OS - The Touch Of Fear( Shreya) - Page 2 | Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

I loved it shreyu :D

Nice work as alwayz!!

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rbpll

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

It was nice...keep writing like dis it will improve ur writing n help to increase ur confidence

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sharon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

awesome update
plz continue soon

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891653

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

omg

i was so scerd

i was thinking to skip some parts but then i thought not to

my eyes were wide

thank you

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Priyanka Datta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

it was awesome continue soon

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Maya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wow! That was amazing! I seriously got chills! You wrote it really well!

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Ayesha Hasan

@Ayesha_Hasan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey
I just need to show you di what exactly I am doing right now...

Reserved until then.. 😳

😲😆

Keep doing..

no use, Shreyu..😆

See, everyone is liking it..😃

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Vishwa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

OMG! Where's my monkeys?!
Ah here it is!
Okay so...OH MY GGGOOODDD!!!!!

This was amazing! Get a boost of confidence girl because even I can't write something like this!
I hate horror movies and books and everything but this was something else...the fear that the character feels gave me goosebumps! Like for real...are you 14? You're a bloody genius! The last part when the guy whispers into her ears..gosh I was freaked! I am definitely going to remember this OS for sure and why not? You did full justice to the theme of fear by instilling it in your characters and in the readers as well! I just admire you so much after this!
BOW DOWN!

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Swati Singh

@...Jannat...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

i am sure har kisi ko yahan par aadat ho gayi hai khud ko underestimate karne..!!

shreya i will kill you..!!

why did u deleted.??/

this is damn good..

superb..excellent..

n u deletd it very bad..

thanks ayesha fr posting it..

this is really good..

horror is depicted wonderfully through a good command on words..!!

luved it..!!

ur all pieces r good..!!

u shoudn't have deleted it :/

katti..!!

love,

swati..

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Vishwa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey
I just need to show you di what exactly I am doing right now...

Reserved until then.. 😳

Shreya...looking at your reaction I really want to just laugh at you and tease you right now
and even go around town saying "I told you so" but seeing your mood just want to say be happy and enjoy the reaction of the audience sweety...here...take a bit of flowers to cheer you up

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