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FF- DAGGER- curve to painful memories pt-8 dec 29 pg-42 (Page 35)

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
awesome dear
feeling bad for maan he is very hurt

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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
due to sam betrayal & her words about his family, making maan vulnerable in present
superb update

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Posted: 29 November 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
part 7
nice...
poor Geet...
cont soon...

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 8:56am | IP Logged
sorry for commenting late...I was sick...
awesome update...curious to know what happened to geet actually????...

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Posted: 01 December 2013 at 2:30am | IP Logged
yayyy finally gt update Tongue
awsum n painful part Cry
maan in so much pain Cry
awww my poor baby geet CryCry ho did this to her Angry
waiting eagerly for next do cont soon
 

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Posted: 19 December 2013 at 1:06am | IP Logged
thanks guys for the lovely comments and likes...i will update soon...
i m glad u all appreciate my story...actually it is not my story because u all r making efforts in this story by comments, likes, suggestion...

so thank u guys...by the way sangita dear wat happen too u...hope u r gud now...

sorry for late rply to u all

love suni <3


Edited by angelic-eyes - 19 December 2013 at 1:08am

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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged
 
hi sweeties...Smile
i m really sorry for the late update...i was busy in my exams...and guys i don't forget about my story but though ur comments make me feel out of the world...awesome...thanks for remembering my story...i tried my level best this tym to impress u all...and sorry for not commenting on others...but i love u all...thanks a ton...StarStar
 
 
DAGGER- curve to painful memories...

 

 
                            credit goes to vanshi_maaneet
                                      thanks alot dear...Heart
 
 
                       
 
 
                                PART-8
 
 

Dadimaa patted her head to sooth her...and heared Geet's whisper of leaving her alone...shhh...its ok...its ok Geet...i m here for you...like few minutes passed and Geet felt calmness...

 

Dadimaa asked Maan what doctor told him and maan told her everything...

 
 

Dadimaa felt pain for geet...she prayed to god to give her share of happiness...

Maan put dadimaa into her bed...and left to change his Jim clothes...

He saw geet curdling like doll...her serene face glow in the moon light...second change into minutes but Maan stay there...

Geet frowned due to the hair strand fall on her face and disturbing her sleep...she try to remove it in her sleep couldn't and make a more mess of hair on her face...

 

A smile formed on Maan's face seeing her trying hard to remove the strand...

 

After few seconds maan went near her and remove the strand and gazed her beauty for sometime...just when he was moving away...Geet held his hand in sleep...

Please help me...I need ur help...mujhe mat jao chodke she whispered in her sleep...maa...papa...plz...plz come back to me...or take me with u plz...

 

Shhh...I m here for u...main hu na tumhare pass...chup ho jao mishty...like calmness poured in her suddenly...the name has a different effect on her...maa-papa... all she could say and then again went in sleep...

 

Maan realised now he told her mishty..mishty???...aaj kal pta nahi main kya kya bolta hoon...and drifted to sleep...

 

A new morning brings new things for everyone..

Dadimaa went for her charity conference and Maan went for his urgent meeting...

 

He entered into his office...worker called his DEN...everyone greeted him and in gave just a nod in reply...some says he is rude, some says full of attitude...girls go gaga over him...but he never paid attention to anyone..

Adi where is sharma's file???

Sir wo to apne padhli thi jab mera interview tha...to konsi file sir??? aditya  sharma...accountant head...best worker...maan's college friend and knew him well...after the sam's incident adi tried to lighten the maan's mood but...

Adi stop it...i asked about mr. ramesh sharma's file not ur interview file...

Oh! Sorry sir...wo...wo...

Bring me the file adi...after composing himself...he knew what adi tried to do but he was not in his senses to appreciate or trust anyone now...but he felt a connection to geet...

 

After sometime maan was in the conference and the conference phone start ringing...he has strict order for no calls...he was so pissed off...

What the hell pinky??? I told u no calls...in what sense u doesn't understand no call means...maan erupted like a volcano...

Sir wo apke ghar se...she start sobbing and took longer time to say...emergency call aaya tha...

Maan mind strike on geet...and he said a sorry and move a fast as he can from the office...everyone was gasping at him...what happened to their sir...

 

Maan reached at the mansion in half an hour drive instead of one hour drive...he went straight into geet's room...actually his room...

He saw the servants standing near the door...he asked them but they didn't reply...and maan entered the room and saw geet in the corner...cuddled like a ball trying to smit in the wall...but couldn't...

He went near her...geet start protesting...sobbing like hell broke upon her...maan felt like dagger grave his heart every time he saw her...

Leave me please leave me...I will never tell anyone...please leave me...maa- papa please...

Geet no one is here accept me...geet calm down...everything gonna be okay...he had no trust in girls now but like geet beg him to be differ from every girl...

Mishty I m here for u...mishty chup ho jao...the word has its own effect on her...maa- paa please...she starts calming...

Maan gave a nod to the servant to bring some fruits and juice for her...maan cuddled her in his embrace...doctor told him geet condition...how geet was refrained from getting foods like from months...so she can't ate for a while properly...

 

 

 

 
 
 
 
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i m happy with ur comments but likes are less...i want only 50 likes...i send pm to 80 people and likes are only 45-46...guys if u like my story then please hit the like but other remove me from ur buddy list because i don't want to distrub u but sending my update mails...so its a request to u all...thanks guys 4 ur support and comments, likes...it means alot to me...


Edited by angelic-eyes - 29 December 2013 at 8:53am

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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
awesome update
maan calling geet mishty

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