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PoohLover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Techie is back with a bangPartyParty...first of all welcome back..i know you were never goneLOLLOLLOL...soo happy you're feeling better now...miss yaEmbarrassed

Coming to the update..its was just each bits and pieces about perfectly penned it down Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ClapClap Clap Clap

And then the conversationbetween Arjun and sakshi...was just mindblowing...i could not stop reading and smiling all the way till the end Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile

I actually got a mini-attack when i i finished the first part..i thought it was the end Ouch but then while scrolling down..i was all balle balle Dancing

Hehe i read that part you wrote after the update also LOL and you know what its the perfect ending...and awww you lappy..hope you can recover all your data by some means soonSmile

You sure there was no Arjun in the hospitalWinkLOLLOL

Thank you thank you heaps for this beautiful and amazing SS and all the pm Hug Hug Heart

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yas23 Goldie

Joined: 27 November 2012
Posts: 1687

Posted: 20 September 2013 at 6:11am | IP Logged
awesome ending
loved every bet of it
it was sweet cute and romantic
thanks for pm
loved it

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sarunarshi72 Goldie

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Posts: 1379

Posted: 20 September 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
brilliant. Loved it Smile

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Rehana25 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Thank god u ok and atleast u finish your beautiful story I like it   Keep it up

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life93 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 December 2012
Posts: 2580

Posted: 20 September 2013 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
hi dhriti diHug...
u know its 5.30 am ...n i'm reading ur arjun droolingLOLLOLLOLLOL...
feeling too sleepy but now aapne hospital me rehkar itni mehnat ki toh itna toh mein bhi kar hi sakti huWink...
hmm...ahye love arjun drooling WinkWink...moonlight me arjunDay Dreaming...can just imagine diLOLLOLLOL...
and saashi anand ka heart monitorROFL...saare drums baja diyeLOLLOLLOL...
and then apne umar ki classesWinkWinkWink...then loved saakshi's style finaly  arjun ko  hasa diya
21 toppon ki salaami...dishhh...dishhh...dhisshhhLOLLOLLOLLOL...loved it di!!! u tooHug

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fly.high IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
unresed my cmmnt on pg 23

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jia03 Goldie

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
A beautiful ending to a superb SSClap

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ll-Shilpa-ll IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 08 February 2010
Posts: 13720

Posted: 22 September 2013 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
Hug Awe...there is my bahuria, well and kicking, and I am so glad.

You make me proud baby, this was brilliantly done, and yep excellent work with the heart monitor, no blooper there.LOL

I love happy ending, and this one I was definitely expecting a happy ending for, and I am glad you listen to your sasuma once in a while.ROFL

I loved that you stuck to their character as they are from start to end, wish I could see this on screen, but not worries I have you and other BBs to keep me dreaming on Arakshi. (If only the stalkers knew...)

Thank you so much for granting my request, I loved it, most especially the end.Wink

And bahuria, the VM was perfect, very well done.Clap I love that song.

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