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hi friends...hope all r fine...when i was talking with poo...i asked her to give ideas for ss...she gave me a idea...with that i have changed a little in that story line and i have thought for a story...this is a different story...hope u guys like it...if u like it  then atleast click like button r comment...when i read ur comments ...first of all i feel happy that u guys liking my story..from ur comments sometimes i have changed some scenes r sometimes i have included some scenes ...it helps me a lot...i dont want u guys to force u...whenever u get time give ur views r click like button if u like my story...i dont know whether it will be daily update...sometimes it may delay ...but i will try to complete it...it is a short story...if any one needs pm please click like button in this first update  so i can pm u guys whenever i update ...i hope u guys like it...


                                         YEH PYAR HAI


pt   1

doctor rajiv : hi shaan...who is this...is she relative...

(doctor rajiv is family doctor for shaan)

shaan : today when i was going to office ..2 to 3 boys were trying to misbehave

with her...i saved her from that group but...when i talked with her...

doctor rajiv : umm wat shaan...

shaan : talk with her doctor...

doctor rajiv : hi...i am rajiv...

doctor extended his hand...

girl : uh..uhh..hi...(child like talk )

doctor rajiv  looked at shaan...

doctor rajiv : wat is ur name...

girl : uhh...r...uh..r ..u doctar...(smile)

doctor rajiv : ha...wat is ur name...

girl : uh..uh...if ..u give ..me that only ...i will say...(smile)

doctor rajiv : umm..okay...

he gave his steth to her...

that girl got that...

girl : yeh...yeh..she tried to put it in her ear...but she cannot..

shaan : wait.. i will help u...

shaan put it on her and made her to listen his heart beat...

girl : wow...wow...

she took away from her ear...

doctor rajiv : do u like it...

girl : uh...uh...(smile)look at the device...

doctor : now say ur name...

girl : my name is s.khanak studing in 2 std standard c section...(smile)

doctor : wat is ur fathers name...

khanak : uhh...(she tried to think...)uh...she showed her hand in action for

telling she doesnt know...

doctor : wat is ur mothers name...

khanak : uh...uh...again in action she said that she doesnt know...

shaan : doctor i asked her she knows this only..no other details...

doctor : umm...

doctor called someone in intercom...someone knocked the door..

doctor : s come in riya...

doctor riya : s doctor...

doctor rajiv talked with riya and asked her to take khanak with her...

doctor riya : khanak come with me...

but khanak holded shaans arm tightly and shook her head in no...

shaan looked at her  ...doctor rajiv signaled him to tell her...

shaan : khanak...

khanak : uhh...(holding his arm even tighter...)

shaan : ur a good girl na..u should listen to me...if u go with that sister

i will get u an icecream...

khanak : ummhmmm...she will put ...iii...

shaan : no..no...if she puts then we can put one for her...

shaan tried to remove her hands from his arms...

khanak : ummhmm...(holded his hand)

shaan : i will get u dolls and chocolates...

khanak :uhh...(looking at shaan innocently...)

shaan looked at her eyes for a second r so...

shaan : ummm...

khanak then went along with the doctor riya...

mean while a phone call came for shaan...so he was busy in talking in phone...

doctor rajiv was checking other patients...

after an hour r so khanak came with riya to shaan ...

they entered the doctors room again...

doctor rajiv was checking the reports...

khanak saw the notepad and pen...

shaan : no khanak...

khanak looked at him like please...

shaan left her...khanak took the notepad and pen and started to draw ...

shaan : doctor...

doctor rajiv : shaan ...see there in her forehead there was stiches ..

it was like a week before she had met with accident...

some wounds on her arms and legs...she has lost her memory...

shaan : umm...i will inform police...

doctor rajiv : wait shaan...she is virgin ...its not safe...

she knows only little...look at her age...some may tell lies to...

shaan : umm...wat to do doctor...

doctor rajiv : one of my friend runs a detective agency...

we will give him her pic and we will search about her details ...

shaan : till then she can stay here in ur hospital...

doctor : no shaan here also no safety..we cont trust anyone...

shaan : any orphanage...

doctor : no shaan..its better she stays with u...

shaan : wat...no..no doctor how can she...

doctor : see shaan ...she trusts u...when riya called she listened to u only...

shaan : but...how can she...

meanwhile khanak came near shaan and called him by pulling his arms..

shaan looked at her...she showed him a notepad with a smile...

shaan saw it...it was beautifull sun rising pic...

doctor : shaan for time being let her stay with u..then we can make arrangements...

shaan : umm okay doctor...

doctor :make her take these medicines...

shaan : umm...khanak...lets go...

khanak : uh..uh...doctor uncle..doctor uncle bye..(smile)

shaan took her in her car...shaan was driving the car...

khanak was sitting next to him and looking around the places...

khanak : uncle uncle..see there...

shaan : wat...shaan stopped the car with a jerk...

khanak : uhh...khanak looked at him confused...

shaan : khanak ...i am shantanu...cal me shaan r shantanu...

khanak looked at him confused...

shaan : ur name is khanak right..(smile)

khanak : uh...h..(smile)

shaan : my  name is shantanu...(keeping his hand in his chest and telling with a smile)

khanak : sh...shantanu...

shaan : uh...u can call me shaan also...

khanak : ummhmmm...sha..shantanu...(smile)

shaan : ummm right...(smile)

shaan started to drive his car again...


pt1   pg 1

pt2  pg 1

pt 3 pg 4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&TPN=4&#90458647

pt 4 pg 5 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&TPN=5&#90729467

pt 5 pg 10 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&TPN=10&#p91461540

pt 6 pg 12 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&TPN=12&#p91779706

pt 7 pg 15 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&TPN=15&#p91986021

pt 8 pg 17 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&TPN=17

pt 9 pg 20 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&TPN=20&#p95850897

pt 10 pg 24 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3707642&PID=99891723&#p99891723


my first FF LOVE STORY

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2440139


second FF KYA JODI YAAR


third FF ANOTHER LOVE STORY


fourth FF DIL THOH PAGAL HAI

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3018065


fifth ff KISMAT CONNECTION

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3260769

sixth ff SOUND OF LIFE

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3170575


my os
 
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3137200

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3137200&TPN=4

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3137200&TPN=6

LOVE

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3137200&TPN=15

LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL


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Loved it di..Big smile Shaan helped Khanak from those boys..Very good of him!!!

And he straight away took her to doctor..She is talking like a child..

Loved how Shaan made her to hear his heartbeat!!! Heart

But cool she remembers her name.. Smile She is doing whatever he says..Embarrassed

Oh..no..Khanak met with an accident and so only she behaving like a child and forgot everything!!!

Yes..Its better Shaan take Khanak with her as other places are not safe!!!

She drew picture in that notepad..Cute.. Smile

Khanak called Shaan uncle.. ROFL Poor guy got shocked..Nice touch!!!

Awww..After Shaan saying his name she called Shantanu!!! Big smile


Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di.. Smile

P.S: Awww..You mentioned abt me..Cool!!! Smile


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woww really very different 
love it 
khanak talking like a child and listens to only shan very cool 
woww this is will be very interesting to see how they will fall in love :)

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HI Niki lovely new SS 1st update.  
Wow Shaan helps Khanak and took her to doctor 
Khanak is behaving like a child because of accident,,, very sad and waiting to know her story
Doctor told that he will arrange detective to find out about khanak until then khanak  should be with shaan as she only listens to shaan ,,,,,,,,,  loved it
Khanak called  shaan uncleLOL  and he told to call by his name and   Khanak called him Shantaanu ...very nice
Waiting to see what naught things khanak do at shaan's place

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poo_j

Loved it di..Big smile Shaan helped Khanak from those boys..Very good of him!!!

And he straight away took her to doctor..She is talking like a child..

Loved how Shaan made her to hear his heartbeat!!! Heart

But cool she remembers her name.. Smile She is doing whatever he says..Embarrassed

Oh..no..Khanak met with an accident and so only she behaving like a child and forgot everything!!!

Yes..Its better Shaan take Khanak with her as other places are not safe!!!

She drew picture in that notepad..Cute.. Smile

Khanak called Shaan uncle.. ROFL Poor guy got shocked..Nice touch!!!

Awww..After Shaan saying his name she called Shantanu!!! Big smile

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di.. Smile

P.S: Awww..You mentioned abt me..Cool!!! Smile



thanks a lot poo...ur idea only made me think this story...i am waiting for ur story man...


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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jaisyjazz

woww really very different 
love it 
khanak talking like a child and listens to only shan very cool 
woww this is will be very interesting to see how they will fall in love :)


thanks a lot jaisy...its a different one..hope it comes very nicely...

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sudhareddy

HI Niki lovely new SS 1st update.  
Wow Shaan helps Khanak and took her to doctor 
Khanak is behaving like a child because of accident,,, very sad and waiting to know her story
Doctor told that he will arrange detective to find out about khanak until then khanak  should be with shaan as she only listens to shaan ,,,,,,,,,  loved it
Khanak called  shaan uncleLOL  and he told to call by his name and   Khanak called him Shantaanu ...very nice
Waiting to see what naught things khanak do at shaan's place


thanks a lot sudha...naughty things done by khanak..havent thought about it...may be i will think about it...

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pt 2


car stopped in front of a house...

shaan : khanak...

khanak : uh...

shaan : get down...

khanak : umm...

khanak got down from the car...then holded shaans arm tightly...

the way khanak holded his arms shaan felt something inside...

shaan smiled at her..but she looked afraid...

shaan : dont be afraid...this is my house...

khanak holded his arms tightly and walked along with him...

shaan opened the door and they went inside the house...

khanak looked around the house...

shaan : do u like it...

khanak : umm...(shook in s)

shaan : sit down i will come now...

shaan was about to walk inside...khanak holded his hand...

shaan turned and looked at her...khanak was looking at him very innocently

with a small smile...

khanak : u r a cheater...

shaan : why...wat did i do...

khanak : u did not buy me chocolates and icecream...

khanak face was frowned and she turned her head and she left his hand...

shaan : oh ho...with a smile came near her...

shaan : for this ur face is frowned...

khanak : go..i am not going to talk...

shaan : come here ...come with me...

shaan holded her hands and walked towards fridge...

khanak stood near him...shaan opened the fridge and showed her...

shaan thought thank god i brought this brought...tomorrow savitha dis sons birthday na...

khanak : oh wow...

khanak jumped with joy...

shaan looked at her with  smile...

khanak : its all for me...

shaan : umm...

shaan was standing in shock...khanak has hugged him and kissed his cheek..

and she started to take  some chocolates and icecream cup...

khanak : sh..shantanu...

shaan came back to reality...he shook his head...

shaan saw her..she was having one chocolate in her mouth one cup of icecreama dn then

some more chocolates in her hand...

shaan : u r going eat this all now...

khanak : ha...i am hungry...

shaan : it is not good for health if u eat all in once...

shaan was trying to grab some from her...

khanak : no..no..i want it...dont pull..i will bite u..

shaan : uff...okay..okay...first sit down...

shaan made her sit in the dinning table...

khanak started to eat the chocolates...

shaan : khanak...

khanak : ha...

shaan :if u eat all u will get fever and that doctor uncle will put injection...

khanak : wat...he will put...no..no...

shaan : i will say no..if u stop eating all okay...

khanak :uh...thought for a second...

khanak : ummm...(sad face...) this alone please...please...

shaan : okay this alone...

khanak started to eat the icecream alone first...

meanwhile shaan started to make bread toast for khanak...

shaan : eat one more bread ...

khanak : no..no..its enough...

khanak took one bread in her hand and started to walk towards hall...

shaans pphone rang...shaan was talking in phone...

khanak : sh..shantanu...(loud shout..)

shaan cutted the phone and came running to khanak...

khanak was standing in a room...

shaan : hey..wat happened r u alright...(tensed)

khanak  : who is she...?

shaan looked at the wall...his face was frowned...

khanak : who is she ...?

shaan : uh...natasha...

khanak : why she is having a stick in her hand...why she is beating u..

shaan : no..no..we were playing with the stick...

khanak : oh...

shaan recalled his past...

shaan was son of sunil and madhavi...he is the second son living in mumbai...

akshay is the first son and his wife is khusbhoo ...when shaan was

studing in college shaan and natasa loved eachother...

there parents also agreed for marraige...shaan went to higher studies...

after returning they thought of getting married...

on the day shaan returned...natasha was driving to airport

to recieve shaan she met with accident and she died on the spot...

shaan was broken a lot...then to change his mind he came to ooty...

in ooty they have a estate and a tea factory...

shaan really liked the place...so he stayed here itself...

he goes to mumbai to see his brothers kids for their birthdays alone...

he sends gift from ooty itself through net and he chatted with them...

its been 3 years he is in ooty...his parents tried to talk about his marriage but

he avoided it...he loves this ooty ..the climate is nice and scenary is very good..

and another reason natsaha usually tells him that after marriage we should settle

in ooty as they went to ooty during college tour...




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