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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: rima4ever


</div>nice start sona<div>keep it up😳



thanks rima
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Awesome prolouge
Please do continue 😊




Thnks dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

nice





thnks for supporting
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Posted: 10 years ago

hey sona, 

nice prologue,

really the story sounds interesting, specially its association with kashmir


whos the lady is she antara ?

plenty of questions raised ...:P

will love to see the tussle bw the protagonist they seem to be at each others neck :P

some serious miss understanding seems to be lingering around:P

upd soon...pm me...thanks for the pm:)


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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: VIBS_DD

hey sona,

nice prologue,

really the story sounds interesting, specially its association with kashmir


whos the lady is she antara ?

plenty of questions raised ...:P

will love to see the tussle bw the protagonist they seem to be at each others neck :P

some serious miss understanding seems to be lingering around:P

upd soon...pm me...thanks for the pm:)





thnk u for appreciating...will updt sooner
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Posted: 10 years ago
Teaser...]]


the tune was breath taking...she was lazily playing with the little tedy...but when the tune of mouthorgan touched her soul...she started to walk towards it slowly...she saw her mother was busy in her room with some work...she secretly stepped out of the house with small kiddish steps...but before she could go out of her premises, her mother angrily called her "Antara...!"




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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry to ask what is this story about pls tell me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: honeybees22

sorry to ask what is this story about pls tell me


prologue pad na!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: alishamerchant


prologue pad na!!😆

para tha samaj nai aya tabh hi to pucha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: honeybees22


para tha samaj nai aya tabh hi to pucha



u will understand soon...