IPKKND OS - Bonds - Page 7

rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was beautiful!

Very well written on bonds! both the bonds were extremely well brought out. Both co-existed beautifully without the possessive selfishness.

Loved it dear!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awee Blayde ji it was really cute and beautiful!!

However, Anajli was loved by me from the starting days of IPK and then I had started to hate that character..I dont know why.. 😕

But this was a treat to read. The way Anjali laughed at him was awesome.. well she had a strong point.. when he could not afford having spicy food, how the heck is he coping up with his overly Spicy wifey.. LMAO..

That was really cute and the end was just too perfect !

Both sleeping in each other's arms along the poolside.. Bliss!!

Loved it...

Waiting for more from you!!

Keep Writing ji!

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written OS dear!!!! Loved it:-))

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

A very nicely done OS. That's a true brother sister relation when sister is so happy that her brother's married life is successful.

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful OS.

It was completely different from what you usually write but believe me you nailed it. One thing I always adored in IPK was Arnav and Anjali's relationship. And you described that amazingly well.

Do write a short story or may be fan fiction if your schedule permits. I will love to read it:)

Waiting for more from you:)

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 10 years ago

it was realy beautiful os.

bonding of anjali arnav was superb..

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow...lovely update dear...
I always loved anjali arnav relationship...they were soo cute...he is the best brother anyone could get...
Khushi ...is the happiness of his life...
Arshi scene was soo cute...loved the way they were sleeping...

Happy rakshabandhan...

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726827

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Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful os loved it

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blayde

@blayde

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: flutterlashes
dis ws one of d most beautiful shot i have ever read 😳
u hv again left me sppechless dear...
u just deifned d differnt meaning of d worlds best relationship😃
day out wid anjali ws simple d best idea...
d whole part ws beautiful...
arnav did all d things which anjali loved❤️
he took her to her fav. places❤️
Loved anjali arnavs BOND..
U did justice to thier character...❤️
u just made me remember my brother right now😊
wonderful chappy blayde..😳😃
Perfect shot for rakshabandhan...😊
loved it truely🤗

Happy Raksha Bandhan to u too...🤗
Muaaahhss❤️❤️❤️

Thank you love! If I was able to make even one person remember their brother/sibling, then I believe my OS was worth writing! So thank you for that. 😊

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written, what a lovely concept and bond. I enjoyed it immensely, their bond written so well I almost wished I had a brother...

I am glad Arnav and Khushi are together in everything they do, but am glad for the time that he could give his sister, every relationship is important in its own way.

Even though she was not with the brother sister duo, her essence was there, in the one he behaved with di, even she noticed all the positive changes...

Loved how they laughed and just spent the day doing things together...loved how he goes back and looks for Khushi having missed her and finds her snuggled up sleeping, love how she fits perfectly into every nook of his...the way you write about them always leaves me with a smile! And once again you did full justice...Loved how di comes and covers them up with a blanket feeling content and happy from within at the sight of the two of them sleeping entwined with each other!

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