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CrazyNoori

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 6:19pm | IP Logged

Ok guys I decided to do a fanfic on what it would be like if ViSa got married the story will start from pre cap but I will add my lil bit to it ;) but if u want me to continue please comment below :)


Part one

Sarita rushes to Vikrant's house as she has decided to tell him that she can no longer marry him and break the condition set she reaches the house ringing the doorbell continuesly the servant answers the door and Sarita rushes inside and orders the servant to call Vikrant this instant after a min or 2 vikrant enters and gestures Sarita to sit as he is on a call

Vikrant: dekho I want that deal at any cost understood make it happen

Vikrant disconnects his call and looks over to Sarita whose still standing and figiting with her fingers as she looks at Vikrant

Vikrant: kya hua everything ok?

Sarita: I cant marry you

not knowing to them Abhimaan is listening to everything

Vikrant: kya matalab have u forgotten our little condition?

Sarita: I am sorry Vikrant ji but I I

Sarita then turns to leave but Vikrant grabs her arm tightly

Vikrant: you cant just leave and say you cant marry me

Sarita: RAJ ji LOVES ME

she shouts

Vikrant is shocked and Abhimaan runs away from there and goes to his room tearing down each and every photo of Sarita whilest Vikrant grips her arm tighter

Vikrant: after ten years he treats you like a fool and now *he laughs* he loves you because your suddenly getting married again wah kya pyaar hai

Sarita: dont you dare question his love

Vikrant pulls Sarita close to him: listen and listen good I will do what I want when I want because I am Vikrant Suryavanshi and this marriage will happen and you know why? For my son he looks up to you as his mother and look what your doing

Vikrant lets go off Sarita and storms off whilest Sarita suddenly realises about Abhimaan and leaves the house teary eyed and gets into the rickshaw

Sarita: main yeh kaise bhol gaye kay mein Abhimaan ke maa baney wali hoon aur mein yeh rishta thod ne wali thi *she thinks to herself*

as she enters the house and goes to her bedroom she sees Raj sitting on her bed in the dark and she frowns

Sarita: kya hua Raj ji

Raj: Mubarak ho *he scoffs*

Sarita frowns: matalab

Raj: arrey you told Vikrant you want to marry him tommrow thats the reason u went there not to tell him its over

Sarita: nahi raj ji thats not true

Raj: bas huh bas he rang and told me

Sarita: no please listen he is lying

Raj leaves her room as she tries to explain and then returns with the wedding outfit she wore on there wedding day he throws oil over it and lits a match and burns her wedding outfit right before her eyes then he grabs her and removes her mangal sutar and the beads slowly hit the ground and finally removes her sindoor

Raj: ab tum azaad ho iss rishtey se mujhe se

Raj leaves and sarita drops down with tears comin down her face as she sees the flames

To be continued?

You guys want I continue?



Edited by CrazyNoori - 27 October 2013 at 9:56am

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
please do continue

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
Plz do i so hope Viki and Sarita get married :)

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
you could continue but Vikrant and Sartia must live happily and in love.

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Yes, I am waiting for further story...
btw, boy's name is Abhimaan! ;)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Yeah continue then send to he CV's lol, they need some inspiration 

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shahsb_26

Yes, I am waiting for further story...
btw, boy's name is Abhimaan! ;)


lols my bad LOL and thanxxx, thank u for your comments guys part two will be up tonight Big smile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
very nice so farThumbs Up..I would like the angle where Vikrant not as much as forces Sarita but Abhimaan's situation leaves them in no choice but to get married..which leaves room for Vikrant's character to be positive and Sarita-Vikrant's relatioship starting from there!..please continue Smile

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