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OS - The Touch Of Fear( Shreya) (Page 2)

Ayesha_Hasan IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Shreyu!!!! This OS is  Brilliant.. I mean it.. Brilliant Piece of work..
Trust me..
You should not be nervous, dear...
You are a blessed writer..
I really very Talented one..
I have told it to you many times..
I Loved this a LOT..
Honestly, i was so scared..
And as i told you..
I was just staring at the screen blankly for sometime..
And the Last part of this OS...
OMG!! I just cant tell you how much that part scared me...
Those screams...
And that SOMEONE speaking in her ear..
the most scariest part...
Keep writing more and more of such stuff..
It really was written beautifully..



Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 20 August 2013 at 7:49am

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Thank ayesha.. shreya yaar be confident.. I post ALL my crap even though I know it's bad..anyways I loved this

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
I loved it shreyu :D
Nice work as alwayz!!

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
It was nice...keep writing like dis it will improve ur writing n help to increase ur confidence

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nina.taarey Senior Member
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
awesome update
plz continue soon

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:28am | IP Logged
omg 
i was so scerd 
i was thinking to skip some parts but then i thought not to
my eyes were wide 
thank you

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:31am | IP Logged
it was awesome continue soon

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mymy_taarey Senior Member
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Wow! That was amazing! I seriously got chills! You wrote it really well!

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