Mission manafying My mr Angry Shekhawat Swaron part 5 updated pg 16 - Page 7

Wow amazing update yaar. .
I enjoyed reading it. .
Was smiling full time. .
Really very beautifully visualized n written..
I loved their convo about d past it was emotional n very well written..
Loved their masti during phone conversations dat was cute..
N gang ka ideas of camping oh gosh i can imagine how much fun its gonna be Wen gang n swaron ll come face to face n their secret be out..
Very amazingly thought n brilliantly executed..
Waiting for next update..
Thanks for d pm..

Oh my god Wat a timing part four updated. .
How lucky i am. .
Res for now. .
Unres..

After reading d fourth update am just not in a position to make any comment..
I can just say it was amazing n too hot for me to handle..
Hats off to u for attempting somethin like dis..


Ps: d comment above dis one was for third part..



Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 10 years ago

Its hot update
Very sensuous
Lovely update
Thnx for the pm
Do update soon

Wonderful update
thnxx for pm

the only thing i can say right now is MAAR DALA

Wow you updated so fast !!! 😊
What a speed 😊

Coming to the update... it was so romantic and hot !! Beautiful !!!! 😊
I just Loved it a lot !!! 😊

Thnx for the PM 😊

Continue soon...

Now this is what I call a hot update. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 

oh my god whats dis varshuuu😲😲😲

My God
It was awesome the best like literally wow
I had butterflies in ma stimach actaullly while reading this update

I was reading it in the perfect environment one cud wish
Like right now wen am commenting
Its 9:55pm
Ma room's curtians windows lights and doors are close
Andi made sure i have this romantic environment
So that i can really enjoy maself while reading..lol

I loved it hw swayam was feeling guilty and hurt himself
And sharon comming and surrendering to himfully,,,and damn u describe everything so well, like the love making scene was so beautifully and gracefully described. It was mindblowing, like literally blew ma mind.

Awww next update is last :(
I just dnt want this nignt to be end
If u knw wot i mean

Sorry for late unres
But i actually that was intentional as i wanted to create that setting and mood for maself, as i knew its gna be dangeriously romantic

It not just lived to up to ma expectation but it was better thn that.

Do write more and pm me

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 10 years ago

varshi,