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FF- DAGGER- curve to painful memories pt-8 dec 29 pg-42 (Page 7)

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 2:58am | IP Logged
nice CS
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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
nice cs waitng for the update

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Congratzz For ur New story...intresting charater sketch can't wait thanks for the pm

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:39am | IP Logged
 DAGGERcurve to painful memories...
                               credit goes to vanshi_maaneet
                                      thanks alot dear...Heart




 She heard sound of footsteps approaching near her...she puts her head in between her legs and starts leave me... She wake up with a sudden jolt after hearing me...plz...dont come to me...plz...and starts sobbing loudly...plz...leave me...sobs..tears rolled down her eyes and her petite body starts trembling due to fear...plz leave me...I didn't do it...plz...AAAhhh her scream came out as a whisper her words chocked and she was struggling to live like someone strangled her to death...she tried to remove the hands of the person from her throat...tears continously flowing from the eyes..I...I...I will never do it again...plz...plz leave me...her pale face depicated every inch of pain she suffered...she was sweating badly...plz I m sorry...plz....and continue murmuring again and again... She wake up with a sudden jolt after hearing someones scream someones scream...her dream or  can say her nightmare broke...

AAAhhh...a man voice came from near by place

She cuddled up like a ball on dirty floor

Man- why God...why?... Why did you do this to me?...sab mujhe chod kar chale jate hain..kyu...and scream at the top of his voice..his scream could pierce any persons heartpain in his scream.and he fells on the ground on his kneestears escaped from the corner of eyes.he was broken his heart was brokenhe was in anguish due to the heart break...he covered his face with his palms and started crying bitterly

When she heard a mans voice...she cuddled up more into herself...her face become more pale...she started treambling horribly...she wanted to scream but again her voice chocked due to fear...she was in a deserted factory on a lone road...she came there to take shelter for the night after running for a long time...she went inside the factor but it was in worst condition..she found a corner and sat down on the dirty floor...she was crying from long time and finally she slept due to exhaustion...first her nightmare and now the mans voice shook her from inside.

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Edited by angelic-eyes - 28 August 2013 at 1:10pm

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Nice start thanks 4 pm

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awesome start dear

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Nice start
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