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St. Louis ki GS!! #i'll b all r8 #KR Discontinued :( (Page 7)

dancersqueen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Update plss
Update pls
Update pls
Update pls
Deetha. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Didn't proof read.. sorry for typos!! =)

Part -10

" tu theek hai?? " Rey asked while they are sitting in the canteen after the two classes.

" mujhe kya hua?? " Swayam said eating his burger and checking his FB.

"tumhe toh sar mei dard ho raha tha na kal?? yaad nahi?? " Rey raised his eyebrows. Swayam got startled. And he started fumbling when the whole gang is looking at him pin-pointedly.

" Arey Rey tum bhi, sone ke baad theek ho chuka hoga, haina?? " Sharon tried to cover up. Everyone looked at her shocked.

"Sharon tum?? " All were shocked and Swayam!! He is shocked beyond limits.

" kya??  Its just a logical thing right?? "she said fidgeting in her seat . Swayam frowned at her. These two girls never stop behaving oddly.

" Swayam!! Mai seedha baat pe aata hun!! Kal tu ghar pe hi tha? " All were looking at him when he glanced at all. When he glanced at Sharon who is right opposite to him she glared at him and nodded a no silently. Swayam frowned. 

"Haan wo "he saw her gritting her teeth.

"matlab nahi " he said frowning. 

"toh kal dhabe ke paas tu hi tha?? " He asked and Swayam's eyes went wide in shock. He looked at Sharon who looked away. 

Inn logon ne mujhe dekha?? OHHH FISH!! Kriya bhi mere saath thi.. 

" aur wo ladki koun hai bey?? " Bharat asked and swayam took a sigh of relief. 

" Dhaba?? kounsi dhaba?? mai toh apne friend ki ghar pe tha.  " He said fumbling a bit.

" Aisa koun si friend hai bhai jo aap aaj kal usi ke paas rehte ho?? "Taani asked .

" Arey koi hai Taani tum nahi jaanti usse " He gently avoided the thing.

"Arey aisa koun jo mai nahi jaanta?? 6 saal se mere saath hi toh hai tu.. " bharat said and swayam in turn gulped slightly. 

Taking a deep breathe he replied. " Guys mera bachpan ka dost hai wo, and tum log itne questions kyun pooch rahe ho jaise maine koi galti ki?? " He asked normally!! 

" arey nahi yaar!! " The gang said and all left the topic there itself  when swayam felt ease. 


"Sharon mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai "  Swayam called her after the last class.

"kya hai?? " she said looking away. Fidgeting a bit.

" Wo kya tum Kriya " She interrupted in between .

" Ghar pe in one hour.. waha baat karte hai. She said and left. He frowned. 

Ohhh God Sharon ek kya kam thi ki tum bhi itna weird???

He sighed and  left.


"  haa bolo "  Sharon sat before him.

" wo "

"tum kuch loge?? Like.."

"No no !! I am fine.. But kya mei ye jaan sakta hun ki tum mujhse aise kyun behave kar rahi ho?? " He asked looking directly into her eyes.

"  Mai ?? kaise? " she looked away.

" Don't avoid it Sharon!! We were in a relation right Sharon ?? " 

" Okay Trial relationship right?? " he asked seeing her shocked her face. She immediately nodded saying she is not shocked for that.

" Haa swayam we still are right??  " she said nervous. She knew she is lying, she knew what is coming.

" Really Sharon?? "  He frowned at her when she became a bit more nervous. 

" tum iss baat se pehle kabhi nervous nahi hoti thi?? " He asked, his  patience coming to the peak.

" Nervous?? mai?? nahi toh?? " She said not meeting his eyes.

He walked to her and  sat beside her.

" Seriously Sharon?? Ab tum mujhse kuch share karna bhi nahi chahti ho??? " he said .She found a bit of hurt in it. She gulped . She can do this.

" Aisa kuch nahi Swayam!! Wo tumhe pata haina Kriya ke baare mei, bas mei usse leke bohut disturbed hun!! ""   She said finally taking a breathe. She need to share this. Especially with him. Swayam frowned. He is highly confused now. But a smile crept as he sensed her palm slipping under his and he held it and she slowly leaned on to his shoulder. 

" Tum Kriya ke baare mei jaanti ho sharon? kya jaanti ho? " He asked slowly seeing her calm face. She rested her face closing her eyes.

" Wahi swayam jo tum jaante ho " She said as she squeezed his palm. Its difficult for her too. Its very hard for her to live like this. She is struck at a place where she neither wanna take a step forward nor she wanted to go a  step back. Its crushing her. She need space to breathe. She need something to live peacefully.  She knows what is the cure but then again, her medicine her her big problem. She bit her lip  trying to stop tears from escaping her eyes. 

" Tumhe kaise pata sharon?? aakhir tum donon ke beech kya connection hai?? Kya ho raha hai?? How the hell do you know about her first being her enemy when me , uska best -friend tak nahi jaanta tha , how sharon??? " he let his frustration and confusions out. She pulled back frowning.

" Tumhe nahi pata?? Ki mujhe kaise ye sab pata?? " she narrowed her eyes.

" nahi pata!! " he said irritated and sighing.

"Kriya ne nahi bataya ?? "she insisted.

"Nahi!! Wo bolti hai ki wo tumhari secret hai aur wo sirf tum bata sakti ho wo bhi if you want to !! "  he said frustrated and throwing his hands up.

"Mera secret?? Seriously now Swayam?? Wo mera secret kaise hua ? haa??? " She shouted on him. 

He can see tears form in her eyes but also see the fumes she is emitting. 

" Sharon!!  Usse wahi bola " he tried to calm her down.

"Ussne bola aur tum maan gaye?? " She shouted pushing his hands away!! 

He frowned. 

"Sharon " 

" Bas swayam!! How dare you!! Tum ye kaise bol sakte ho its MY secret?? " She shouted louder.

"Sharon calm down. Maine kab bola?? Mujhe toh wo baat pata hi nahi hai!! And now for God's sake tum donon ye hide and seek band karo and please tell me what the matter is. " He held her by shoulders and shook her a bit.

She closed her eyes.

Oh Damn!! Mai Swayam pe kyun chilla rahi hun.. he doesn't even know it, You are so dead Kriya!! 

" Swayam!! " She made him sit and sat beside him. 

Swayam's jaw fell to ground on listening to her . 


Okay!! So here goes the update.. Don't complain about the length please!! Pretty please!! =)

So as I already said Rey ka jyaada nahi hoga iss story mei , and Swayam is kinda the main person in this story, so SS toh aayega hi =) 

Let me know kaisa hai!!!

Good news!! This will be ended soon max of 4 parts more!! =D 

Tujhko Jo Paaya which I am dying to write , is on its way!! =D

-Deetha  <3

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 11:56am | IP Logged

Unres Big smile

pehle to tight wali jhapi update karne k liyeHugHugHeartllove u so much deethaaaHeart :-* :-* :-*

cmng to update <3

am super congused Confused but still loved itHeart

loved canteen.partHeart hahahaha sab shock sharon ko sunke LOL but i luv sharon bachare swayam.ko bacha liya LOL

SwaRon Convo mere sar k upar se gaya hai Confused Dead sharon itani kyun bhadak rahe hai Confused

Now Kriya n Sharon fight hogi kya! Shocked

waise bhi Sharon bhot confused kar rahe ismein Ouch ...

Dono last wale n is update dono mein sharon ne mujbe super confused kiya hai is vhakar mein SS convo 3 bar read karliya :-P lol...


Haww kya matlab end Shocked deetha i will kil u agar tune end kiya to...

Tujhe nhn pata k baatcutter n GS mere dil k kitane kareeb hain :'(

update to kal mil hi raha hai still update soon :-P

love u love u love u so much <3

Edited by KAS_Nisha_ArSha - 26 January 2014 at 12:11pm

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Will unres.tmrw paka


Awesome update Di
Loved it...
bechara Swayam...LOL

Uspei grup attack...
Sharon saved him...

Update Chota tha...Unhappy

Par mast hai...

Do cont soon...
N thnks fr d pm in advance...

P.s. second love aur chahun mei ya na update karo jaldi...Smile

Edited by princessSonia - 27 January 2014 at 5:22am
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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Ooo...cliffhanger !!!
I am waiting for the update with bated breath now!!!!
Anyways it was an awesome chappy !!!!! Short and nice !!!!
Keep writing coz u totally rock at it !! :D

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Aww so good... I am curious Smile

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Pehle toh i cant believe that u remembered this and you UPDATED... :o
*lucky day for your fans*
Amazing amazing part deetha

gosh swayam just got saved from bursting questions ROFL

so the truth is revealing now

par hadh hoti hai cliffhanger ki
answer my questn please-tadpana kab chodegi tu??
Update kar jaldi samji

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