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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
tahi di...u r jst fab...
arjun...evn i cant stop followin d words of d saint...hehe..
wah..sakshi..kya sys class lia...
n thn her hillarious imagination...
ahem??!! husband...?? naaahhhiii...
*fainted*...
awsm story..

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Di.. It was so beautiful. Please do write more. You are such an awesome writer.
The heart monitor - i can see a bit of you in that instrument. Naughtily interfering arakshi convo. Bringing out the hidden emotions through those beeps. Heart monitor should be named after you - tahi. It was truly tadka maarke. I fell in love with the heart monitor.
Loved the way arakshi fought. Showed the care and concern they have for each other. Arjun - sakshi's husband. And sakshi's heart doing a jhumping jhapak hearing that. Poor her. She didin't realise that the heart monitor will also do 'the jhumping jhapak' showing her true feelings. And arjun is enjoying that... Aww.. Loved it.. Do write more..
My fav characterin your story was 'the tadka maarke heart monitor'.. Claps and whistles for the heart monitor with a t... Enough of my bakvaas. ( me commenting from my phone. Isiliye no smileys. Otherwise i've no idea about what all smileys i would have used. Dedicating every happy vala smiley and emoticon to you)
Swathi

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Ps. Forgot ask you- are you alright now? Take care di. I know aap to ho hi ek dangerous pataka... Nothing in the world has the guts to even touch u. But do take care. Get well soon. :-)

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Awwsssmmm
loved it

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
awesome endingClap
beautiful VM


Edited by live - 19 September 2013 at 11:46pm

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
That was one of the most beautiful VMs i have ever seen...

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 12:01am | IP Logged
aww...this is the reason i call u angel...u always bring a smile on my face through ur stories!...nd some times...even tears...making me realise dat hw much i get involved in ur stories...


loved ur description and fantasy about arjun...holy crap...i sooo badly started my fantasies abt arjun...hayy...when he *sorry...censored content ahead*...lolz...

finally sakshi is back...in full fledged form...

sometimes its ok...its ok without 'I Love You's...nd Kisses...

keep writing

love
Aisha

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 20 September 2013 at 9:51pm

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Awesomr ending!
love the vm
 
And uff that heart monitor, Sakshi ki dil ki baat uske bina kahe hi keh di
Also loved how you added those bts lines to it, they fit in perfectly
 
Waise will we be seeing some sort of Arjun giving lessons to Sakshi OS? Would make for an interesting one, don't you think?
 
Also hope you get well soon! Don't know what you were in the hospital for, but hope you're all better now

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