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PoohLover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
I just had the need to read all this again and say that you are extremely an  amazing writer and this is one of the best best SS im readingThumbs UpClap
All stars dedicated to you my techie for writing so amazinglyStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar

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AnatomyAddict IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
i forgot where i ressed last nightLOL, so a fresh comment... & also, hve fun reading the essay tht is abt to followEvil SmileLOL

Part 2:
loved the way you hve structured the update!! very interesting and gripping till the final pages!! 
so shree helped sakshi lie and take blame for arjun!! naughty naughtyWink!!

Part 3:

Cry... sakshi ka past!! so sad!! its weird how if a writer writes sooo well, the reader feels and becomes emotionally attached to its story, the characters and their circumstances!! kudos to you diClapClapClap... brilliant!! 

love the growing understanding btwn the two... if he saved her from bullets, she saved him from hookers!! lolzLOL... goood oneWink

the star-convo!!! in knowing what happened in the 1st chap, so sadCryCry... didu, r u alright?? am concerned!! u usually write funny, cocky & naughty ones, not the ones where i hve to choke my tearsEmbarrassed, still beautifully written!!! 

the video!!! Clap... enuf said... reallly amazing!!! pls, dont kill her!! the love the bonding btwn the two!!! prettty pls, 50 shades wali tahi di!!! forum-walo pe reham karo, jahanpaahWink!!!

PS: awesome 100 ep vm tahi di... That was fantastic!!! && update very very sooon!!! warnaEvil Smile...

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life93 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2581

Posted: 25 August 2013 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
hi dhriti diduHug...
aapne kasam khayi thi na mujhe rulane kiLOL lol i fought with my tearsLOL i wonClapClapClap
and kya emotional update diyaWink kya rulana chahte ho ?
arjun was feeling guilty ...Ouch sakshi's past was really tragicCryCryCry...
their moments Wink too good...that cd part CryCry i was fighting with ma tears LOL...aap tahi style likha karo mujhe rona nahi pasandWink...
abhi jaldi se arjun sakshi ko milwao ...aap badale badle lag rahe ho ?Wink baat kya haiLOLLOL...
update soon di with my tahi with a TCoolHug

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Payal_156 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 November 2012
Posts: 15028

Posted: 26 August 2013 at 3:12am | IP Logged
sry fr d late di
awesome banner
update no wrds
one of d besest wrk i ever read
cvs ko ye padhwa do
its beautiful
sakshi banter was just to hide her pain
so hauntful
balam pichkari grt
listen d effectful sng as u said
dnt leave him alone
dnt give up
nt funny hillarious crack me up
video heart touching
hats off di
let d miracle happen
ps. pandhora means chatter?
nam payal to shor
in btw line am i allow. to faint used by in ur wrk lol
thanku di
love u
tc hugs n miss u
continue jaldi sys

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arakshifan Senior Member

Joined: 03 August 2013
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
hey im new to forum ...loving this!!!!!!!!!!!Clap plz pm me

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unsure2012 Newbie

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Posts: 17

Posted: 28 August 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Breathlessly waiting for an update...what a story! Hats off!

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JeeLeZaraa IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 February 2012
Posts: 15130

Posted: 28 August 2013 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
just read all the updates
wonderful job!!
why r u discontinuing ur work? I love reading ur work!!
please dnt discontinue them

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loveasad Groupbie

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
update plz...Embarrassed

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