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TERE MERE LOVSTORY part1 SOON 





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 HI GUYZZZ THIS MY TVC STORY  N I LOVE THIS STORY IF WANT 2 RAD U CAN READ IT THERE IS NO NESSEARY 2 COMMENT OR LIKE 

 my story abt frenship between 2 fren love between true lover  how their life  cross to eachother 

MANVI SHINGH CHAUDARI (MANNU) aSmile 17 yrs old  fun loving girl kind hearted sweet n simpal .she wz a orphan girl live in foster home she waz most talented girl in her clg she read simpal goverment clg she waz  scholarship stoudent (family background secret)  

VIRAT SHINGH VADERA : (vsv) 20 yrs old tall dark hansom chocolaty tom boy in the clg he waz d most reach-est boy among all the clg he is a dream date of Day Dreaming every girl in d college he study  most expensive clg in Chandigarh most talanted boy in every faculty like dancing boxinging study  n he he d rockstar of d clg he is  also a great business man in young age (family background grandpa mr vijay singh vadera  widow mom bansika chacha inder shing vadera chachi kadambari vadera n 1 elder sister keshu shingh vadera ) 


simran kapur : (simmi ) 23 yrs old best fren of manvi sme like manvi funloving simple bt not talented like manvi and verry poor in study (family background middle class mom housewife dad shoopkeeper 1 elder sister who already married ) 


avighyan sikawat (abhi) : abhi 20 yrs old young dashing boy like virat  or we can say same like virat bst fren d chadde fren  (family background  1 die ma who lov him  like his own mom n one widow mom  his father died in plan crass whith virat father died  



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3URD PART 


 
  TERE MERE LOVESTORY 3 


 

B = are tughe  pata  nahi  usk room main aajtak  kohi  nahi inter karpaya hai ye baat alag hai aven aur abhi ne ush room mein inter kiya hain   maine tho ye suna hai ki maya vi aajtak ush room mein inter nahi kiya hain aur tum me kya baat hai sidhe ush bedroom tak

M= a.. chup..kuch v ? chal  ab colz.

In da colz

Simi maanu ko dhek ke ghabra jati hain aur mannu se ush chot k bareme puchti hai mannu v kuch nahi wo bas washroom main lag gaya keheti hai   aur simi   soyam  se baat karne jatain hain  virat aur uske group classroom main enter karatain  hain vira aur manvi ek dusreain ko dhektain hain aaaue 5se ka eye lock  hoa hain uske baad virat manvi k pairo  main dhekta hain aur appne bench main jake bahia hain  thodi  der maya virat se baat karne lagati hain

Ma= vsv darling kahi tum hamarain plan  k barain main bhul to nahi gaya

V= maya ki taraf dhekata hain ) agar  vsv  kisi ko permiss kaya  hain to use  jaraur nivata hain hain


Ma= ooo. Vsv ur  sach  darling to hum hamarin plan ajjse start kare 

V= tik hain ( virat manvi k pass jata  hain ) hi manvi

M= hi viratt

V= ab tumhara pair kaisa hain ?

M= im filling better aur koi kam tha ?

V=han- wo humarain  project k barain main 

M= par tum ne to khaha tha ki   tum sab kud karogay

'v= han  kaha tha par agar sir ne  tume v project k baraim  pucha to ?isliya hume join  kam karna chahaiya

M= tik hain to avi khali period hain to  appna  kam suru kare

V= are nahi wo kya hain ki mughe avi music class main jana hain to  aur  din main mughe  office  v jaja  hota hain to  kya hum sam ko mil saktain  hain 4 bj

M= waisey mughe v to caneen jana padega appne kam k liya  aur dopehar ko mall main jab karna padta hain  to tik hain 4 bj par khaha milke kam kaergy  cz clg to band hoga  tavi

V= agar tume problem na hoto  mere ghar main

M=(sochin hain ) tik hain  par 7pm se pehele  mughe tum hosel chodogay o ?

V=ok hen set main tume mall se sidhe 4pm ko pick karuga

M= ok

(sam 4 bj manvi mall k bahar virat ka intazar kartin hain aur vira mannvi  lene ata hain aur dono virat k ghar main project k kam  karne suru karatain hain aur fir virat ,manvi ko hostel chodne jata hain

In hostel gate

M= ok bye virat

V= bye kal fir ok same time

Asain har roj project k cz se roj milna julna honey laga ab vira aur mannvi ek ache dos bane lagay they

(virat house)

M= vira ab humarain  project k liya   kuch practical  ki jarurat padegi

V= han . yesa  kartain  ki is Sunday ko chaltain  hain  kasha rahain ga ?

M= god idea partner

V= patner ?? bt

M= are  main life paner ki nahi project partner ki bat karrah hu

V=000..!!! ok partner

V= manvi hum dheain hi dhektin bhut ache dost ban gaya hain

M= han . ye to sahi hain

V= par

M= par kya virat ?

V= manvi tum  hamarain frenship ki baat clg main revel  nahi karogi na

M(virat ko hairani dhektain hain ) par kyun ?

V=  kyun kit um jaanti  ho ki how much I love maya  n wo nahi chahatain hain ki si vi ladki k saah   mera relation ho chaya  wo frenship  ki hi kyun na ho

M=(manvi virat  k  (I love maya ) sabd (word) se  under hi under bahut hurt hoti hain par show nahi karti ha n smile kartin hain )ok vira main nahi bataugi n  u know maya iz really lucky cz usne tumarain jaisha bf paya hain

Both smile

V= waisey patner mughe tumara number do na  cz kavi agar mughe tum se kam pada to  I mean project k liya

M= (manvi virat ko appna mobile number detain hain ) ye lo bt main tume kavi cal nahi karugi cz mere mobile main limited time k liya recharge hota hain  tume hi mughe cal karna padega aur kavi mughe tum se kam pada to main tume misscal kardugi ok

V= ok my patner

Yesay din bittain gaya virat manvi ko appni choti choti baat bata ha cal kark n mannvi vi har 2hrs main virat ko mical martainthi in dino clg main joro-soro se NEW BACH WEL-COM PARTY ki tayari chal rahi thi

V= manvi tum  party main kis k sah jaogi

M= main ? main to party wary main nahi jarahi hu

V= par kyun ? tume chal na hi hoga

M= is pary main tumarain  najane se prob hoga pr mere najane pe kisi ko kohi problem nahi hoga

V= mughe hoga aur tum arahi ho

M= ok -ok

In  vira house )

V= manvi hamara lagvag project pura hogaya hain na

M= han   ajj ye pura hojaya ga aur tume mughe lene roj ana nahi paga .. chalo mughse umara picha chua

V= manvi ki baao se paa nahi kyun virat under hi under hur hoa hain aur mannvi ko fake wali smile deta hain )manvi chalo main ajj tumain ek jagaha leke chala hu

M= avi ? avi to nahi vira hume hostel jane main late hojaya ga

V= main huna tumarain hostel  tak  time main pohocha dhuga

'm= ok chalo

Virat manvi ko ek special place main lejata hain jaha lake hoa hain aur beautiful envaromen hota hain maNvi ko wo place bahu pasand aain hain

V= kaisa laga?

M= vowww virat I,s sooo beautiful mughe lagaraha hain ki main janat main agaie hu

(virat k taraf dhektain hain aur smile karatin hain )tq soo much

V= ,my pleasure

(virat aur manvi talav (lake ) k kinarain main bhaiain hain aur upper asman main chand dhekne lagaain hain

V= paa hain mannvi jab dhuki ya bhut  kush hota huna av main yaha ake bhaita hu  yaha mughe sukun mehesus hota hain

M= really ..!!! acha virat mughe tum appne baremain kuch bataona 

V= mere barain main acaha ik hain mere baraimain  to sav jaan tain ho tum aur maya k barain main v jaanain ho tu  waysay maya kuch jyada hi gif dimand karai hain  na

M=kyun nahi tum ianain rich ho aur wo VIRAT SHING VADERA ki gf hain o  uska to hak banta hain 'maya is very lucky  kit u use itna pyar karatin ho

V= ya I know waysey um batao ki tume appne bf se kya chaha tain ho ?

M=(virat ki akho main dhekin hain aur dil main virat k barain main sochtain hain ) mughe use koi gift nahi chahaiya bs wo mughe aur mere pyar ko samge aur hamesa mera sath de (dono ek dusrain ko dhekltain hain aur small eye conact hota hainaur mannvi sence main atain hain ) wo chodo mughe tum appne mama papa k barain main batao               

M= kya batau tume hjab main 15yrs ka tha av papa  ek accident main maregaya n avi se bada hone laga 18 saal main maine papa  chandigargh ki pureay  business samal liya  dadaji ni mumbaie ka auchu bhar ka

M= bafre baf itna paise kamakar rakain kahaha ho

V(virat hasta hain )= wo chodo tum appne baraim   v kuch batao ?

jisko mere sachaie  k baraemain pata hoga virat main anah nahi hu

V= (shock hoahai ) wat?

M= ya  I m not orphan , mere papa hain

V= to fir tum kyun?...

M= ( virat ki taraf dhekti hain aur virat ko mannvi ki akho main ek ajav sa dard (pain) najar ata hain )main bahut  manhus hu ,I m not a lucky  4 any1 mere papa  mere mom se bahu pyar kartain tey  aur jab main mom ki pate main he tav doctor ne peahely hi kehain diya tha ki  agar mom ne mughe janam diya to wo marjayagai aur papa ne mom ko abtsion k liya v khaha bt mom chha ti thi ki main is  duniya main au mere paida hotain hi mom ki  death hogie tav se papa mugse  nafrat karne lagy  ek baar jab main 4yrs ki  thi to galtain se mere mu se papa word nikal gaya uar unone ( mannvi appne hath k chot vrat ko   dhikhakar) mere hataon main jalti lakdi se jaladiya

Mannvi ki batain  se virat ka dil chali chali hota hain wo manvi ka pain  mahesus karaa  hain aur uski  ache bahe atain hain )

M= virat  tum ro rahay ho mard ro tain ache nahi lagatin , ttik hain bs hogaya

V= nahi manvi plzzz main sunna chahata hu (virat manvi ki akho main dhekta hain )plz

M=  tij hain    muge  papa se bachane k liya pados k ek auncle ne mughe rishjikesh anahasram main rakdiya mughe us place se bahu sara pyar mila pata hain virat hamarin asram main har saal diwali main humarain liya bhahut sara purana kapade donation main atain hain aur vale hi wo , amiro k liya  purane kapde ho aur fakne ka  saman ho par hamarain liya to kushiya hain  aur kise khajane se kam nahi hain

Mannvi ki baato se virat k akhose asoo barjaain hain aur wo manvi jod se appne baho main leta hain aur mannvi vi piche se vira ko kas k pakdti hain

V= I m sorry manvi

M= tum sorry kyun bolrahain ho ooo hug karne k liya  um  daro mat main maya ko nahi bataugi ki tumne mughe hug kiya hain (aur manvi hasain hain )

Virat v halke se smile kara hain

(Virat mannvi ki akho main dheka hain aur sochta hain manvi mughe nahi pata tha ki ttumarain under itna dard chupa huwa hain )

M= virat ab chalo late hojaygay hum

V= manvi when virat iz here not 2 fear

Virat aur manvu hostel k liya car main bhit k nikal tain hain par rasatain main raffic jam hojata hain aur virman traffic main fas jatain hain  ttavi  manvi k side k car k nice ek choti bachee ake  mannvi bolti hain

Ba= didi  mughe bhahut bhuk lagi hain kuch khane ko digiya na

Mannvi wo choti si bachee ko dhektin hain aur use appni bachpanki yad aain hain

M= virat mughe us pass waley chaya ki dhukan main  le chalo na plzz '

V= tik hain chalo 

Virman us choi si ladki k sah us chaya dukan main jatain hain 3 cup chaya ka odder kartain hain our 3 bada pao v magatain hain manvi us choti si ladki ko chaya aur bada pao deain hain wo choi si ladko wo lekar jane lagain han

Aur mannvi puchin hain

Aree choi yahi bhai k khao khaha jarahi ho

Ba= wo ye mere doso k saah mil baat k khayagay '

Manvi us bachee ko khehain ti hain ki uske sab dosto ko bulakar lao aur wo ladki sab doso ko bulakar latin hain aur mannvi sab ko bada pao aur chaya pilatain hain  ye sab vira dhekraha hoa hain aur scochne lagata hain (manvi  mene ttum jaisey saf aur ache ladki appne purain  life main nahi dhekin kitani sachaiee hain tum main  )

Tavi achank barish hone lagati hain sab bachee manvi ko kich k barish main lejatain hain vira dur se mannvi ko dhekraha hota hain mannvi barish main nachne lagain hain un bachoo k saath uska pura badan barish k wajaise vig jata hain mannvi ka pura banan k akar (body shade ) main najar ata hain vira mannvi ko yesay dhek kar kud ko rok nahi pata aur wo mannvi k pass ajata hain aur mannvi k piche se appne wor kichta hain virat k chati(chest) se mannvi k pice (back) tauch hota hain mannvi virat k akho main dhekti n hain aur virat mannvi ki nasile akho main ko jata hain mannvi ko vira ki akho main kud ko chune ki bhuk saf dhikai deta hain   virat holey se appni hatho se manvi k komal badan chune lagta hain kamar se chati taka virat k chune ki wajaise manvi kud appne appko virat k hawaly kardeain hain aur virat k chune ka ashesaas ko mehesus  karain hain virat kud ko rok nahi pata is liye manvi k bige hot ko chumne ki kosish karata hain  pr avi mannvi  hos  main atain hain aur mannvi ko maya ko yad atain hain aur virat ko kud se dur kartai hain

M= ( virat ki taraf na dhek k ) plzzz virat ye galat hain

Dono hos main aain hain

V= (niche dhekta hain aur fir mannvi ki taraf) sorry manvi  ooo

M= it,s ok virat ab hume jana chahiya

(Virman pure rasatain kuch nahi bolain hain )  

Virat mannvi ko hosel chodne jata hain  aur wo warden se kehekar  mannu ko hostel main jane dein hain

Virat  appne ghar jata hain use mannvi ki bahut yad aain hain wo  mannvi ki khayalo main khojata hain  wo us pal ko yad karta hain  jab usne mannvi ko chuwa hota hain  virat appne  hatho ko appne hot se chuta hainaur mannvi ka ashesaas mehesus karta hain aur dusri tarf mannvi vi  bs virat ko hi yad karahi hotain hain wo appne hatho se virat k kusbhu  smell karti  hain  par wo fir se hos

main aain hain aur kud se kheheain hain ( ye kya soch rahain mannu tu jannte hain  virat sirf aur sirf maya se pyar kara hain to plzz ye fajul ki batain dimag main ane mat de ) aur manvi k akhomain virat sang maya soch k asoo ajatain hain uder virat ko mannvi k baraim soch ain sochtain  nid nahi atain hain use mannvi ka pain yad ata hain

 

Next day

Virat  clg jata hain par mannvi clg nahai atain hain

 



Edited by NIVILOV - 08 June 2014 at 9:50am

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Next day  virat clg ata hain per manvi clge nahi atain  virat manvi ko group main dheta hain par sab  hotain hain par manvi nahi hotain hain , is  se virat paresan hojata hain wo bobby ko simmi k sah baat kar sunleta hain ki mannvi ko kal raat  ki baris main vig ne ki wajase uski taviyat tik nahi hain  is  liya wo  clg nahi aie hain ye sunk   virat  ka  man aur bechain  hojata  hain aur  wo  clg khata  hone k baad  sedhe  manvi  k pass  jata  hain aur  use  hostel  main  manvi  nahi  milti  warden  se  pata chalta  hain ki mannvi  mall  main appne  job  karne chali gie hain  aur virat  mall  jata  hain mall  main  manvi box utha rahi hotain  hain  ye  dhek k virat  manvi k pass  bhag  k jata  hain  aur  mannvi  ki help karta hain

Uske  baad  manvi  jor se  dhadta  hain

V = tabiyat tik nahi aur  tum  yaha  kam  karne  chali aie ?;0 ab chalo  tume main  hospital lejata hu

M= areee  virat  main tik  hu  mughe  halki si  jukam  hain  wo  main ne kal medicine le li  thi abbi  main  beter  hu

V= chup chap chaloo  nahi to utha k le jauga

(virat manvi ko appne  special doctor k pass   hain  aur dr cheek up kartain hain )

V=  dr auncle  manvi kaisy hain  I mean  ki pro ?

Dr= are nahi nahi nahi  virat baba   wo avi  tik hain bs  thodi  si  jukam hain  mene  medicine dedi  hai  sam ak  tik hojaigi

M= dheka  khama ka hi  tension letain ho  mene to pehele hi khaha ha  dr uncle  bt  ye mana hi nahi

V= tik tik  ab chalo

 (dusre din in mall )

Virat  car leke mall  jata hain

M= are virat tum yaha  office nahi jana hain kya  ajj tume ?

V=  mere  chodo  tum batao  ki  tum  kaisey  ho ?

M = tume  ne jo mera  itna  khayal  rhaka  to  mughe  to  tik  hona  hi  tha na  well  tq 4 that

V= are tq mat  kaho ager tum  karna  hi  chahatain  ho to  mere help  karo

M= ok kya help  batao

V= tik    hain main bata hu (virat manvi  ko soch (think ) k ) mughe  na  kisi  special  ladki  k liya  ek dress kharid ni hain  aur  mughe  us main  tumari  help  chahiya

M=  (mannvi  soch tain  hain  ki sayad  virat  maya  k liya  dress  gift  karna  chaha ta  ho )ooo ..!!!!!  bs itni si baat tik chalo  main  ek  bahut si pyari  dress  dheki  hain 

V= chalo

 ( mannvi virat  ko  ek  payri  si  dress  dhekhatain  hain virat  ko  wo  dress  bahut  pasand  atain  hain  wo  manvi  ko  us dress  main imagine karta  hain  hain  kush hotta hain )

M=( manvi  virat  k  muskuratain  cheherain  ki  araf  dheka  hain ) laga  hain  kisi  kisi  ko  ye dress  bahut  pasand  aie  hain

V = ya  ye dress  to  bahut  pyrai  hain  (virat  manger  ko  ye dress  pack  karne  ko  bolta  hain )

M=  sir prize tag  k barain main  bul  jayie  ye  jo mera  dost  hain  na  wo  bahut  amir hain  (haaa)

V=virat  manger ko  1 min  run ko  bolta hain aur  manvi  ki  tarf  dhek  k khehain hain ) manvi  ye  dress  ek  bar  try  karo na ?

M= ( manvi  hairan hotain hain ) par kyun ? ye  dress  tum  jis  k  liya  laya  ho  usi  ko  dedo ( virat  bolne  hi  wala  hota hain  par  manvi  virat  ko  rok  detain  hain ) pata hain virat  tum  ne  jo  last  time  ake  maya  k  liya  dress  kharidi  thi  wo  mera  fav dress tha  main  rojj appni  freetime  main main  us  dress  ko dhek ne  atain  thi par koi baat  nahi ( mavi  ki  batain  sunkar  virat  ko  bahut  bura  lagaa  hain  use  ye  lagata  hain  ki  virat  k  bajaise  mannvi  ki  sab  se  pyari  chiz  dur  hogaie tavi  manvi  virat  ko  dhemain  awazz  main  khehai  tain  hain)    pata  hain  virat  main  ne na wo dress  ek  bar  pehain  li  thi  chup  k say  aur aj  ak  kisi  ko pata v nahi  chala  (manvi  nughty wala look dhekar  hasatin hain )

V= sorry  manvi  mere  wajasay  tumari fav  chiz  tum  se  chin gaie

M= low  fir se sorry  aur  wo  mere  dress thodi  na  thi  wo to  mall  k mali kit hi aur  tum ne  thodi  na  churaie  thi  tum ne to kharaifdi hi wo dress  aur  har  wo chiz  jo hum  ko  pasnd  aie  thodi  na  hamri  honi  chahiya  wo  dress  maya  ki  kismet  main  thi  to  usko  mil  gae  sooo chill  aur  pata  hain  I  m 100% sure  ye  dress   v   maya  ko  bahut  suit karegi  

V=( virat  shock  hota hain ) maya? Manvi  maine  ye dress  tumarain  liya  kharidi  hain aur  tummm..!!!(tavi  maya  piche  se atain  hain aur  virat  ko  back  hug  karatain hain )

Ma=vsv tum yaha  wat a surprise ( maya  table main  rakhe hoya  us dress  ko  dhektain hain  jo  virat  ne  manvi  k  liya  kharidi  thi ) omg  vowww.!!! Kitani  pyari  dress hain  mere  liya  how  sweet of  u vsv

V= (virat maya ko kehain hi wala hota hain ) par maya  ye dress to..!!

M= ( maya ko dhek  k hastain  hain )  tume  acha laga pata  hain  virat  ne specially tumarain liya  ye  dress  kharidi hain  wo v 250000/- main  ur soo lucky  maya  virat lovs u soo  much (virat  manvi  ko  dheta  hain  aur  shock  hota hain )

M= I know manvi   o k vsv  I  have  2  go  kal  sam  ki  party  k  liya  mughe   kuch  ar  shopping karna  hain  byee  lov u

V=(virat mannvi  ki  taraf  thody  gusee aur  hairani  k sath  dheta  hain maya  chali  jatain  hain )  manvi  maine  wo  dress  tumarain  liya kharidi  thi  aur  tum ne  kyun  manvi  kyun ?

M=( manvi  virat  ki  taraf  dhetain hain )  janti  hu  par  mughe  wo  dress  nahi  chahiya 

V=  par  kyun ?

M= kyun  ki  mughe  kisi  ki    paise  so  se appne  sapne  nahi  kharid  ne hain

V= par manvi  main  kisi  gair  nahi  hu  main to  tumara  dost  hu

M = jaanti  hu  ki tum mere  dost  ho  isliya  plzz  plzz  mughe  yesay   chiz  kharid  k  mat  do  jo  main  le  nahi  saktain aur  main  gariv  jarur  hu  par  lachar  nahi hu  aur  us  gift  ki  hakdar  maya  thi  tumara  pyar  main  to  usk  baad  hi  huna so plzzz

(manvi  under mall  main  jane lagtain hain)

V= par. Manvi

M=   par war  kuch  nahi  virat  mughe   kisi  baat  yad  agaie  hum  anath  hain par  amiro  ko  loot gay  nahi cz  hume  anath  asram  main vi  sikaya  gaya  hain  ki  jab tak  tumarain  hath  pao  tik  hain   kisi  k  sammne hath  mat  failao 

(mannvi ki  batain  sun  kar virat  ko avhi  k gahr  main  viraT  ne jo  manvi  ki  baremain  bola tha   wo  yad  ata  hain   aur  virat to  regret fill  hota  hain  )

 

 

 Next day in college canteen

Manvi  canteen main dish saff karahi  hotain hain  tavi merry aunti  atain  hain aur  manvi  se  puchain hain

Merry aunty =me

Me= are sab sam  k party k liya bg  hain  aur  tumm avi  vi  yhahi  ho ?

M= aree  auntu  main thodi  na  jarahi  hu  party  main

Me=kyaaa? Kya  bolta  hain  tum  chokri sab  log  jarahin  hain  tum  ko  v  jane  ko  mantana  aree     tumara  umar  to  party  karne  ka  hain aur  tum  yaha  Cinderella k mafik  kam  karela  tum 

M=  main  kohi  Cinderella nahi  hu   nahi  mera  kohi  prince  chals  hain  jo mkughe  lene  ayaga  aur  ye  party  mere  bagair  v  to  chalegi  na  ( manvi  ye sab  baat  khehain  tain  time merry aunty ko nahi  dhektain hain )

Me= ( merry aunty samjatain  hain  hain  ki  manvi  ko  kohi  problem  hain )  manvi  my  child  merry aunty  ko  jhut  bolrahi  ho ? kyun ? ab  merry  aunty  ko  sab   baat  janee  ko  magta 

M=kuch  nahi  aunty  bs  jane  ka  man  nahi  hain

Me= ( manvi  ko apne  face 2 face kartain hain ) ab  bata  baat  kya  hain  aur mere  ko true baat magta  hain

M=( manvi  merry aunty  ko  jhut  nahi bol patain hain ) aunty wo wo  mere pass kohi  vi  ache dress nahi  hainm aur party  main to . (manvi appna  sir  ghukatain  hain )

Me= basss  itanai  baat  ok  canteen  baad  mereko  milna  tum ( merry aunty  jane lagatin hain  aur  fir  wapas  atain hain ) mere ko ek baat bata  tune  apnee  salary ka  kya  kiya?

M= wooo  aunty  maine   apni  salary se  simi  ko ek  ring  gift  kar di  kyun  ki  wo  hamesa  mere  barain main soctain  hain  aur  mughko  sab  dhetain hain too..

Me=(manvi  ko  pyar see  dhektain  hain aur  manvi  k  galo main apna  haath  se tauch  karatin hain  aur  smile karatin hain)

After 2 hrs 

Canteen ka  kam khatam  hone  k baad

In ,merry aunty z house

 

Me= aao  manvi  ye appna  chota  sa  ghar  hain  under  ao 

(Manvi  merry  aunty  k ghar  k  under atain  hain aur  sofe  main  bhaitain hain )

 Me=Tum  baito  main  thodi  der  main  atain hu    (merry aunty under  jatain  hain  aur  apne  sath  ek  dress  latain hain ) ye  dheko  mere  dress  hain  jab  main  16-17 ki  thi  na  i  mean  tumarain  umr ki  tab mere papa ne  mughe  gift  kiya  tha  tav  main  tumari taraha patli  hi  ab too

M= (manvi  dress  ko  apne  hath  main  lekain dhektain  hain  dress  bahut  beautiful hotain hain  manvi  wo  dress  bahut  pasand  atain  hain  aur  bahut  kush  hotain  hain ) bahut pyari  dress  hain aunty ye  to  bilkul  naya  jaisey  lagatin  hain 

Me= hain na  naya   jaisa  pata  hain  mere  papa  ki  special gift  hain jo maine  abtak  samkar  rhaki thi  ab ye  tumara  hogaya  hain

M=( manvi  k eyez se tear ane lagatain hain ) tq u aunty

Me= aree  rona  nahi  agar  mere  tumari tara  ek  beti  hotin  na  main  ye  use  detai  aur  tum  v mere bti  jaise  hona  ab  aj se  tumara ye

( dono  ek dusreain  ko gale miltain hain )

Me= chalo  ab jaldi se tayar  hojao  waisy  ajj  ye  dress main  tum ko  pehenatain  hu aur  dhekna  tum  is  dress  main  bilkul Cinderella  lagogi 

(Manvi  hastain hain )  

Scenes shift 2 party area

(Virat  bahar  get  main  manvi  ka  intajar  karraha  hota  hain tavi aven tanaya  k sah  ata hain )

Av= virat  tu  gate  main  kya  kar  raha  hain 0000 acha  maya  ka intajaar  horaha  hain aree  ajayagi  teson  mat le aur  ladkiyo  ko  sajne  save ne  main  thoda  time lagata hain  (tavi  Tanya  aven  ko bulati hain) aya  darlig  , chal virat  main  to  under chalta  hu  tu v  maya  ko  jaldi  le ke under  aja

(thodi  der  main maya  v ajatain hain )

Ma= ooo  vsv  ur  looking  sooo hansom  today  yaha  gate  me  mere  intajar kar rahay  tey na  tum how  sweet of u

V= ur looking stunning  as always

Ma=  I know  baby ab  chale  under ( maya  virat  k hath  kich  k under  lejatain hain)

(virat pice  mudkar  mavi ko  gate  main  dheta  hain par  manvi  nahi  aie  hoti  hain )

Under party hall  main sab  party  main  bg  hotain hain  virat  bar bar darwajain pe  dhekta  hain par manvi nahi  atain hain.  Virat  ka  man  manvi  ko  party  main  na  dhek  k baichain hone lagata  hain  thodi  der  baad  soyam  sharan, niks abhi , simmi v party  main atain hain par manvi  nahi  atain hain sab dance flow main jatain  hain maya  v virat  ko  kichtain  huway danceflow  main  lejatain  hain par  virat  dance  k  liya  inkar  karta  hain  aur dance  flow se  wapas  ata  hain  aur  bobby  v  akely  party  main  atain  hain ye  dhekar  virat  mayuss  hojata  aur  kud  ko  rok  nahi  pata  wo bobby  se  manvi  k  baremain  puchne  jata  tavi  simi bobby  se  baat  karne  lagtin hain

Si= bobby mannu  khaha  hain  wo to tere sath ane wali  thina ?

B= wooo mannu to  nahi  arahi ?

Si= kyaaa par  kyun ?

B= (bobby  ko mannvu ne juth  bolne  ko khaha  hota  hain  par  mannu  bobby  ko juth  nahi  bol batain  hain aur sach   bata  detain  hain ) use  party  main  ane ka  man to tha  per  b4ri k  pass ache   dress  nahi  thina  isliya  wo nahi aie 

Si= kyaaa? Main  avi  use  lene jatain  hu  wo    mughe  bol  saktain  thi  main  v party  main  nahi  atain   main  v mannu  k sath  rukti  (tavi  ek phone atain hain aur  simi phone main baat kar k kush  hotain hain ) chal  party karne bobby

B= bobby shock ) kyaaa per manvi

Si= manvi gie tel lene

(ye sab baat virat sunraha  hota hain aur  virat ko mannvi  k baraimain sunkar  bahut  bura  lagata  hain  cz  virat manvi  ko party main aspect karraha hota hain virat man vi man kud ko kosh raha hota hain = manvi kash main me us din abhi k ghar main  tumarain  barain main  wo words na nikaley ho tain  mannvi tumhe is party main  aneka  man tha  to  kyun  tum ne wo dress nahi li akhir kyun o god manvi  maine ye kya  kardiya  tume   L

 Scenes shift 2 merry aunty home  

Me= kisee  phone  kiya (mannvi k bal banatain huya)

M= wo simmi ko sayad  mere party main na hone se wo paresan hogie  hogi

Me= tumarin  dostin v kya  dosti  hain  bhagwan kismet walo ko yesi  dostin detain hain aur tum  un main ek ho  is frenship ko kavi mat khona 

M= ok aunty 

Me= lo gaye  tum  tayar     o  god tum  kitni pyari lagrai ho aj  to party  ki sare ladko  ka  dil  tum   ko  dhek  tain tej  honewaly hain ( manvi sarmatain hain ) lo ab sarmana  band karo aur jao party main

Manvi party main jatain hain

(scenes shift 2 party hall )

Virat  ko party main man  nahi lagra hain  wo  pass k chiar  main baitha hain  maya  virat  ko bulatain  hain par  virat   man nahi  kehain kar  sofe main baitha hain   Tanya  maya  ko kich k party  main  se bahar le jatain hain

M= kya hain bebs  ?

T=  maya  bebs  tumne  nahi  dhekha  ajj  wo gawar manvi  nahi aie  hain  ab hamarain  plan ka  kya  hoga

M= aj  nahi  aie  hain  to kal to jarur aygi na aur uski  kismet  uske  sath hain cz  ager  wo aj  ajatain  to us k liya ajj se  bura  din  aur kohi nahi  hota good luckkk :> (maya appne saitaini hase detain hain )

(Virat  waiter ko 1 glass   whisky  magata hain    aur tavi aven ajata  hain  )

Av= kya howa vsv ajj tu is party main hokar vi nahi hain akhir kyun ?

V= are  kuch nahi ajj mera mood kuch tik nahi hain

Av= (teasing way ) maya  ko bulau kyaaa ?

V=(virat  aven te tarf angry look deta hain )

Av= aree main bas ( tavi aven ki   najar    party hall ki darwaze par parta hain wo halke se utha hain  vir darwaje  virat k tik piche hota hain ) vowww   she god dam preety

 Clg k purain ladke  darwazee pe dhektain hain  sab ki mu khula huwa tha

B= ooo myy  god  manviii ur  jst look sooo preety

Manvi ka  naam sun virat  uthta hain aur diree se mudta  hain  manvi darwajain main khadi hoti hain hain aur wo bahut kubsurat lagrahi hototin hain   red dress  main manvi vi k kuley  woya julfee  jo halki  howa k bajayse  udrain hotain hain  virat bs manvi  ko dhekta  hi rehain jata  hain  manvi  virat  ki wor dhektain hain aur  virat manvi ki  taraf  ek chota  sa eve look hota  hain  tavi   mannvi  ko simi   kich k lejatain hain par virat  kin ajar  manvi  k us roop se hatain nahi 

Av= ooo god  ye to aj clg k purein  ladko  ko appna  diwana bana degi

V= (virat  aven  ko dheka  hain aur use   party  main lejata hain ) chal party karne

Av= kyaaa suddenly tera  mood  kaisey on hogaya   ?

V=(manvi ko dhekta hain  ) mere  mood  kisi  ki cherene leli hain   ajj

 

Tanya  aur maya  kuch  plan  karatain hain  aur  shaitani  hasi haian hain 

Bikky= god  is ko mainee  kaise  najarundazz  kardiya  god she is sooo  sexy n pretty (mannvi ki taraf dhek ke )

 

Si= manvi tu bahut payari lagrahi hain  aur ye dress ?

M= hain na preety mughe  merry aunty ne di hain

B= aj to clg ki purain ladko ki dhyan tere taraf hain  god mannu tune to aj maya aur nikki ko v top diya hain

(all three of them ar smlinig n laughing )

Virat   bar bar  manvi ko dhekta  hain aur  manvi k pass jane lagata  hain par har bar kohi na kohi   virat se baat karne ajata  hain  manvi virat ko dur se hi kehain ti hain  virat manvi ko dheke  smile deta hain   sab  danceflowr    jatain hain  sab appni apni patner k sath  dance flow main jatain hain  maya  v virat  ko kich k  danceflow main lajata hain par  virat  ka man  manvi k sath dance karna chaha ta  tha   manvi  k pass koi patner na hone ki  wojase  wo  simi aur boby  ek jagay  bhaita hain  bahut sare ladke manvi ko dance k liya  puch tain bt manvi  na kardetain hain tavi simi ka  ghar  phone ata hain

Si=   (bobby aur soyam ko bultain hain ) dheko main jarahi hut um dono  mannu ka khayal rhakna

B= par tu ja  kyun rahi ho

Si= wo ghar main die ma ki taviyat kharv ghai par  mannu ka  khyal rakhana ok byee

Bns= ok bye

 B0by mannu k pass wapas  se jatain hain aur soyam dance flow  main  Sharon k pass  mannu boby ko simi k barimain puchti hain  boby kuch argent kam ki wajasey  simi ghar chaligai khehaintin hain mannu bobby aur apne liya drine lene jata jatain hain  aur 2 glish cold drink ka odder detain hain tavi mannvi ko akely pa k bikki manvi k pass  ata hain

Bi= hi baby  ur loking sooo hot today

M= ji ?

Bi= I mean  kya hum se  dance karogi

M= nahi   mughe jana hain   ( manvi drink  na leke yashehi jane lagtain hain  par  bikki  ab batmiggi karne lagta hain )

Bi= hey !! common baby  jst 1 dance ( bikky  manvi ka  hath pakadta hain aur jor se dabata hain )

M= plzzz leave me  mughe jane do plzz

(ye sab virat dhekleta  hain aur us ka  para chadjata hain wo  use manvi ko yesay  bikki  ka  chuna  pasand nahi ata  wo  side  jata hain aur vikki ko ek paunch marta hain  aur bikki sedhe  jamin pe girta hain )

V=(in full anger) tere himat kaisey hue mannvi kchne ki . sayad us din ka mar bhul gaya  hoga  kyun ?

Bi= dhek vsv  tere pass to maya hain na ab mannvi mughe de de aur  u v maza loot aur ma vi

V=(virat  fir se muthi  banata hain aur vikki ko  marne lagta hain par manvi piche se virat ka baju pakad ta hain  aur marpit na karne ka isara deta hatin hain  manvi ki akho main virat  manvi ki akhomain dheta hain  aur bikki ki tarf dheke ) ajj k liya bach gaya  tu

 

Bikki  chala jata  hain aur virat manvi ko dheta  hai aur manvi virat ko aur hsatain hain

M= tume kitni jaldi gusha ata hain virat? Hamesa  marpit main lagey rehain te ho apne app ko ramboo  samjtain hokya ?

V=   nahi tune dheka na  wo tumse kya karraha tha ?

M= agar  mughe  kuch v kare to kyaa tum sab ko martain chalogay kya ?

V= (manvi ki akho main dhek kar) hath lagar to dhekay tumain main us k hath kat daluga

(manvi virat k akho main kud k lieya panptain ek ajiv si   ahaisas ko mehainsus kartin hain ) 

M= virat  hyper mat ho aur tq soo much 4 saving me  (manvi jane lagtain hain virat manvi ka hath pakad leta hain )kya huwa virat ???

V= (virat manvi ko upper se niche tak dhekta hain aur  smile kar k kehainta hain )

Ur looking sooo pretty 2 day . sach kahu to ajj is party main  tum  sab se jyda kubsurat lagrahi ho

 

M= o really tq soo much but I must say  tum vi  bhahut dashing lagrahain ho

V, = tq  aaa. Woo  tum ( tavi maya stage main announcement  kardetain hain that aj  party main ek game  hoga that is Cinderella ,s missing  shoes  jis main sari ladkiyo ka  shoes  ek place main  jama kardiya  jata  hain aur  ladko ko   shoes  lena padta hain aur  jis  ladki ka  shoes ho us ladki k sath  ek paper dance karne ka mauka  milta  hain >>>>>  sab ladkiya apna apna  shoes  flow main  rak detain hain aur  bobby v jaberjasti  mannu ka ek shoes  flow  main rakdetain hain aur  sab ladke including  virat also mannvi ka shoes dhune main lagjatain hain aur coincidently  jo shoes virat ko mila hota hain wo manvi ka shoes hota hain  n sab istara se pair bantain hain

1.Virman

2.nikki abhi

3. maya bikki

4.Soyam Sharon

5. Tanya aven

Istara  se  10  jodiya game k liye participated hotain hain

Manvi  thoda  hizchikichatain hain (uncomfortable ) fill kartain  hain  virat k sath dance karne main magar  virat  manvi se dance karne ka mauka  gumana  nahi chahata hain  isliya   wo  manvi ko paper dance k liya    manta hain aur wo virat k bato  ko na nahi kehepatain hainaur dance flow main jatain hain 

Music start hota hain Sab apne apne partner k sath dance karne lagtain hain  1 round  paper bada hone ki ojaisy   manvi aur virat alg alg  dance karatin hain music stop hota  hain  ab  1.Virman

2.nikki abhi

3. maya bikki

4.Soyam Sharon

5. Tanya aven

 Baki hain    5 cupple out hogaya hain  2nd round  paper fold karke  chota hogaya  hain  music start  is bar manvi aur virat  thode najdig agaya hain  par  there body is not touching each other bt  virman ek dusrey  ki akho main akhey  dal ke dhekrain hain  music stop ab   1.Virman

3. maya bikki

4.Soyam Sharon

Baki  hain 3  cupple  3rd round k liya  paper fold karke aur chota kardiya jata hain 

(Now their body touching eachother ) ab virat manvi k badan ek dusre ko chune lagatahey aur jiski wajain say manvi  ko thodi si saram ane lagai thi to virat manvi ko chune ka ahainsaas karne laga tha  virat  manvi ko thodi si saram ane lagai thi to virat manvi ko chune ka ahainsaas karne laga tha  virat  manvi apne karb rakne k liya uske kamar pe hath rakne hi wala hota hain par music stop  aur manvi  paper se baha  atain hain

Ab

1.Virman

4.Soyam Sharon

Sirf 2 jodiya baki hain

4rd round start  paper fold karke aur jyada chota kardiya hain  ab sirf virat ya manvi  pair hi raksaktain hain

M= virat ye to bahut chota hain hame ye game chodena chahiya (manvi jane lagtin hain vira manvi ka hath pakad leta hain )

V= manvi plzz  ab hum jeet se kuch kadam hi dur hain plzzz mera sath nahi do gi

Manvi  virat k  akhomain dhek k khojatain aur fir wapas atain hain is bar virat k pairo k upper manvi ka pair hain aur virat manvi ki kamar jor se pakad ta hain aur manvi virat ko jor se pakdtain hain  dono hi heavily saas lerain hotain hain  virat manvi ki akho main dhekta hain aur  manvi v virat k nasily akhomain kojatatain hain virat  hole se manvi ki hoto ko dhekta hain  manvi ki hot  virat k dkhene se kamne lagtain hain  manvi appni akhain band kartain hain virat manvi k hot chom(kiss) ne ki koshih karata hain par music stop 

Manvi saram se pani pani hochuki hain aur  uder  virat ko manvi ko chuna acha lagraha hain  now it,s time 2 final round  ab paper aurjyada chota hogaya hain  aur music start hota hain

M=(manvi  saram  k wajausey  kel ko chod k janae lagtin hain par virat  us apni  baho main  uthata hain ) vir..viraaattt plzz mughe chodho  mughe nahi khelni hain  ye game

V=   nahi  ab to ye game jeetna hi padega cz ab ye  game nahi  VSV  ki izzat ka sawal hain

M= magar.

V= manvi when virat is here not 2 fear

Virat manvi ko appni bahmain  uthata  rehain ta hain  aur  last main  game win kartain hain

M=( manvi kushi mare  virat ko jor se hug karti hain ) J yeee  hum jeet gaya

Virat manvi ki  chehere ki muskan  dheta reahain ta hain aur manvi ko dhek ke kush hota hai 

 

Dusri tara maya

 M= haslo manvi ji ver k has lo  kya pata kal tumari ye hasi rahain na rahin  kyun  ki  jo  ajj  tumarain sath hoga  use  tum  jindagi  bar  nahui bulo giii  ha ha ha ha ( maya  apne app se baat kartin hain aur ek saitani hasi hasti hain )

 

 

 

hi guyzz i m updateing my next part hope u like it n plzz don,t cry ok he he

 

 

 Party main sab  apne apne dhun main mast hotain hain  party v rocking tarik se chalraihain  sab party main bg hotain hain tavi virat manvi ko kich  k lejata hain M= khaha lejarain ho virat  mughe ??V=Are tum chalo to sahiParty main sav apne main mast hone ki wajasiy  virman ko kohi  v jatain huway nahi dhektain hain  virat manvi ko clg k tersest pe lejata  hain   M= virat hum yaha upper chat pe kya  kar kahain hain chalo niche  party karne ( manvi jane lagi hain par virat manvi  ka hath pakad ta hain )V= kyun mere  sath dar lagraha  hain  ?M=dar??  Tum kohi sher ho jo mughe khaja o gay . dare mare juti  ( manvi virat k sath thodi duri bana kar bahiti hain ) loo ab batao kya  baat karni hain ?V=( manvi ki batain sunkar virat hasta hain ) acha ye batao manvi tum clg k kitani ladkiyo ko jaantin ho ?M= ( manvi virat k taraf  hairain se badi badi akain banakar dhektain ahi aur halk se smile kartain hain ) kya baat hain virat  tersest  Akeley  lakar  ladkiyo ki  bare main  kub  jyada puchtaz  horahi hain    huu?  Maya  ko bat du ??/ V= aree nahi  nahi  tum  galat  samjrahi ho  manvi main to  islliya puchraha hu  taki main usladi ko dhud (find) saku  ?M= kis ladki ki baat kar rahin ho ?V= wohi ladki jis  ki awazz  ka  main  diwana  hogaya  hu  kya  gatain  wo ladki  tum  jaantin ho kyaa?  Use M= ( manvi dar jatain hain  ) aree  nahi  nahi   main  us ladki  ko nahi jaanti hu  aur  tume  wo ladki  kyun  chahiya  cz   tum  itana  acha  gatain  hoto  V= aree  tume  pata  nahi  > humarain  clg  se  hum  Mumbai  every  year  singing  computation main jatain hain har saal    main  jeet ta  hu par  is  baar  se  duet  main  gana  padega  so  I need a  singing partner n agar  wo ladki  mughe  mil gie  to  I m defiantly  sure  that  is baar  v hamara  clg  hi  wo trope jeetaga  soo  that M= ooo to yesi baat  hain V= yes  tum v  kuch v samjleti ho M=  sorry  main  v kitani  bhudu hut um  to  maya  k  alawa  kisi k  bare main nahi soch tain ho  ( manvi  virat k tarf  nahi dhek k bolti hain ) main us ladki ko nahi  janti  hu  a. virat  pata  tumehain  V=kya ? M=main na   is clg  main  ane se pehely  hi  jaanti thi   V=( thoda hairni k sath ) achaa  wo kaisay ?M=  last  year  jab tum  rishikesh  aya they na  INTER COLLEGE SINGING COMPITION main   part lene  tav  main v gae  thi  us  compition main  tavi  see  main tumari  diwani  ban gaie  ( manvi  virat  ko  apna   pair  ka  chot  dhikha kar ) pata  hain  main tume  milne aur congratulate  karne  arahi thi tav  mughee itna hos nahi raha ki mere pao main  ye chot lagaya V= (virat  manvi k baatain sunkar  thoda udash hojata hain aur manvi k pair ko apne  hath main leta  hain ) manvi  tum v na   kya  jarurat  thi  yesay  mere piche  bhagne  ki  kya  jarurat  thi   aur tum  us  competition main part lene gaie  thi  it means that  tum v gatain ho ?? :0?M=  ( mavi  mehesus kartain hain  aur  niche dhektain hain aur  man main  o god ye main kya bol gie)   aree  nahi nahi wo to main whaha   competition dhekne  gie thi  aur   tav  se   main na   tumarain  gane  ki fan ban gie  thi   is lya V= ooo   humee  pata  hi nahi tha  ki  itani  kubsurat  ladki  mere  gane  ki fan hain M= ( manvi  sarmatain  hain )  virat  hume  niche  jana  chahiya  party main  ( manvi  uth k jane lag ti hain par virat  manvi ka hath  pakad  k use apni  wor  kichta  hain aur manvi  virat  k upper  gir jatain hain ) kya  kartain  ho virat dheko main gir gaie na (manvi ko  pata  hi nahi hain ki virat  uski wo dhekrhaha hain )V=  mannvi  ur sooo  beautiful n(  virat manvi k  cheherain ko nihartain(admiring ) huway  manvi v ye baat  sunkar virat k tarf dhekti hain par kuch nahi bolti hain aur uthne lagti hain aur dono sath main uthey hain )M= virat  hum me jana  chahiya  ( manvi jane lagtin hain virat fir manvi ka hath pakad ta hain  aur  halke se use k hath main  chum (kiss)ta  hain  manvi  ko jor se akhein band kartin hain  virat manvi  k piche se  najdik ata hain aur  manvi ki kamar (waist) jor se pakad ta hain aur uske gale(neck) main  jor se chum ta  hain aur  manvi  virat k is ahaiesaas (felling ) ko mehaisus karti hain aur   aur  piche mud k   virat  k baho main simat jatin hain virat manvi  k  komal bandan k  kushoo ko shugta (smell) hain aur  usk piche hise main(back) apna hath  ko rakta hain ur apne wor jor se kichne l;agta hain  manvi apne  akhein band kratin hain aur  virat  manvi  k mathey  (forehead) main chumta hain aur  hole se niche  manvi k (lip) hot k taraf kiss karne jata  hain  tavi  manvi    hos  main atain hain aur  virat k chati (chest) ko jor se apne se alag kartain hain ) plzzz virviraaatt  ye galat hain  hmee yesa nahi karna chahiya ]V=(  manvi niche jane lagtin hain par virat  manvi ki tarf dhek k khehain ta hain ) kyat um apne app ko mere hawaly karna nahi chaha ti kya  mere chune se tume kuch ahaisaas nahi hota kyun mere kareb ane se tumari dil ki dhadkan tej hojatain hain kyun  mere tumarin hot ko dhek ne se tumarin hot kapne lagjatain hain  kyun  mere body  main lagay ek kharoch se tumarain khaomain ashoo ane lagtain hain kyun  agar yesha hain to kyun tum kud ko mere hawalay  nahi kardetain kyun ?  M=( manvi virat k  ye sab baat sun kar rok nahi patain hain aur virat ko back hug kartain hain  aur boltain hain ) plzzz virat  tum kuch v karsaktin  ho virat main  tumari  hu  bs tumari  mere  atama  mere sarir (body) mere hare k saas tumari hain  plzz virat  tum mughe chulo  mughe  tumari banna hain plzz plzz ( manvi  apne app ko puri tara  ha virat ko  swop detai hain  aur virat vi manvi  ki  khubsurati  dhek k kud  ko samal  nahi pata  is liya  manvi ki komal badan (body) ko kiss karana  suru kardeta hain  virat  sab se peahaily manvi vi k lip ko kiss karna  surukarta hain  aur  manvi  vi k komal lip ko suck  karta hain  virat ka yeasy kud ko  chuna aur kiss karna manvi ko  acha lagta hain  virat ka kiss mainvi k  komal badan main  senselessly kiss karna suru kara hain aur manvi vi same way replie detin hainVirat ka kissing speedily increase hota jata hain   virman k kiss pe break lagatin hain aur  vrat manvi ko appni baho main utha k  shath waly  kapde ki ghadee  suladeta hain aur  fir virat manvi k upper se fir manvi  ko kiss karna start karta hain vairat manvi k khule huway galay(neck) main  kiss karta hain aur suck karne lagta hain manvi vi  virat k yesy kiss  karne  se  apne akhein band kartin hain aur virat k balo ko apni  umliyo(finger) se sehelatain hain  virat  ko manvi ka badan ko yesay  kiss karna  acha lagraha hota hain aur  wo  manvi  k chest  k part  ko kiss  kata hain aur  virat k kud ko yesay kiss  karne ki wojaisy  ji kisam ki  manvi awaz  nikal rahi hotain hain  us  se  virat  manvi  ko pyar karne k liya aur   hungry aur wild ban rhaha hota hain  virat fir se manvi k matahey ko slowly kiss karta hain aur  apni nose se manvi ki nose ko tauch karta hain aur  virat manvi ki captain huway  ho ko  dhekta hain  manvi  virat  k yesay appni  hot (lip) ko  dhekne ki  wajasey sarm se pani pani hoti hain  virat  kud ko  control   nahi karpata  hain aur  manvi k lip ko kiss  karne jata hain  manvi  saram k wajaise  uth  jatain hain  virat  vi  piche se akee manvi  k  komal pet (stomach) ko jor se dabata  hain aur appni wor kichta hain  aur manvi k  hot ko kiss karata hain aur manvi k hot ko suck karne lagta hain  dono virman ek dusrain main  pyar karne main bg hotain hain  virat ko manvi ki hot ka taste se mitha  asesaah  deraha tha  virman  kiss  aur jyada hot n passionate horaha tha virat yesay kiss karni ki wajasee puri taraha madahos hogaya tha to dusri taraf  manvi  virat k yesay  kud ko kiss karne ki wajasy  hos main nahi thi par tavi  Piche se (back ) maya aur Tanya  ajatain hain maya  jor tin bar clap karti hain Ma= whoa- wha wha  manvi  kyaa baat  hain  mere bf k sath yaha   chat pe akaely main ragraliya manarahi ho   M= ( maya  ko dhek k manvi v k hos  udjatain hain aur wo  scenes' main ajatin hain par virat avi vi manvi ke lip ko kiss karha ha hota hain manvi virat ko joor se  apne app se alag kartain hain) mayawoo hum ..

 

 

Ma= han manvi main sun rahi hu aur dhek v rahi hu  bolo kya bolna hain ( maya Tanya ko isara detain hain  aur Tanya niche jatain hain ) Manvi virat k taraf dhektain hain virat v manvi v ki taraf dhekta hain   manvi ki akose  asu ane lagtain hain   tavi  Tanya  niche se  clg main patry ,ain aya huway sab students  ko upper latain hain sab student  upper virman ko sath yasy hal main dhek k shock hojatin hain manvi itain sare logo ko dhek k aur dar jatain hain aur virat ka hath jor se pakad letain hain aur  usk  piche  chuptin hain Ma=(virat ko dhektin hain aur hastin hain  ) tq vsv aj tum ne is ladki  asliyat saree  clg k same ladiya tq soo much  Manvi  virat ki taraf shock hokar dhektain hain  aur  use  kuch samj main hi nahi ata hain hi akhir ye kaya horahain   tavi virat ka phone ata hain aur wo phone pick up karne jata hain  panvi virat ka  hath pakadti hain aur virat piche mud k dhekta hain aur manvi k  bebass ahkee virat ko sahara  magrahi hotain manvi  kuch nahi boltain hain par fir v uski ashu see  bare akhee virat  ko  manvi chod k najane k liya kheherain hotain hain  phone  fir bajata hain aur is baar varat  manvi  ki  hatha jor se jhakata hain aur  phone pick up karne jata hain  ab manvi  us vid main  kud ko akeli patain hain aur jydaya  dar jatain hain  aur  jane lagti hain par maya  manvi k hath kich k  jor appni  taraf  latain hain aur jor jor de boltain Ma= khaha  jarai ho hu ??  ab  jab  tumara  khel  khaam  hogaya to  bhagrahi  ho huu ?Dheka  frenz  ye hota hain small town low class  ladkiyo ki  fitrat scholarship k bahane aleg jaisee bade aur high clg main admission lo aur vsv jaisy  amir ladko ko fasaoo aur  is ladki ne to had kardi hain kuch nahi huwa to isne apni boddy se hi  vsv ko appni tarf  attracts karne ki koshis ki   yesay  ghatiya tarik se  se vsv ko fasay  thodi saram waram   naam chiz  k hain ki nahi huu ?Manvi  kuch v nahi  bol parahi thi  maya ki every word manvi to  heartily pain derain tey  manvi  vid  ki taraf  dhek  v nahi parahi thi   manvi aur jor jor se  rone lagati hain  maya   manvi k najdik  jake  dhimee awazz main khehaitin hain(MA= dheka manvi tum ne us din mall main itanin saree logo k samne mera mazzak udaya tha  mere insult  kit hi na ab  dheko main uska  revenge kaisey luga  tume is clg to kya is city main  v raena muskil kar dugi samje tum ) maya  k baatain sunkar manvi shock hojatain hain  M= maya  us din  tum ne galati ki  aur  uski  sazza  ye sabb  aur virat ?? Ma= maine galti nahi ki  thi galati  tumne  ki  thi  mere insult kar k aur  tume pata  hain  tume  friendship  karne  k  liya v main hi vsv se kaha  tha   kyun ki  main  chaha tit hi ki  wo  tum  se  frenship kare aur  mera  insult ka revenge le aur  us ne  yahi  kiya  aur  tume  kya  lagata hain hu  tum  jaise  sadak chap orphan ladki se  vsv jaisa ladka  sapne main v mat soch na ye Maya ki batain sunkar  manvi ko  shock  hajati  hain  use  yesha  lagata hain ki kisi ne use  khai main  dhakl diya hain manvi  ki  akhomain  aur  jyda  asu anee lagtain hain aur wo rone lagatin hain 

 

 

Ma=(Maya  jor se bolti hain) dheka guyzz  is  bole pan k piche  kita bada  nakap  chupa huwa hain  Vid main  sab  manvi ko gali aur tane  marne lagtain hain S1=  o my god  dhikne main to  itani  shedi lagti hain au risk pice yeha chera S2= aree  yesi ladki ko to clg se nikal dena chahiya Yesy yesy batain manvi  ko sune padtain hain jo main vi k dil ko aur jyada dhuka rahin they tav maya manvi k najdik ake apne mobile dhekhatain hain ur uspe  virat aur manvi k sath kuch time pehaily jo kuch v huwa  uska maya ne mms banaya  hota hain par is mms main  virat k kahaye huya sab  baatein kata kar sirf manvi plzzz virat  tum kuch v karsaktin  ho yaha se suru hota hain  ye  dhek k manvi ki akhin fati ki fati rehain jatain hain )Ma= tume dheka na manvi mainee ye sab  kiya hain aur meraa 1 button dabane sey tumari  puri life spoil hojaygi to kyat um ye chhatain ho M= plzzz no maya plzz I m begging u  yeha mat karo  mere life barbaad  hojaygi  plzzMa= ok par  mere ek sart  hain  yhaha  purein  student k samne  tume  mere  pair  pakad k  apologize karna hoga   aur plzzz jaldi  wo  kya  hain  mughe  bahut  need arahi hain aur mere pass time nahi soo M=( manvi  bebass  hotin hain aur  bahut  ashu  bahatain hain  aur maya  k pair  pakad  k mafia magtain hain ) sorry mayaUsk  baad  sab  log chale jatain  hain maya manvi  ki taraf  evil eyez banakar  hasstin hain  aur  manvi  apni  hath  se  apne  face ko cover kark rotain hain  Ma== ooo  poor manvi  tum  kitani  bholi ho  tum ne maya  ki baat  ka yakin karliya  M=( manvi  maya  ki  taraf   shock ho kar dhektin hain  aur maya  mms ka send klarne ka button tyurn kardetin hain ) maya  tum  ne  mughe  dhoka  diya  u cheat me maya Ma= maya  se panga  liya to  jurwana to  barna  padega  (maya  devil  hasi hasti hain aur  us jagay se jatain hain ) Manvi  apni  ghutno  k ball bait k rotai  aur  chilatain hain tavi  bobby aur  soyam ajatain hain  B= kya huwa mannvi   kyun ro rahi ho kya huwa?M=( manvi bobby ko jor se pakad tain hain aur rotain hain aur  jo  kuch  v huwa  sab bobby aur soyam ko bata detain hain aur soyam  aur  bobby  milke  mannu ko hostel lejatain hain  mannu raat ver  jo virat aur maya ne  usk sath  kiya  usko  soch  k rotain hain ) Scens shift 2 virat Virat in nikks house Nikkis  akely  saman  pack kartain  hoya  rorahi hiotain hain ye  dhek k virat  nikki k pass ata hain aur kya huwa kekar puchta hain nikkis  abhi aur  simmi  k ristaiy ki wajasey kuch prob  horahihain bata ti hain  nikki  virat se puchti  hain ki akhir simmi  abhi  ki servent  hokar v abhi kyun  use itna imp deta hain is baat se nikki thodi  hurt hoti aur virat  se hug kar k rotain hain  virat  ko simmi par  aur gusha  ata hain 

 

 

Next day Bobby hostel se simi ko cal karatin  aur  jo  kuch  v kal raat huwa wo sab simmi ko bata ti hain simi  gushee se laal  hojatain hain aur clg jatain hain  sab pool room main hotain  hain  virat k group sab  S= (simi shede virat pass jatin  aur virat ek jor ka  thapad (slap) marti hain aur  virat ki shirt k color pakad k ghesay  main puchti hain) tumariii :@ himat  kaisay  huwe  manvi  chune ki huu ?V= virat  manvi  k bare  main bhuljata  hain aur  nikkis k baraim  yad  karta hain  aur  simmi  se gushee main chillata hain ) how dare u huuu ?  tum ne  mughe  thapad  mara?S= han main ne tume sirf  thapd mara    tu  tumne  kiya hain na  usk liya to  tume  goli  marde ni  chahiya V= 0000 to tum kal raat  ki baraim main  baat  karhi ho   soo  sune  main manvi  ko nahi  khaha tha  wo  kud appni mar ji se  mere sath sam na tum  aur pata tumein  ( virat  bhul se fir  simmi ka  gusha manvi  k naam se nikal ta hain ) aur tum  jaisey small town  gawar  ladkiya  hamesa  amir  ladko  ko fasatain hain aur nahi  fasa to  apne  body ka use kartin hain  jo  manvi  ne kyat ha S= (chilatain hain ) viraaatV= chillane se sach  jhut nahi  hojata hain  aur  jo  tum log  karhain hona  clg  ki  environment ko ghanda kar  rahain ho  blade orphannn S= viraaattt ( simmi ye word  sun nahi  sakti hain aur virat ko jaor se k  aur  thapad  martain hain)A=( virat ko yesay  thap martain huya  dhek abvi  gushee se laal hota hain aur simi  dhata hain ) how dare u simi  tume  mere  dost pe hath uthaya  . Avi kavi  virat se mafee mago  S= par abhi  tume dhekana  ki usne mannu k sath kya kiya  A= I don,t care abt mannvi par tume  virat se avi mafi magni hogi  say sorry 2 him S= no abhi  main  ye  nahi  karugi no never A= ( abhi aur  jyada gusha  hota hain aur ) iska  matal hain kal agar main tum se ye khehedu kit um mere life  chali jao to tum nahi  jaogi S= abhiiA= ys simmi  tumarain  mind main  vi  yehi  chal raha hain na ki tum vi  mere paisey ko hadpna  chahati ho (ye sunkar  simi ki akhee  ahsuoo se bharjata hain  wo abhi se yasi baat aspect nahi karrahi thi  ys sab  baat mannvi  darwazee k bahar se sunrahi  hotin hain aur  manvi  ko  virat  k  bato se  bahut  taklif  horahi hoti hain  manvi  k akho see  ashu  beherain hoi hain wo darwazee k bahar se  simi ko virat se sorry  khehene k liya  sms karti hain aur simi sms padti hain aur  darwazee k bahar apnne eyez vare  ashu letain huya  manvi ko dhekti hain manvi  bahar se israin main  plzzz khehainti  hain aur  simmi  appni  akhomain ashuu  letain huya ) sorry V= wo main  kuch suna nahi  thodi  uchi bolo S= (virat ko  akhey  dikatain hain aur  jor se sorry  bolti hain aur  bahar  jane lagti hain  aur  fir wapas atain hain ) virat  main  tume  bad  dua  detin hu  ki  jist tara ha manvi ne tumarin pyar  kar k sirf  dard  mila hain  na  usi  taraha  tume  v  manvi  se  pyar  ho aur  tum  v  usi tara ha pyar k liya tadpo  yr  mere baduwa hain    Usk baad  simi  jatain  hain A= virat tu plz simmi ki bato ka bura mat maan tu  to  janta  hain ki us manvi  k  sagat  k cz se  simi  yasi  huie hain I jst hate that manviV= ( virat manvi  k bare  main yeshi  baat  sunkar  gusha  hota  hain aur wo  abhi ko  jabaf  denehi  wala hota hain  tavi  use  mumbie se phone ata hain  aur  use  pata  chalta  hain ki uski  mom bimar hain aur use yad karhain hain  virat tavi  mumbe k liya  nikalata hain ) Idar  manvi  class room main  enter kratin hain  class k saree  student use  dur  jake bhaitain hain manvi k sath walee  main bobby simmi aur soyam baithe hain  tavi unlogo ko ye pata chal ta hain hain ki wo mms saree clg k student k hath main par chukka hain   . use class k bich bich main  gande gande sms  ane lagatin hain  aura gay black board main vi manvi denoted karke gane gade  tasbir banadetain hain is se mannvi  tut chuki hoti hain  wo bhahar  jane  lagatin hain aur tavi  kuch ;ladke  manvi ko darwaze pe hi rok  detain hain aur  use  ched ne lagtain hain ye sab  manvi k bardash k bahar  hone lagay  tey  manvi durd k wash room jane lagti hain aur tavi  bikki aur  kuch ladke manvi ko  rok detain hain Bi= ooo  kya huwa  kal to kub virat virat kar rahi thi ajj khaha gaya woo M= dheko mughee   janee  do  nahi  to main  chilaugi Bi= chilao gi chilo nahi nahi chilo  ab tumari baat ka kaun biswas karega hu ??M= plzzz dheko  plzzz mughe janee do (manvi rone lagtain hain tavi bikki apna  mobile nikalta hain aur kal rat ki mms dhikata hain )Bi= janee dhuga  par  mughe v na tumarein sath yesha hi karna hain  dheko  main  tume  vsv ki taraha  dhoka nahi  dhuga aur nahi free of cost hoga  tum jo chaho  wo  main tume diladuga pr ..M= (manvi dar k mare rone lagati hain  aur simmi ko jor jor se chilak  pukarti hian  aur baghne klagati hain ) bachooo simmii . Plzzz somebody help me Bi= ( par bikki manvi ki hato ko kiche apne taraf lata hain aur usk sath jabber jasti karne  ki koshish karta hain ) vsv kare to sab tik aur main karoo to( tavi bahar se soyam aur bobby atain hain  aur  soyam  manvi ko bobby k sath vejta hain aur bikki ko bahut marta hain tavi simmi atain hain  manvi  simmi ko jor se hug kartain hain aur rotain hain  simi ko tav pata chalata  hain mms k barain main aur  simmi bobby aur soyam se mms ko rokne ka idea magtain hain  aur tavi soyam ek Virus  charge kardeta hain  jis ki wajaisey wo mms ek bar pura khulega uske baad jis ka mobile ya laptop hain wo hand hojaya ga yesay  wo   manvi is mms k chakar se to nikal le ti hain par use sar aur bada musibat padewali hotain hain Scens shift 2 Mumbai Vaderaz house V= ( vansika mom k kamarain jata hain ) momVm= ( vm apnee bed main sorahi hotain hain ) aree virat  tu kab  aya     V= aree main abhi aya app k bare  main   tarun bhaiya ne khaha tha  ab to ghar k log v mughe yad karna  chodiya hain  mere mom  bimar hain aur  ye  khaber v mughe  servent milti hain Vm= nahi virat bau ji to chahatain tey  tumee  batana  par  main hi nahi  chahati thi kyun ki  tumrain  padaie aur pura karobar  chod k  sirf  mughse  milne  ahir kyu aye hooV= ( virat emotional  hojata hain)  mom  papa  k bad app to ho mere pass maine papa ko to kho diya ab app ko nahi kho sakta hu main  ab jab tak app tik nahi hojatain main yahi rahuga Kc= hie ni virat tusi agya ho  ab  bhavi jaldi se tik hojayagi Tarun= virat baba  ye  ma ji ki dabaie V= tq tarun biya 

 

 

    Virat  apna chndigargh ka  business  Mumbai se hi samal raha hota hain  sath main use manvi ki bahut yad arahi hoti hain ,  

 

 

Scenes shift 2 chandigargh Next day in clg Manvi  apne icha na hotin nahote vi  bobby k sath clg  jatain hain aur ajj v kal ki taraha  clg main  sab  us se  bura bartav kartain hain  manvi  ko ye sab bahut bura lagraha hota hain tavi  eco teacher manvi ko apnee room main  bulatain hain aur manvi  teacher k room main  jatain hain aur  wo  teacher v manvi k sath batamezi karne lagta hain aur manvi apne app ko bachane k liya jor se chilatai hain  aur waha se bagtain hain aur simi k pass jatain ahin aur ye sab baat rotain howay sab khehain tain hain  simi  manvi  ko le ke principle k pass  jatain hain aur  us teacher k kilap action lene k liya boltin hain  par wo teacher ulta manvi k barain main ulta ulta bolta  hey aur manvi ne kud  us teacher k sath  jabar jasti ki hain keheta hain aur wo mya Tanya aur 3-4 student ko  manvi k against khada karta hain aur principle v us teacher ki baat ko sahi thanta hainP= dheko manvi hume socha tha kit um padaie main bahut achi ho ahee saskar hain tumarin par jo indino is clg main tumarin cz jo horaha hain  us k  cz se tume 2 weeks k liya rusticate kiya jata hain aur tumri  scholarship radha kiya jata hain aura b jab 2 weeks k baad jab tum yaha padne ana chaha ti ho to tume v auro student ki taraha  fee bhugane pade gaS=( manvi ye baat sunkar shock hojatain hain aur kuch nahi bol pati hain par simi appni mannu k liya kuch v karsakti hain ) sir     ye to galat hain mere mannu ka koie dos nahi hain plzz sir plzzz  bobby simi ko kichtain huway bahar latain hain  Manvi  roti vi nahi nahi hastai hain woe k sur se  agey  clg se bahar jatain hain ) manvi manvi  main  hu na tu teson mat le main hu ok manvii . Tu kyun kuch bolti nahi kyun ??Tavi merry aunty atain hainMe= simi   main jannti  hu  yhaha  is  poor girl ko  insaf nahi mila  tu tesan mat le  me is  bachee ko mere ghar main rhake ga  Si= tq aunty  tq sooo much ( manvi bs chup chap apna saman pack kartin hain aur atomain  baith hain simmi v mannvi ko merry aunty k ghar chod detain hain )Si=  manvi dhek tu teson mat main huna   main sab tik kardugi manvi  tu kuch bolna  ( simi rotin hain ) plzz kuch bolna manvi plzzz ( manvi shock mood main nahi hasti hain nahi roti hain bs chup chap bhaitain hain )Me= simi  bchee avi tume janeko manta  main hain na iska khaya rakne ke wastay Si= aunty pl zap mere mannu ka khaya rakha plzz ( simi  jatain hain  merry aunty manvi ko bed me lejatain hain aur suladetin hain ) song Manvi  uth k  wash room main jatain hain aur bahut rotain hain wo simmi ko bahut yad kartain hain aur usk baad virat ko aur khetain hain M= manvi tere jina uar marna ek hi jaisha hain ab tu kyun kjiya gin a tu wapas rishikesh jasak ti hain na tu yhaha chandigargh main rehain saktin hain , tera is duniya main ek simi thi ab tu use aur dhuk nahi dhe sakti tere galti ki sazza  khun us bechari ko derahi hain manviii  tere liya bs itna  satha  is jindagi ka safaer jo tune jisey taisy kat liya hain ab to yaha jine se jyada asan to marne ka hain  manvi ye sab sochtain hain aur apna hath ka nas  chaku se kat leti hain Uder virat ko  manvi k bare main bure sapne aain hain aur won id se cjad k chilata hain  V= manv..iii !!!  Virat ka face pisene pasine hojata hain  wo manvi ko cal karta hain par wusk mobile switch-off ataha hain  virat ka man aur jyada  baichen hojata hain aur wo abhi ko call karta hain A= (seelping tona ma ) heloo ? koun hey?V= abhi main rs A= abe    RS tuu ? itani raat ko  kya kaam tha V=( indirecty puctha hain) wo wooo clg main sab tik tak hain na I mean simi k group hamarain group A= aree tu tenson mat le sab ek dam tik hain bindash ok main kal baat karuga goodnight V=(virat chain ki saas leta hain )ooofuuu tq good manvi tik hain  fir v mera man itna baichain kyun horaha hain

 



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Ider   abhi k ghar main  simi appne kamrain main  k window main bhait k chad ko dhek k rorahi hain akely main ==( simi ki akhom main  purain  asuseee se bharain hain ) ajj app dhekha na babag meri mannu k sath  kya horaha  hain  kyun  kyun app use  is  choti  si umar main  itna  dhuk deraihain app to sab   jantain  hain na ki  wo  bahut  choti  si  thi tav se  hi  usko  akelain  pan ka  mar jel rahi thi  jab  choti  sit hi  tab  apne hotain  huway  v anatho ki taraha  jivan yapan (life spend) karna  pada  aur  jab  avi  uski  life  main  pyar  ne  dastak  di thi  usko  ko kya  pata  tha  ki  wo  pyar  hi  uski  jivan k sab  se  badi  tufan leke  aya ga aur uski  life spoil kardega  (simi  apne hath se apna  mu  dhak ti hain aur apne ghuno ki bal niche jamin pe  girti hain aur  bahut  roti hain ) akhir kyun  kyun   app  uski kushi  se jaltain ho kyun plzzz 4 god say plzz usko  boxjigiya  plzzz plzzz  ( fir simi ko avi  ki baat yad atain hain " simmi  tumarain  mind main  vi  yehi  chal raha hain na ki tum vi  mere paisey ko hadpna  chahati ho"  aur usko  abhi ki baton see  bahut  pain horaha  hota  hain  wo sochtin hain aur ye  decision kartain hain ki ajj k baad wo kavi v abhi ki paiesoo appni life nahi  jiyagi  wo  v mannu ki taraha  job  karaegi  tavi  use  fir  mannu  ki pain ki yad aain hain aur wo bahut  rotin hain )  tavi  simi ki cell phone main call ata hain  wo call uthtain hain  too useke  hoshh  ujdatain hain simi chilatain hain =MANNUUU  :,(

Simi   bahagtin hain  bahgtain bhagtain hospital main pochtain hain wo nurse se puchtain hain

Si= sister, wowo  (rotain huway awaz main ) mannvi manvi chaudary  kaunse ward  main hain  ??

Nu=ooo wo ladki  jisne apna nas (nab) katali hain wo  to I.C.U main hain  sida  jaiya 

(simi jane lagtain hain jatain jatain piche nurse ki batain sunti hain ) wo ladki to nahi bachegi

Nu2= kyun  ?

Nu= aree  bechari  k to bahut sara  khun bahaingaya hain ab god bless her

(ye sun k simi k hans udjata  hain  wo aur gavra kar hospital  I.C.U main pahuchtin hain  I.C.U k bahar bobby soyam aur merry aunty  hotain hain )

Si= mannu mannu mere mannu kasey hain ?  ( merry aunty k pass jatain hain aur akhom main asoo  se bharin  aur captain huway taraik se puchtain hain ) aunty apne khaha ta ki mere mannu ki dhek bhal karaigi  to  ye sab  kya  hain aunty  app kyun  nahi  boltain hain

( simi  bhg k ICU  k pass  jana  chahatain hain par  soyam  usk kamar  main pakad  k kichta hain  ) soyam  mughe janee do plzzz main mannu ko dhekna chaha tain ho plzzz  mugko  jane do plzzz ( simi rotain hain ) 

S0= plzzz plzz samjne ki koshis kar simi abhi  choti ka  treatment horaha  hain aur hausla  rak  sab tik hoga  agr tu hi tut gie to  choti ko kaun  samal le ga  sooo plzzz plzzz  

Si=( simi soyam ko jor se hug kartain hain aur rotain hain) soyam  mannu ne to kavi  kisi ka bura nahi kiya tha to  bagwan  us k saath  kyun  itna  bura  kar raha hain  akhir  kyun ???

B= bobey v  akhomain asoo  se varain hotain hain aur wo simi ko ek letter detain hain  jo  suicide karne se pehaily mannu ne simi ko likha hota hain  ) simi  manvi ne suicide attempt karne se pahaily  tumarain liya ye  latter  likhatha  lo

( simi boby ki hath se  letter letain hain aur panda  su karatain hain

In letter

mere  pyari  simi

ab  kheheno  to  bahut sari batain  hain par kuch baat yasi hotain hain ki jisay hum  humarain  labjo main bayan nahi karsaktain  ki life main hum jin logo ko hum bahut pyar kartain hain na  une  hamainsa 4 garneted      leletain hain hume lagata hain kuch v hojaya hum to ek dusrain se bichdagay hi nahi ajj ek rutha hain to kal dusra mana lega lekin main ne to kavi soch hi nahi ki agar kismet hi hum se ruth jaya fir kya hoga ? ek dusrain ko lambe chaude wade dene ki chakar main hum bhul hi jatain hain ki life bahut chotain hain aur is choti se life main kismet walo ko hi pyar milta hain chahain bhalain hi  wo  kuch hi  dino  ke liya kyun na ho aur  main  itanai  kismata wali v nahi  nikli  mere to kismet ne hi mugko  dhoka  de-diya tumara  aur mere rista bhalahi  humesa ka na ho lekin tumarain sah maine jo v pal gujarain hain un k saharain main jindagi to kya maut v jilugi  humesa kush rehain na aur  apne app ko kavi akela mat samjna kyun ki kohi hain jot um se bahuttt pyar karta hain aur hamesaaa k bad v plzzz mugko miss mat karna  kyun ki main  jitain ji to to tumarain  hoto main  muskurahat  la na saki maut k baad  to  kusi de du  tum mugee yad kar k  tumarain  akho main asuuu  bana nahi  chahatain hu  PLZZZ  MAIN  JO  KIYA  US K  LIYA  MU GHE MAFF KARO  PLZZ 4 GAVE ME

                                                                                                                                                tumari mannu

 

 

 

manvi ka  kat pad k simi aur tut  jatain hain  aur  ro tain hain  aur  rotain hain woo  bhut jyada   hearty  pain  hota hain  aur  tavi  ICU se doctor nikltain  hain aur simi  bag k dr k pass jatain hain)

si= dr sir mre mannu  k  se hain  plzz  dr  plzz

dr= dhekiya  unka  bahut  khun bechuka hain  ab hum  humee  unk  liya blood ka arrangement karna padega

si  =to soch ye mat  mere  khun lijiya plzz  par  mere mannu ko bhacha ligiya

dr= dhekiya hum  app k jajbaton ko samja sak tain hain par peasant ka khon appk khoon se match v to hona chahiya na ?

so= dr simi ka khoon manvi  k khoon se match karta hain soo plzzz app sochiya mat aur apna kam suru kigiya

dr= ooo that,s great pr khun lene se pahaily humain  kuch test   karna pade ga

 

( dr aur simi  khoon ko jach kartain hain aur simi  appni  khoon mannu ko detain hain  dr k mannu ko oti main sift kartain hain ) dusri tarf virat ka man  ye manne tayar hi nahi horaha  hain ki mannvi tik hain  us ka man manvi k barain main soch k  bachin horaha hain aur use raat ver nid v nahi atain hain aur wo   ek baar fir appni tasalli k liya aven ko phone lagata hain

Av= aree vsv kya huwa raat 3 bj kyun  call    karha hain  kyaa baat hain ?

V= wo kuch  kash nahi  wo clg k hal chal  puchne they aaa  clgg main  sab  tik thak  hain na ( wo indirectly mannu k barain main puch ta hain )

Av=abee  itani raat ko tu clg ka hal-chal puchne k liya cal kar raha hain  tera dimag to tik hain na 

V= ( virat  ka  becahin  man  manvi k barain main  janee k liya  betav  hota ) woo main  bas maaa

Av=aven virat ki baat bich main cut karta hain ) ooo mya k barain main  puchraha hain  ? aree tera aur uska ghagada  hogaya  hain kyaa ? wo to tik hain aur clg main sab  ek dam  tik hain aura vi mughee bahut  nid arahi hain  mughe sone de ok good night (aven cal cut karta hain )

V= virat ko aven ki baat sun kar vi  nid nahi atain hain wo fir se mannvi ka call try karta hain bt  fir se switch off ata hain ) main kyun itna paresan hora hu ab  mere dostono nain  kehain diya hain ki sab tik hain virat tu kuch jyada hi soch raha hain ( virat laptop leta hain aur office  k kam karna suru karta hain )

Ider hospital main

Dr= dhekya blood to milgaya hain ab  app jakee hospital ki fees jama kardigiya  

Si= ji (simi receptionist k paas jatain hain aur bill magtain hain ) 15000/- ??? avi to mere pass itanain paisey nahi hain  aura b se abhi  se v kuch  help nahi le saktai  kya karoo main kya karoo ??? (simi daye baye dhekti hain aur appne hath  matahey pe  lejat8in hain aur tauch krtain hain tavi simi ko  manni ka diya huwa  ring najara atai  hain aur wo kuch sopchtain hain ) I,m sorry manvi  mere pass aur kohi  chara (solution ) nahi  hain

Simi hospital ka feez jama rak k waps manvi k ward k pass atin hain

Si= dr mannu ?

Dr= she is out of dangers nw fir v hume suve ta  une under abbreviation main rakna padega

Si= tq tq soo much dr

Morning 7am

Nurse =  dr sukla dr sukla  wo ladki ho hos agaya hain

Simi soyam aur bobby apne place se uthey hain aur simi dr k pass pochtin hain

Dr= dhekiya app ab under jasakain hain per ek time main sirf 1 hi under jasak tain hain aur plzzz patient ko jyda stress na pochne na paya

Si= ji dr ( simi manvi k room  k under janain lagtin hain tavi soyam  piche se simi ka hath pakd leta hain )

S0= (simi piche mud kar dhektin hain ) dheko simi plzz choti k samne appne  felling ko kabu main rakhana  kyun ki abi  yaha use sab se jyda tere  jarurat  hain soo plzz

(simi soyam ko sir hila k tik hain kehain ti hain )

Manvi under bed main so rahi hotain hain aur simi slowly manvi k bed k pass jake baith ti hain aur manvi ko simi ki awaz sunai detain hain manvi simi ki taraf dhektin hain aur dono ki akho main asoo ane lagtain hain manvi simi ko hug karti hain aur jor jor se rotin hain

M= main har gai simi main har gai  ab to maut  n v mera damn chod diya hain  ye kaise kismet likhwa k laie hu main

Si=(manvi rotin hain aur simi manvi k back ko rub karti hain  ) bs manu bas bas ab mat ro  main agie hu na

M= (rotain huway ) akhir kyun bachaya mughe , mar jane diya hota mughe ajj mere galti ki sazz..!!!

Si= (simi mannu k mu main appna hah raktih hain ) sushhh .!!!!!  Bs bahut hogaya  tu  kud  ko kyun sazza derahi hain aur  kis galti ki sazza?? ( simi mannu k dono  gal main apna hath ratin hain ) dhek  ider tune koe galti  nahi ki hain mannu  tune to pas pyar kiya sacha  pyar kiya  aree galti to usne ki hain aur kismet to uski kharav  hain  jo usne dere  saff aur sachee dil se kiya huwa pyar ko nahi samja

M=(aur jyda rotain huway ) par har bar bhagwan mere sath hi  kyun  yesha kartain hain  ab main  kaha  jaugi  na main  wapas  risikesh jasakti  hu nahi  yaha  rehain sakti hu  main  kya karo simi  main kya karoo

Si=(simi manvi ko fir se hug kartain hain ) bs ro mat  main  huna  tu tension kyun letin  hain  main sab  samal  lugi  aur  bhagawan sab  dhek rahain hain ye dhuk k badal v  jaldi hi hat jaya gi aur khusiyo ki kiran  ayegi  tum  dhekna  aur khaber dar  jo tune fir se yashi harkat  karne ki koshis  ki to tughe  pata  hain  tera  yesay  karne se mere dil pe  kya  gujri  hain  ager  tuge  kuch  hojata na to  main v marjatain   

M=( manvi  ko realize  hota hain ki simi ko kitana dhuk paucha hain isliya wo simi ki tara dhek tin hain aur baby face bana ti hain aur smile karti hain ) sorryyy mere chamak chaloo

Si= chamk challo ??

( dono ek dusre ko dhektain hain aur  hastain hain aur  simi galtin se appn  hath se mu ko chupatain huway hasti hain aur mannvi notic kartain hain ki usk hath main wo ring nahi hotin hain )

M= simi aaa woo  tere hah ki ring khaha gie ??

Si = (simi hath main dhektin hain aur manvi ki tarf na dhek k daya baye dhekti hain ) a. wo ..ringg main aa .. ghar main bul gae

M= tu mugshe jhut bolrahi  hain plzz sach sach bata ? kaie tune  hospital k bill pay karne  k liyaaa tooo

Si= areee chod na  us ring ko mere asli gift to tu hain aur  tu aur main saath rahi to yesi ring  fir kharid legay ( manvi kuch bol ne hi wali hotin hain tavi  simi  usk baat kat kar botin hain ) ab plzzz tu is topic ko le ke mat suru hojana plzzz $got say plzz

 M = ok

Si=  manvi  mughe tere mobile degi 

M= kyun ?? wohi pada  hain lena ( table ki wor dhikar )

Si =(Simi table se mobile phone uthatin hain aur  use  simcard  nikaltin hain aur manvi ko detain manvi shock hotain hain ) ye rahi  pahily pro ki solution ab tughe  koi v ghande ghane sms nahi  bhejega aur baki ki poblom ka solution v main jaldi  kardugi ab tu bhait main bahar tere liya shup lekar atain hu

Simi bahar  atain ahin aur  kud  ko control nahi  karpatin hain aur  fut-fut rotin hain use samne  soyam Sharon pr chilatain huway patain hain

S0=ab kyun aie ho tum han ye dhek ne ki  manvi  jinda hain ki mar gae huuu? Ya fir  tumeain so called fren virat ur tumari sis maya ne ko nae  tarkiv  de kar  veji hain tume  choti ko satane k liya hu ?

Sh= soyam plzzz  yesa mat khaoo main to bas  manvi k barain main sun kar use dhek ne aie thi 

S0= ooo bs karo  ye nautaki aur khaber dar jo choti k pass v gie to ajj se tumara mera pyar ka rista v khatam plzz  get out

Sh =plzzz plzz soyam  mere di k galti ki sazza mughe mat do ( saharaon rotain hain )

So= tum yaha se jatin ho ya main tum ko dhake mar k yaha se nikalu

(Sharon rotain huway waps jatin hain )

 Si= ye kya kiya  soyam tumne  maya aur virat ki galti ki sazza us bechari  Sharon ko kyun deya tumne

(Shoyam kuch nahi bolta hain aur gushe se laal hokar  bhara chala jata hain )

 Yesay  hi  kuch day past hotain hain  idar  simi ko  manvi  ko lekar paresan horahi  hotain hain wo  manvi  ka pain  ko kaisy kam  kare is baat soctin hain aur  uske  dimag main ek idea ata hain wo appni mobile uthati hain aur ek number dial kartin hain  )

Si= hello kya main  Mahesh chaudary  baatkar saktin hu ji

( dusre line main Mahesh ajatain hain ) hello  ji uncle app mughe nahi  jantain hain par  main appko jantee hu main appki  beti manvi ki dost  simran bolrahi hu plzz uncle plzz phone mat cut kijiye ga plzzz( simi rotain huway khehain tain hain aur  jo  ajj tak manvi k saath huwa wo sab batatain hain ) main jaanti hu ki app  aunti ki maut ki jimedar mannu ko maintain hain par kya app ko nahi lagta hain ki app  galat  karhain hain kya app ko in 14 saal tak kya app ko kavi mannu ki yad nahi aie app aunti se pyar kartain they na to  kyun apne unka ansa ko tukra diya main jaan ti hu ki insab bataon ka app pe  koie asar nahi hoga par ager appne kavi v manu k  ma  ko pyar kiya hain to app ko unka  wasta  uncle app sirf 1haftay k liya manvi ko appne pass rakhligiya main  1 haftay k baad kud usko waps lene augi plzz plzz  aur plzz usko  dhuk mat  digiya ga  cz wo aur gum sehain nahi paya gi plzzz

 

Wo hospital jatain hain manvi ka sab saman pack kar k manvi appna saman dhek  hairan hojatain hain aur simi ki taraf dhektain hain

Si=( manvi ki taraf dhektin hain ) mannu  ajj tera discharge hogaya hain na to ab tu chal

M= parrr khaha??

Si=  manvi ki tarf dheti hain aur usk hatho ko apne hataho main letain hain ) manvi  tu  manali jarahi hain avi

M=( manli ka naam suntain hi manvi dar jaain hain aur usk akho se asoo behain lagtain hain ) manaliii ..!!!! nahi plzz mughe manali mat vejo plzz simi main waha nahi  jana chahati hu

Si=Dhek mannu main jantain hu ki tughe  tere papa se milne main  dar lagraha hain pr mannu  mere pass aur kohi rasta v nahi tha  aur bs kuch din  waha reahinly aur main yaha  sab  tik kardugi  . aur main kud  tughe lene augi par  tu himat  nahi haregi na plzz mere liya plz

(manvi simi ki taraf dhekti hain aur tik hain khethi hain cz wo simi ki baat tal nahi sakti hain wo dono railway station main jatain hain simi manvi k hathon main kuch  paisey detain hain aur train k jane ki time v hojatain hain )

Si = ye kuch paisey hain tu rakh aur  tu teson mat le main huna  main ya 1week main sb  samal lugi ok  aur  hum catact main to nahi rehain saktain to sirf 1 week main kud ake tughe  waha se lekar augi aur  ghabrana mat ok

M= ok  (dono ahko main asoo atain hain train  chalne lagtin hain simi manvi ko hath hilakar bye kartin hain aur mannu v ude se bahut dari huwi hain par bahar se  simi k samne tik hona dhikawa kartin hain aur simi ko bye karhain

in Mumbai 

 Virat  apne kam main bg hota hain tavi  virat k ghar main  kuch log  atain hain wo anath asram se aie hotain hain

Turun=t

Anthasram k mother =am

T= ji  app log baitiya main under  bade sab ko bulakar lata hu

Am= ji

Kuch der baad dadaji unlogo ko under bulatain hain virat avi v appne office k kam main  bg  hota hain wo  kuch angrdiya leta hain aur daye baye sir gumata hain tavi use   dur apne ghar k get main ek  choti si ladki  chair main bati huwe najar atain hain wo uth k us choti si ladki k pass  jata hain aur  us ko isarain main  appni taraf bulata  hain choti si ladki  dartain huway  virat  k pass atain hain

Cl= ji? Appne  mughe  bolaya

V= (virat upper se niche tak us l;adki ko dheta hain us chioti si ladki ne purana black scarp pehena hota hain aur usk  kapde  baut bade aur purane par saff hotain hain aur jiski  ghuno main fatain huway hotain aur uski  cute se fase dhek kar virat niche baith k puch ta hain ) heloo   chote princess ?? app khaha se aie hain  aur  yaha  kya kar rahi hain??

Cl= ji wo  main balbidhya anathasram se aye hain   yhaha mother  sath aie hu aur mere mother under hain unone khaha tha ki main  yha baith kar intjar karoon isliya main yaha bathi hu

V= ( anathasram ka naam sun kar  use manvi ki atain hain aur wo firse us choti si ladki ko puchta hain ) app ka nam kya hain ?

Cl = ji mera naam manvi hain

V= (manvi ka naam sun k us k ahomain asu ajatain hain ) manvi ?

Cl= app  kyun ro rahain ladke rotain huwa ache nahi lagtain is

V= (is baat se virat ko manvi ki aur yad atain hain ) nahi main ro nahi raha hu wo to bs acha batao yaha tumari mother kyun aie hain ?

Cl= ji wo jaldhi diwali ane wali hain na to humrain  asram k liya wo  donation magne aie hain jis se hum  diwali manasaktain hain aur sayad is baar mughe ache aur naya kapde peahen ne ko mile

Us choti sib ache main virat ko uski manvi najar atain aur wo kud ko rok nahi pata aur us bachi ko hug karta hain aur use apne apni  hath uthata hain aur ek chocolate deta hain wo bachee kush hok  choklete latain hain wo us trust  ko bahut sara mony donate karta hain aur  kehain ta hain ki  asram k hare k bacheko naye kade naya  kitabe aur unk food k full tarike sedhekbhal karne k liya wo bachee piche mudkar virat ko dhekti hain aur simile kart q bolti hain yesab virat k dada g aur mommy  dhek raihain hotain )

Dada g= bansika bhahu , hamara virat kitna badal gaya hain na  jis  ladke ko gariv sabd se itna nafarat thaw o ladka ajj  uni logo k bhegval main laga huwa hain

Vm= jib au g main v yahi soch rahi thi ahkir  virat main kaisey itani sari  pariwatan (change) aya ?

Dg= bahu   main  virat ko dhek k bahut kush hu

 

Virat apne room main jata hain aur fir se manvi ka phone try kart a hain pr manvi ka phon nahi lagta hain  use manvi se baat karne k liya becain hota hain

V= manvi khaha ho tum ?? kyun  apna phone switchoff kiya huwa hain ? I MISS U SO MUCH

 

Scense shift 2 manlali railway station

Manvi  holy se apni pair  tarin k bahar rahtin hain aur  same ek  coole ko  bolatain

M= bhaiya g ye bag  uthakar  us tempo tak  rak digiya na

(tavi manvi k piche se awaz atain hain ) me  uthalu  

(Manvi pice mudkar dhekti hain manvi k akho se asoo ajatain hain) papa ..!!! ?

Pa= manvi  mere bachee ( papa v rone lagtin hain  manvi jor se hug kartain hain aur rotin hain aur  manvi k papa v manvi ko hug kartain hain is bar manvi  ko apne papa se dar nahi lagta use yesha lagta hain ki wo ab anath nahi hain  wo aur rotain hain ) bas mere bache bs ro mat main huna ab chal  ghar main tughe lene aie hu 

Dono ghar jatain hain idar manvi  k karan simi paresan hotain hain wo har  baar manvi ko yad karti hain use  manvi ki chinta satati hain jis ki wajase  simi kana khana v chod deti hain wo  yasy din ba din  bimar hojatain hain  abhi simi ki halat dhek nahi pata hain  wo   wo simi ko khana khane k liya khehain ta hain par simi man nahi hain khehain kar khana nahi khatain hain wo  akley akely bahine lagti hain , aur dusri tarf manvi v bs virat ko yad kartin hain us k diya huway jakam ko yad kartain ahin aur bs akely main rone lagatin hain ye sab manvi k papa nahi dhek saktain hain aur womanvi pass atain hain aur manvi ko dilasa deatain hain aur manvi k mood ko tik karne hi hare k mumkin  kososis kartain hain manvi v apne papa ko dhek k aur un k pass bahit k wo sari batain bulne lagati hain manvi k papa manvi k udas dil ko tik karne k liya use  bahut help kar rahin hotain hain) yesay  din v cut tain jata hain ek din manvi k ghar main ek ladka ata hain (karan) uska naam karan hota hain wo manvi ka padosi hota hain  wo aur manvi kuch dino main hi bahut ache dost banjatain hain , karan manvi ko manali ki bahut sari jagay ghumane lejata hain jis ki wajasey manvi  virat ka diya huwa gam bhul ne lagatin hain

 

in Mumbai

virat laptop main kam karaha hota hain aur tavi  tarun ake  virat ko coffee deta hain aur  jane lagta hain

v= tarun bhaiya  wo app   ke  bahain ki sadi   hain na kal to  app kab jarain hain ?

t= ji  virat baba  woo ager mughe chute milnahi  payagi abhi dada g se wohi puchne jara tha

v=  app jaiya  apki bhehin app ka intajar jkar rahi hogi plzz

t= tq soo much virat baba ( tarun bahut kush hokar jata hain ye sab virat k dada g dhekrain hotain hain )

dg= kya  baat bhakurdar app kya horahain

v= ji wo dadu hamrain  Canada woley clind  ne khaha hain ki  hamarain  ship pochne main dilly hogaya hain to abhi  main use km baraim main kaam karraha hu

dg = acha to next month  tum jake waha humara  us project pe kam karoo tik hain

v= ji daddu 

dg= virat bachee tu  ajj kal kafi badal gaya hain maine tu main ek positive  rabaiya dheka hain tum  ajkal apne se bado ka man rakne lagay ho  aur sab se badi baat to tum  insane main ved vab karna  chod diya

v=- dadu mughe pehely lagta tha ki sayad ye gairv anath log sirf  amiro k paiso k piche bahgtain hain unka faida uthatain hain par jab se use mila hu main samaj gaya hu ki  main kitna  galat hu  , daddu jab se wo mere life main aie hain tav se  jana hain life kya hain  , garivo ko main  apni pairo ki jute samjta tha usne  muge ye ahaisas dilya ki us gario k sine main vi dil hotain hain jo humari taraha dil ki taraha dhdakta hain

dg = ooo to wo ladki ne tughe badal diya hain ,yasi ladki se to hum v milna  chahain gay jis ni humarin patar dil pote ko mom   banadiya hain , waysay dhik ne main kaisey hain wo ?

v= ( manvi ko soch k ) bahut kubsurat chulbuli  jitani kubsurat wo hain na daddu us se v jyda kubsurat us ka dil hain

dg =acha bato kab milray ho tum  apne daddu ko maya se ?   

v= maya?  Daddu main manvi ki baat karrah hu

dg= manvi ? par tum ne to khaha tha ki tumein maya pasand hain aur hum me milwana chahatain ho

v= nahi daddu main maya se pyar nahi karta hu main manvi se pyar karta hu I LOV MANVI DADDU aur main us k bagair ji nahi sakta par

dg= par kya  bachee agr tum use sachee dil se pyar kartain hoto kya paresani hain

v= daddu wo anath hain 

dg= anath  hain to kya huwa pyar ye sab dhek k nahi kiya jata hain pyar to dil dhek k kiya jata hain

  v=tq tq sooo much dadu to main  ab kal hi ja key use propose karta hu main kal hi chandirgh  jata hu  appne pyar ko hasil karne ,main araha hu manvi tumarin pass  tume appne banana

 



Edited by mira4 - 27 August 2013 at 12:53am

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amazing update
loved it
so long update
poor maanvi
really felt sad for her
loved maanvi and simmi's bond
hate maya
virat loves mannvi
waiting for next update

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Loved it. Eagerly waiting for ur update..continue soon

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Superb dear...
Awesome story
too good
like it

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hi mira,
 ur story is awesome. it is superbTongue loved it.

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wow loved this srry...
plzzz continue sooonnn please

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