|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 (Page 13)

ll-Farheen-ll Goldie

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Till the end of this update my dear my eyes welled up with tears.You made me cry with this one inspite of me knowing that this is just a fic & nothing in real.This was  one of the best update of your's most specifically the CD part.Clap Star ClapAs i said this before as well not every love story have happy ending but I really wish to see a happy ending for this Tahi. CryCryCryRest is upto you.But yes Brilliantly penned down this 1.Thumbs Up

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jia03 Goldie

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 6:11am | IP Logged
its such an emotional updateCryCryCry
you made me cryCry

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_Tabassum_ IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 04 February 2013
Posts: 11362

Posted: 25 August 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Awwssmm part
can't wait to read more
cont soon plzzz

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loveasad Groupbie

Joined: 16 May 2013
Posts: 158

Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
right now i am not in a position to write much but yes then also ill definitely say...
THIS IS CALLED TALENT...hats off dear
u touched my heart
i am actually teary eyed right now despite knowing dat its not real but just an ss...
each and every word dat sakshi said was so real...
so touching 
exactly smnthng she would say before leaving
just d right mixture of all emotions
well a small request plz plz pz make it a happy one and let sak live
neither arj nor sak deserve being separated...
plz let their love blossom...
and yes plz update soon
i know im being greedy but what to do...??????
thanx for pm...!!!!!!!

Edited by loveasad - 25 August 2013 at 12:09pm

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natali1999 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
plzzz update soon and pm me plzz update soon

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naz_2012 Goldie

Joined: 23 January 2013
Posts: 1922

Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
u made me cry while reading abt sakshi's past nd dat CD wala part.. awesum writing dear..waiting to read d nxt part..omg wat vl arjun do nw..cont soon plzzz Smile

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PoohLover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
I just had the need to read all this again and say that you are extremely an  amazing writer and this is one of the best best SS im readingThumbs UpClap
All stars dedicated to you my techie for writing so amazinglyStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar

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AnatomyAddict IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 March 2013
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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
i forgot where i ressed last nightLOL, so a fresh comment... & also, hve fun reading the essay tht is abt to followEvil SmileLOL

Part 2:
loved the way you hve structured the update!! very interesting and gripping till the final pages!! 
so shree helped sakshi lie and take blame for arjun!! naughty naughtyWink!!

Part 3:

Cry... sakshi ka past!! so sad!! its weird how if a writer writes sooo well, the reader feels and becomes emotionally attached to its story, the characters and their circumstances!! kudos to you diClapClapClap... brilliant!! 

love the growing understanding btwn the two... if he saved her from bullets, she saved him from hookers!! lolzLOL... goood oneWink

the star-convo!!! in knowing what happened in the 1st chap, so sadCryCry... didu, r u alright?? am concerned!! u usually write funny, cocky & naughty ones, not the ones where i hve to choke my tearsEmbarrassed, still beautifully written!!! 

the video!!! Clap... enuf said... reallly amazing!!! pls, dont kill her!! the love the bonding btwn the two!!! prettty pls, 50 shades wali tahi di!!! forum-walo pe reham karo, jahanpaahWink!!!

PS: awesome 100 ep vm tahi di... That was fantastic!!! && update very very sooon!!! warnaEvil Smile...

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