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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:28am | IP Logged
omg 
i was so scerd 
i was thinking to skip some parts but then i thought not to
my eyes were wide 
thank you

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:31am | IP Logged
it was awesome continue soon

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Wow! That was amazing! I seriously got chills! You wrote it really well!

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShReya_TaaRey

I just need to show you di what exactly I am doing right now... Crazy Rabbit Icon

Reserved until then.. Stern Smile

ShockedDancingLOL
Keep doing..
no use, Shreyu..LOL
See, everyone is liking it..Big smile

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Awesome

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 11:07am | IP Logged
OMG! Where's my monkeys?!
Ah here it is! 
Okay so...OH MY GGGOOODDD!!!!!

This was amazing! Get a boost of confidence girl because even I can't write something like this!
I hate horror movies and books and everything but this was something else...the fear that the character feels gave me goosebumps! Like for real...are you 14? You're a bloody genius! The last part when the guy whispers into her ears..gosh I was freaked! I am definitely going to remember this OS for sure and why not? You did full justice to the theme of fear by instilling it in your characters and in the readers as well! I just admire you so much after this! 
BOW DOWN!

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged
i am sure har kisi ko yahan par aadat ho gayi hai khud ko  underestimate karne..!!
shreya i will kill you..!!
why did u deleted.??/
this is damn good..
superb..excellent..
n u deletd it very bad..
thanks ayesha fr posting it..
this is really good..
horror is depicted wonderfully through a good command on words..!!
luved it..!!
ur all pieces r good..!!
u shoudn't have deleted it :/
katti..!!

love,
swati..

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShReya_TaaRey

I just need to show you di what exactly I am doing right now... Crazy Rabbit Icon

Reserved until then.. Stern Smile

Shreya...looking at your reaction I really want to just laugh at you and tease you right now
and even go around town saying "I told you so" but seeing your mood just want to say be happy and enjoy the reaction of the audience sweety...here...take a bit of flowers to cheer you up

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