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St. Louis ki GS!! #i'll b all r8 #KR Discontinued :( (Page 10)

Deetha. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 February 2014 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Part - 11

 " Hey swayam!! Tu kab aaya?? " She grinned looking at him coming out of the kitchen . She has the maggi plate and a coffee in the each hand. She sat beside him placing the plate on the table before adjusting herself. She looked at him with wide mouth when he took the plate and started eating not offering a bit to her.

"That was for me " but she got no reply. She frowned and looked at him. He grabbed the remote beside her and switched on the TV and changed the channels before settling on some cricket match. He was so engrossed into the screen , she couldn't believe he is ignoring her royally..

"Swayam will you speak up?? " She said sternly but was trolled when he gave a deaf ear. She placed the coffee  mug not able to believe his actions and getting ready to shout at him . But she was more shocked when he placed that empty plate on the table and grabbed the coffee and started sipping it . 

" Wo mere liye tha " she pouted. But again he gave a deaf ear . 

"Swayam kya hua?? You are acting weird " she said annoyed. He yawned soon after she uttered those words making her jaw drop to ground again. 

Before she could shout his phone rang and he attended.

" Hey Shar!! " He smiled and she went silent . She sat straight and looked front at the now mute screen.

"  Wo mai Kriya ke ghar pe hun " he said casually as her eyes popped out of their sockets.

" Arrey tum baat karo, waise bhi mai akele baite bore ho raha hun " 

this fumed her more. 

" Wo??  Pata nahi kaha hai , yahi kahi pe padi hogi " She couldn't believe her ears.

"Swayam !! "she said  not able to believe.

" Okay Sharon.. 8 ko tayyar rehna.. I will pick you up " He said and grinned knowing well that Sharon was blushing.

"Ohh tum yahi pe ho?? " He asked casually seeing her.

She pushed him on the couch and started punching him  and shouted.

" Are you kidding me idiot, you are the one ignoring me " 

"Ohh!! Sorry I thought it's Sharon's sister, mai usse jyaada jaanta nahi na.. so baat nahi kiya. I don't know it's you , sorry " he said mockingly. But she stopped long back, looking at him shocked.

"Tum kaise jaante ho?? " She mumbled slowly.

" Wo kya haina, meri bestie mujhe utna trust nahi kar paayi jitna usse karna tha.. so mujhe Sharon se hi poochna pada " He looked at her , anger visible on his face. 

" Swayam it's not like that, it's sharon's secret " 

"Oh shut up.. ye tum donon se judi baat hai , and do you know how much she is hurt knowing this ??  " He narrowed his eyes.

"Par wo toh mujhe hate karti hai " He rolled his eyes.

"Yeah She hates you and you hate her right?? Wah , sahi hai.. prove karliya donon ne ki behane hai ... "He said frustrated.

" Wo mujhe hate nahi karti?? " She asked shocked .

He rolled his eyes and got up from there to make him something.. He is starving badly. No use in explaining these two girls.

"Par wo toh mujhe hate karti thi "Kriya mumbled to herself lost in thoughts.

Here comes the Third one!!*Phew*

Done with today's quota!!

Hope you like,,

-DeethaBig smile

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Born2Dance IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 February 2014 at 8:45am | IP Logged
mein comment kar karke thak gaya !
KriSha sisters !
so new it !
and swayam royally ignoring her ! :v
lovely update !

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Crazy_Arshi IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 February 2013
Posts: 4142

Posted: 22 February 2014 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Awsome updt
Krisha are sisters
Kriyam are awsome
Loving it
N you told you'll pm but i didn't got any
--Shukti-- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 June 2011
Posts: 7410

Posted: 22 February 2014 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Lovely update
So, KriSha r sisters... I knew it.. :P
I want KriYaansh moments ... :(
waiting for nxt chapter
dancersqueen IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 November 2011
Posts: 11291

Posted: 22 February 2014 at 10:10am | IP Logged
so krisha behenan hai...nice update...
pls provide some kriyansh scenes too...
Dead_Nightmare IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 March 2012
Posts: 10240

Posted: 22 February 2014 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Wow i can't belive it from now my eyes getting blurrr
3 update
My god
Ohk stop my bakwash sidhi baat
Awesome update chotu tha but chalega update tho mila krisha ka secret revolve ho gaya
Swayam ignoring kriya hehehe
Poor kriya bechari
anjali22 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 29 March 2012
Posts: 11082

Posted: 22 February 2014 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Nice update
like it 
--RAINA-- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 April 2012
Posts: 4357

Posted: 22 February 2014 at 10:39am | IP Logged
lovely update
lykd kriyam...

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