara chot aayi hai bas…..

Just then arjun enters the house……

A: Mansvi DIDI

Bhumi recognizes his voice…..and is stunned

Mv: main yahan hoon

Arjun goe towards the room ……and is shocked to find bhumi lying down there…..seeing her head bandaged…..he feels tensed……

A: bhavri!!tu…..(stops realizing mansvi was there)

Mv: tum bhavri ho

B: nahi main bhumi hoon

Mv: achcha kuchh khalo……tumhara ghar kaha hai

B: erm…..erm…….woh

Mv: (realinzing she doesnt wanna say anything abt herself).....achcha jaane do…..eat something…….

They all come to dining table……

Mv: bhumi ye batao kya aaj tum kisii party main thi…nahi tumhari dress aur jewellery

B: jee aaj meri sagai thi

Mv: sagai? Se baghkar…….

Arjun is silent

B: mere gharwale meri shaadi meri marzi ke bina kar rahe hai

Mv: kya tum kisi aur se pyaar karti ho

B: haan main uske bina nahi jee sakti(lookin at arjun) mar jaaongi uske bina

Mv: aur who…use kaha nahi tumne jisse tum er pyaar karti ho

B: kaha…par bhabhi kehti who mujhse shaadi nahi karega who bahut majboor hai

Mv: aisi kaunsi majboori

B: pata nahi….par who meri majboori kyon nahi smajhta…meri kya galti…..

Saying she  leaves the table……cryin……arjun feels hurt ……bad…..feels like killin himself………

In night arjun is not able to sleep…..bhumi welled up eyes keeps comin in front of him…….He slowly goes in the guest room…….

Bhumi is cryin……

A: bhavri(approachin her)

B: arjunnnn(runs and hugs him)

A: bhavri ye tum kya kar rahi thi……agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to……

B: arjun main nahi jee paaongi tumhare bina….mar jaaongi…..

A: bhavri please…..

Just then mansvi hears their voices and goes near the door

B: arjun isme meri kya galti ki main khandelwal ki beti hoon,

Mansvi is shocked to learn she is khandelwal's daughter…..

B: maine tumse pyaar kiya hai aur main nahi jee sakti tumhare bina

A: par bhavri….didi is halat ke zimmedar,dadaji aur chachaje ke maut ke zimmedar khndelwal hai

B: honge…..par main to nahi tum mujhse naaraz kyon ho

Mansvi leaves from there……

A: bhavri tumhari galti sirf ye hai ke tum uss parivaaar se ho

B: theek hai agar mere zindagi main tum nahi to ye jeevan bhi nahi……..

She takes a knife kept in the table …….and is abt to slit her wrist….arjun sees this and snatches away the knife…..

A: Bhavri Don't please….tum kya kar rahi ho

B: (literally breakin down) main nahi jee sakti tumhare bina…….

A: (hugs her tightly) main bhi bhavri….isiliye kabhi aisa dobara mat karna

B: (after some moments)……mujhe chodkar mat jao….neva

A: abhi bhi nahi(smiling)

B: (lookin up at him) hmm abhi bhi nahi….

Arjun eyes turns passionate

A: sach bhavri(not able to control himself anymore)

B: hmm

He picks her up in his arms and places her in the bed……closes the door slowly and comes to her……he approaches her face and slowly switches off the light…….

Next morning…..arjun gets up and rakes a hand thru his hair……and is a bit stunned to find out that he is not in his room……suddenly he remembers what happened last night

He turns only to find bhumi sleeping beside him……he is shocked…..he gets up…puts on his shirt buttons and leaves the room immediately……

Mansvi who comes down sees arjun leaving bhumi's room…..tensed…hairs ruffled

Mv: ye arjun itni subah bhumi ke room se iss tarah…..

She rushes to bhumi's room…..and she understands what has happened……

Mv: nahi arjun ye tumne kya ar diya bhhumi ke saath…..ab….

She thinks for some moments and then calls up someone……

After sometime a car comes and stops…..outside…..hearing the voice of the car brakes….bhumi also wakes up………

Shefali comes in…….

Sf: mansvi!!

Mv: (turning around) shefali…..(she goes to shefali and hugs her)

Sf: mansvi kaisi ho tum…..satya jeeju ke baad aaj theek se mil rahi hoon tumse

Mv: shefali main eek bahut hi zaroori baat ke liye phone kiya hai

Bhumi meanwhile comes out of the room and sees all this and is shocked to see both huggin........

Sf: mansvi mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai…yuv bahut gussa hai

Mv: kyon?

Sf: mansvi bhumi kal apni sagai se bhag gayi….aur…..bhumi meri……

Mv: main jaanti hoon bhumi yuvraj ki behen hai aur who theek hai

Sf: huh?(confused)

Mv: see(she points to bhumi)

Sf: (goes to bhumi) bhumi!!!!!!!tu kaha…..yaha….tune ye kya kiya bhumi

Mv: (in her mind) arjun aur bhumi ne kal bahut galat kiya hai shefali

B: bhabhi main us vikram se shaadi nahi karna chahti

Mv: wo jo bhi hai bhumi tumhe ghar jana chahiye

B: par didi arjun ke aane…..(stops)

Mv: tum jaana chahiye bhumi(stern)

Bhumi leaves with shefali………

In khandelwal house…….bhumi and shefali enter…..suraj is very happy and goes to bhumi

Su: bhumi…bacha ur alrite naa

Y: (angry) KAHA GAYI THI TU

Su: yuv bhumi abhi ghar aayi hai

Y: suraj ye picnic se nahi lauti….humari izzat uchhal ke aa rahi hai

Su: who jo bhi hai….hume shaanti se bhumi se poochna chahiye

Sid: nahi beta…..BHUMI KAHA GAYI THI

Sf: who sanjeeda ……iskii saheli ke yaha

Y: (suspiciously) oh really…….main kaise yakeen kar loon

Sf: yuv main tumhari patni hoon mera vishwas nahi karoge…pls papa

Shaku: bas ab meri beti se aur sawaal na pooch….wo is shaadi se raazi nahi thi isiliye usne aisa kiya

Y: (in his mind) nahi kyonki ye us arjun se pyar karti hai……

Meanwhile in heritage house…..arjun comes back……still guilty…..

Mv: ARJUN!!!

A: je didi

Mv: ye tumne kya kiya bhumi ke saath

A: main……maine kya kiya(worried)

Mv: maine aaj subah tumhe bhumi ke kamre se nikalte huwe dekh liya tha…..

A: (shocked) didi

Mv: arjun tumne kya sochkar ye kadam uthaya….tumne uss bechari ki zindagi barbad kardi….tum jaante ho bade is rishte ke liye kabhi haan nahi karenge phir bhi

A: main kya karta didi….main bhavri se duri nahi bardasht kar sakta….

Mv: par arjun wo

A: didi…main nahi sambhal paaya apne aapko I love her very much didi main nahi jee sakta uske bina(breakin down)……(after a moment)…….par didi main apne pyaar ke liye aapka inteqaam nahi bhula sakta….main bhumi ko bhoola doonga……

Three weeks later………An informer of yuvraj comes to khandelwal house

Inf: yuvraj jee aapne suna….Arjun goenka ki sagai ho rahi hai

Shaku,sid,suraj,shefalli,bhumi everyone hears it…….

Hearing this bhumi faints down…….

Sf: BHUMI!!!!!!!!!

The doctor is called upon…..and he examines bhumi…..and has a tensed expression

Su: kya huwa doctor humari behen theek to hai

Doc: jee….aapki behen bhumika pregnant hai

Y: WHAT!!!!!(catching the doctor's collar) DOCTOR KE BACHE JAANTA haI YE MERI BEHEN HAI JHOOT MAT BOL……….

Doc: nahi main jhooth nahi bol raha…..she's pregnant……

Bhumi too gains conscious by that time and hears what the doc says…….

The doctor leaves…….yuvraj is really angry on bhumika

Y: (catching her arm) BOL KISKA PAAP HAI YE …….BOL(slaps bhumi)

Sf: yuv pls chod do

Y: tum beech main mat bolo…..tumne ise badhawa diya hai…..aaj zinda nahi

Su: (stops yuv) yuv jaao yahan se……..(somehow manages to control yuv)

YUv leaves……and bhumi rushes to hug suraj…but suraj slaps her too

Su: tu jaanti hai aaj kya kiya hai……aaj papa humari izzat mitti main mila di

B: bhauiyya(cryin)

Su: nahi bhumi bahut galat kiaya hai tune…..(sayin he leaves)

Sf: (consoling bhumi) bhumi ye bachcha kahi……(worried)

B: arjun ka hai bhabhi…….

Sf: bhumi aisa kkadam kyon uthaya tumne…..

B: sorry bhabhi…..apr apne aap ko nahi sambhal paayi….aap kuch kare naa bhabhi….

Shefali is worried…….she decides to call mansvi…..shefali does so

Mv: hello

Sf: main hoon shefali

Mv: shefalli(surprised)

Arjun also picks up the parallel connection of the phone and hears their talks

Sf: mansvi ek toofan aagay hai

Mv: kya

Sf: mansvi…..bhumi….bhumi…pregnant hai….aur arjun us bache ka…..(stops)

Mv: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!(shocked)'

A: (shocked) ……(in his mind …..a bit happy) bhavri maa bane jaa rahi hai

Sf: kuch karo mansvi…yuv shayad us bache ko abort karwana chahta hai….

A: (in his mind) nahi aisa nahi ho sakta

Mv: main kuch karti hoon

She hungs the phone and thinks……meanwhile arjun calls up bhumi

B: arjun!!

A: bhavri kya ye sach hai ke tum pregnant ho

B: haan!!

A: I am so happy bhavri…..par yuv humare bache ko maarna chahta hai

All this is heard by Mansen

M: ARJUN!!!!!!!!!!

Arjun turns around …….shocked……

Meanwhile in bhumi's home….yuvraj hears it all…..he santches the phone and puts it down……

Masen: ARJUN!!!!1(slaps him)

Mansvi: papa!!

M: jaanti ho mansvi isne us kaatil ke behen ki kok humara waaris……teri himmat

Mv: papa please…..arjun aur bhumi ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hai

M: achcha pyaar…..hmm….aaj apne parivaar se zyaada who larki pyaari ho gayi

A: nahi papa

M: decide….FAMILY OR THAT GIRL…….DECIDE NOW

A: (quietly goes in) papa aap aur didi se zyaada zaroori koi nahi……

Next day……suraj calls up mansvi and asks her to meet him……

Mv: kya hai mujhe kyon bulaya hai

Su: mansvi main bhumi aur arjun ke bare main baat karna chahta tha

Mv: par main ek kaatil se koi baat nahi karna chahti

Su: (holds her arm tightly and turns her to look at him) maine tumhare pati ko nahi maara

Mv: achcha

Su: mansvi ye baat court bhi prove kar chukka hai

Mv: hmm…..jhoot ko sach mian badalna koi mushkil baat nahi hai tumhare liye

Su: Mansvi(shocked)

Mv: haan….tumne satya ko maara……parivaar ki dushmani main…..tumne mera pyaar mujhse cheen liya

Su: sahi kaha dushmani main log jaan lete hai…..pyaar main nahi

Mansvi is shocked……

Su: hmm maine ye baat kisise nahi kahi kehta bhi kaise….hum dono ke parivaar main dushmani jo thi……….

Mv: kya kehna chahte ho

Su: yahi  mansvi ke main tumhara bura nahi soch sakta because I LOVE U…….I LOVE U MANSVI!!!!!!!

Mansvi is shocked to the hilt…….

Su: jab tumhe pehli baar dekha apna dil de baitha…par jab izhar-e-dil karna chaha……tumahri sagai tayr ho gayi…satya sigh jaiswal ke saath…..

Mv: to mujhe pane ke liye

Su: nahi nahi mansvi main sapne main aise nahi soch sakta…..maine sirf tumahri khusi chahi hai…..tumhara saath bhale hi naa mile….mera yakeen karo mansvi maine satya ko nahi maara……shayad us larai main satya ko goli lagi par who maine nahi chalayi

Mv: to phir

Su: main nahi jaanta….par vaada…..jis din pata chalega use maar doonga

Mv: aur agar who tumhi huwe to

Su: to khud ko goli marloonga…..vaada……

Just then suraj's cell rings……its shefali

Sf: bhaiyya

Su: kya baat hai shefali itni tensed kyon ho?

Sf: bhaiyya yuv bhumi ko naajane kaha le gaya hai……

Su: kya……kab

Sf: kal raat

Su: to tumne ye baat mujhe kal kyon nahi batayi

Sf: jab maine yuv ko rokhna chaha…..to usne mere sar par kuch mar…mujhe behosh kar diya….mujhe abhi hosh aaya

Su: Oh no!!

Mv: kya baat hai suraj

Suraj narrates everything…….hearing thi mansvi calls up arjun and narrates him

A: WHAT!! Didi agar meri bhumi ko kuch uwa to main yuvraj ko nahi chodunga

Mv: tum ek kaam karo hume aa…yahan milo(she gives him the address)

Suraj too…..tells shefali to bring sidhart along with her

After sometime shefali sidhert, arjun and masen come  along…although mansn came there following arjun ……hmm

 

A: didi where's bhumi……

Seeing suraj he looses his control and catches his collar

A: SURAJ!!!!!!kaHA MERI BHAVRI!!!KYA KIYA TUNE usKE SAATH

Su: ARJUN ye mat bhoolo who meri behen bhi hai……

A: achcha isiliye yuv useee

Sid: meri bhavri!!(shocked)

Su: haan papa arjun bhumi ek doosere se bahut pyaar karte hai…..

Sid; WHAT!!NAHI BHUMI AISA

Su: papa ye waqt dushmani ke bare main nahi humari bhumi ke bare main sochne ka hai

After a while….

Su: papa!! Aap mansen goenka se naaraz hai kyonki unke wajah se aappne bua aur dadajee ko khoya……par papa unhone bhi kuch kam nahi khoya…..unhone bhi apne pita aur bhai ko khoya hai…….

 

Continues…….

Su: iss dushmani se kuch nahi mila….mansvi apna pati khoya….humne paaya kya…..par arjun aur bhumi ke pyaar ke wajah se nayi zindagi ko pane jaa rahe hai

 

Mansvi looks on

Su: (lookin at arjun) arjun aur bhumi ki pyaar ki nishani jo bhumi ke paas hai……agar humne ab bhi der ki…..to sab barbad ho jayegs……hum bhumi ko kho denge……us bache ko kho denge……in dono ki koi galti nahi hai……phir kyon saza ke haqdaar bane

Arjun and mansvi and mansen look shocked……After a while………

Sid: ek jagah hi jaha yuv jaa sakta hai

 

All go to that place……..yuv is hoding a gunpoint in bhumi's head…..and slaps her

Y: TERI ITNI HIMMAT…..TERE KOK MAIN US ARJUN KA BACHA……NA TU ZINDA BACHEGI NAAI TERA BACHA…….

Arjun sees this…………

A: YUVRAJJJJJJJJJ!!!!!!!!

Bhumi looks at him……

B: Arjun!!!!(cryin)

A:Chod use…..

Y: tu kahega aur main chod doon……teri nishani mere ghar kabhi nahi aa sakti

Su: YUV!!!!! Who humari behen hai

Y: hmm BEHEn!!! Nahi jis pal ye is arjun goenka ke paas gayi ye meri behn nahi hai

Sid: beta bhumi ko chod do

Y: papa aap bhi!!!par nahi main ise maar doonga…….(saying he points the gun at bhumi's tummy and is about click the trigger)

Just then arjun jumps over and pushes the gun aside……yuvraj's men come ahead…….

Mansen, and suraj handle them…….

Mansvi goes near bhumi and release her arms  which were tied with ropes…….

B: didi……

Yuvraj and arjun are still fighting…..but somehow yuvraj manages to get the gun and this time he points the guun at both bhumi and mansvi……but

Y: wah mansvi!! Pehle tera pati mara tha aaj tujh maar doonga……phir tere is bhai……phir tere baap ko….aur tera khandaan mitti main mil jaayega

Mv: to kya tumne satya ko maara

Y: haan….maine suraj ne nahi……par tu khud samajhti rahi suraj ko katil…..

A: YUVRAJJJJJJJJJJJJ

Y: AYYEE!! Arjun agar ek kadam bhi aage badhaya….to main mansvi aur bhumi par goli chala doonga

A: yuvrajjjjjj! Bhumi aur didi ko kuch bhi huwa to main

Y: Amh ahm…..age mat badhna warna…..na bhumi na pyaari didi

Shefali thinks of a plan……she was standing behind yuvraj so yuvraj wasn't able to see her……she quietly goes ahead and hits yuvraj with a bamboo stick and his gun falls down…….

Shefali takes bhumi and mansvi along with her…..but before she could run away and others could take over yuvraj…….yuvraj picks the gun and shoots shefali…….

Sf: AAAA

B: bhabhi!!!!!!!!!!

Mv: SHEFALI!!!!!!!!

Su: YUVRAJJJJJJJJJJJJ……..

Suraj and arjun go daringly to yuvraj and hit him……..yuvraj's gun falls down………

Arjun hits yuvraj very badly……

Meanwhile suraj goes and picks up the gun……he shoots it……..

Everyone is shocked……..The bullet goes past yuvraj's chest…..and he falls on the ground dead…….arjun who was fighting with yuvraj is shocked too……

Su:ek katil ko zinda rehne ka haq nahi hai

Everone looks at suraj…….but suraj throws the gun and goes to shefali

Su: shefali chalo tumhe hospital le chale

Sf: nahi bhaiyya…..main nahi bach ……

Mv: nahi shefali…..tumhe meri baat manni hogi…..

Sf: mansvi kya tum meri baat manogi……

Mv: who kya

Sf: maine humesha inn do parivaaron main pyaar chaha hai……arjun aur bhoomi iss pyaar ko shuru kiya…..kya tum bhi…..

Mv: matlab?

Sf: kya tum…..meri jhethani banna pasand karogi?(smiling)

Mv: kya(shockd)

Sf: bhaiyya main jaanti thi ke aap mansvi se pyar karte hai…..mansvi….. bhaiya ne satya jeeju ko nahi maara……par who tumse apni zindagi se zyaada pyar karte hain

Su: par tumhe

Sf: maine apki diary padhi thi……pls mansvi tumhe inse achcha jeevan saathi nahi mil sakta

B: haan mansvi didi…..par papa

Sf: papajee(looking at sidhart) ise meri akhri khwaish samaj pura Karen!!

Sidhart: beta(crying) tujhe kuch nahi hoga

Sf: mujhe kuch nahi hoga main jaanti hoon……pls mansen uncle….aap bhi to mujhe apni beti jaise mante the na…..us khathir hi sahi maan jaaye is rishte ke liye

Mv: par shefali tum!!

Sf: pls mansvi kya tum mere liye itna nahi karogi please…….pllllll

Saying shefali stops…….

Mv: SHEFALIIIIIIIIIII(cries)

After 1 year………….

 

Mansen and sidhart……are waiting outside….operation theatre……Arjun is very anxious…..

The doctor comes out……..

Doc: mubarak ho Mr arjun goenka….apko beta huwa hai……..

A: (happily) sach aur bhavri

Doc: aapki patni bilkul theek hai

Mansen and sidhart hug each other…….Just then suraj and mansvi enter…..

Su: bhai hume der  to nahi huyi…..

Mansen: suraj…mansvi kaha reh gaye the tum dono……tu dono kaka kaki ban gaye ho……bhumi aur arjun ko beta huwa hai…..

Mv: sach…..oh!! (goes to meet arjun…happily)

A: didi…..I am so happy……

Sidhart: wiase suraj beta tumhe itni der kyon huwi

Su: erm…papa….mansvi ki tabiyaat achanak kharab ho gayi thi isiliye hume doctor ke paas jaana pada

A: kya huwa didi ko jeeju!!

Su: er…ahem…erm…(shy) wahi jo bhumi ko huwa hai…..

A: bhumi…(confused)…….(suddenly realizing) aah u mean didi aap……

Mansvi nods her head shyly…….

A: oh didi that calls for a double celebration…..(hugs mansvi)

All are happy and doctor comes out

 

Doc: bhumi jee ko hosh aa gaya hai…..

They all go in and break the news to bhumi…..bhumi too is happy…….

Mansen: aaj sab kitne khush hai…humari dushmani ne kisi ko kuch nahi diya…par humari dosti ne sirf aur sirf khushiyaan di hai……(hugs sidhhart)

The end…………………..



Edited by sia_lovely - 15 August 2006 at 9:06am

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hey ppl pls repond how did u like my short fanfic......

can this fan fic be included in the fan fic contest hope i am not late and

hope the story is not too big for the contest......since the story is a bit lenghty.....

But in any case pls respond ppl......
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dis is so damn kewl and amazingly 2 gud!yeah I will put it in the fan fic contest! Smile

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Clap kahaani filmy hai but i loved it...i always like short & sweet stories Smile

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that was an ammmmmmmmzazzzzzzzzzzzzing fan-fic sia !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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beautiful
is all i hav... veyr nice story...n scenes n dialogues... it to me looked like a movi in total.. i mean utha ke movi bana do bas... save the copyrights for urself then... Wink Wink Wink

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that was an ammmmmmmmzazzzzzzzzzzzzing fan-fic sia !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Clap

beautiful
is all i hav... veyr nice story...n scenes n dialogues... it to me looked like a movi in total.. i mean utha ke movi bana do bas... save the copyrights for urself then... Wink Wink Wink

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Originally posted by diyafah

dis is so damn kewl and amazingly 2 gud!yeah I will put it in the fan fic contest! Smile

 

thanks a lot

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Originally posted by preeti_saarrthi

Clap kahaani filmy hai but i loved it...i always like short & sweet stories Smile

 

thanks a lotSmile

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