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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
It was so beautifully written. I felt like sakshi is actually sitting there on my computer screen and telling those stuff. She nearly blurted out that she loved him. I just hope that sakshi survives and arjun can spend the rest of his life in her couch listening to 'balam pichkari'.
You are such a wonderful writer. Please continue soon. CV's dekho... Look at all these wonderful works on arakshi. Hope you guys get inspired from such works and bring us something beautiful. :-)
Update soon.:-)


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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Really I dont know what to say now...its very emotive..just '' a perfect one ''...
Thank you...and thanks for such a long part...


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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Haww.. *facepalm*

Ki kar ditta tussi?! Shocked  

No words behna.. no words.. Ermm  Big smile

No offense to anyone around, but for me this is the single-most best piece of work, I've ever read on Arakshi.. Approve  Thumbs Up

Why?! Coz this is the Sakshi Anand and Arjun Rawte, I have always pictured in mind right since Day 1.. A fun-filled, mature and strong friendship silently transforming into something much more deep and beautiful..

And for that you get a jaadu ki jhappi.. Hug   And a pappi (From Hotwa) Wink

Please do write more soon.. I don't want her to die.. Else he'd die.
 She has to live; for him.. For them.. She has to feel and see his love.. . Ouch  Cry

Funny how we get attached to fiction, but seriously you really left me teary-eyed with this one.. Cry

P.S. Ho sakey toh link na twitter pe post kar diyo.. with text in CAPS reading , 'This is it!' Wink

P.P.S:  The song! Maar daala.. Day Dreaming

Gum le ja tere, jo bhi tune diye..
Ya phir mujhko bata, inko kaise sahein..

 Toh phir aao mujhko satao..
Toh phir aao mujhko rulao..

Aa bhi jaao..



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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Awesome PC..out of the world!

That whole scene and Arjun seeing the CD played before me...it was such a beautiful vision

and i know u wont kill her...bring her alive for him for us...

cont soon!

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 2:14am | IP Logged

Damn ...Its soo good!!!

 
Rula dita yaar!!!CryCryCryCry
 
How could you kill her after all this !!Cry

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 2:33am | IP Logged
U made me cry
it was heart touching
i cnt believe it that shakshi z no more
i loved it
bt still hoping
kash shakshi wapas lout ati

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
No, she can't be dead, Tahi, she better not be dead!OuchCry

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
You've taken the responsibily of making us cry kyaCry...sooo emotional it was..rula diya tune mujhe rula diya techie senCry

Lekin ek baat kahu,chori chori chupke chupkeLOLLOLLOL...mindblowing update it is,tussi kamaal ho...you're just a great writer,and trust me i'll never be tired to tell you this..supeb superb and absolutely superb...update soon techie !dont leave us at a cliffhanger...LOLLOL

Please dont make sakshi dead techie,pretty please,im being a big despo now,saach saachiCryEmbarrassedLOL

Famous tacky,you're already famous and loved,now you want proof tooShockedWinkLOLtoh phir yeh loh proofEmbarrassed


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