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SAKSHI.. Goldie

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
Amazing ...truely amazing...!!!!!
This is one of THE BEST stories i have ever read...Thumbs Up.. write soo welll...!!!!
Well this the second time i am coming first...!!!! yay yay yay...
ek party to banti hai...hahhahaahParty
kyuki coming 1st is no big deal but coming first twice on this amazing stoey ...!!!! thumbs up to me...!!!!!
 hope you remember my essay...???!!!!! if you dont please go and read that...sach mein bohot mehnat se likha tha...Well ending my bak bak...and coming back to this beautiful story...
Kya likhti ho aap...seriously...!!! I mean please write a book...m seriously saying this please...write a book or a script ...and do let me know ill be in line to buy one...ab line me to lagna padega na...out of stock jo ho jaengi...!!! Shocked
Coming back to your update...well kya kahe...kuch choda hai kehne ke liye ?????
Just itna k i love your i said in my last comment...she is the the show and you made her perfect...!!!Smile
I soo wish gorky sir reads ur story and copy pastes it in his show...haan haan copyright de dena aap ...humare khatir khi sahi...Embarrassed
tha way you described the wholle situation was jus awesome...
Sakshi ke dialogues to wah !!!! kya baat hai...maza a gai...
I thoroughly enjoyed the whole update chodo STORY...
That monitor wala was awesome...!!! hahaha ...
then that giving him time to launch his missile...hahaha good one...
now as you have ended up this story m feeling very bad...and you also said you lost ur stories cz ogf ur laptop...Hope it didnt comprise of my favourite Arakshi ?????
M glad you finished this ...nahi to ye kahaani adhori reh jati...
so hm kya keh rae the ...haan as u hv finished ds 1 ...PLEASE PLEASE come up with a new ARAKSHI...story...!!!! pls pls...Embarrassed
oh you were in the hospital ? i didnt knw...hope you well now...!!!!!!
SORRY for this lambu comment...and SORRY for annoying u in d very 1st comment ...but not my fault ...WHY did YOU write sooo well haan ?? why ???Wink
ok now going to sleep...jab log uthte hain to hm sote hain ...u
and jo log update mein kehte hain hm comment mein kehte hain...
P..S. I am not mad...!! ( i know ye comment dekh k log yai sochenge...)LOL

Edited by SAKSHI.. - 19 September 2013 at 7:09pm

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AnatomyAddict IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Firstly, I don't know what happened to you, but since you are in hospital, it sounds serious to meShocked... I hope that you are recovering very very quickly & I want to come & decorate the room, same as you have described sakshi's room to be & even betterBig smileBig smile 
You are right, some things are better left unsaid & this was one of the best examplesClapClap... Loved sakshi's childishness... it shows how these two opposites can make each-other wholeDay DreamingDay Dreaming... The whole SS is the just Beautiful and Perrrfect!! Thanks heaps for an amazing SSHeartHeart...

Love the VM.. It's amazing!! But for me, nothing can beat your VM on 'yeh tune kya kiya'... I'm being serious when I say this, i watch it at least once a day.. It's no joke.. I love that VM tooo much.. My personal favoriteBig smileBig smile  

Nothing else to say... Expect for get bettter sooonHeartHeartHeart... Lots of Well Wishes & hugs & kisses & balloons & flowers!!! Virtually imagine kar lena Wink

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anu91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
awesomely written dr...
each and every word was cool...
sakshi pov was so good...
there conv was amazing...
final word from arjun "i am family and ur husband" was so nice...
VM was just  amazing...
well written and superb ending...

Edited by anu91 - 21 September 2013 at 3:16am

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
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Nice ending...SmileSmileSmile

Get well soon...SmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Will unres in Monday after my exam:)

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vidya.anand IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Awesome finish PC...
did i ever say that i love u meri jaan...nahi toh ab kehthi hoom...
this was so cute and romantic...i am in love with this Arjun and Sakshi...and yes the saint who said those lines...the saint with a tadka! Wink

Edited by vidya.anand - 19 September 2013 at 10:02pm

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Beautiful simple ending. I loved it!

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Payal_156 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
Tahi di
well tadka marke n ur saint lines oye hoye Wink
simply beautiful n lov it Hug
missed u
super se upar vm
ps. gud to know u r fine n at home
pps. missing u

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