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fly.high IF-Dazzler

Joined: 08 May 2012
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
hey angel...rulake choda na...ab har baar aise mai tumhe koi aur naam de dungi...

bt cnt...ur angel na...

this ws so deeply affecting nd emotional...loved dat night scene of stars...beautifully written...

lovely altogether...

bt angels r made nd meant to create miracles na...



arjun's future?

i hope u got it...!!!!!!!!

continue soon


Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 25 August 2013 at 12:27pm

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ugababe Senior Member

Joined: 17 December 2004
Posts: 913

Posted: 24 August 2013 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
You can't let her die!!! Sakshi has to live...for Arjun...

Amazing update...brought me to tears

Please make this a happy one :-)

Thanks for an amazing story



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eshasrk IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 November 2004
Posts: 17037

Posted: 24 August 2013 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
I have no words to describe this, honestly !!! I cannot say what I feel, I am only crying and crying buckets.
This is so brilliantly written , it seems as if the scene is unfolding before my eyes
Gosh...wht do I say ?! You have tremendous talent...this is so so beautiful

If something like this would happen in the show ( which I hope will), I think I would keep my fingers on the rewind button
Simply outstanding !!!!
There are so many talented writers in this forum and CV's are struggling with the show, I think they should come and take a look here and see what you all are capable of

Plsss update soon

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NSohi13 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6887

Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
This is so damn gud Tahi ... Arjun and Sakhshi ki friendship ... Sakhshi ki CD and uski baatein bahut hi emotional thi... Rula diya yaar tumne ...But I m confused Sakhshi is alive or not ... Plz update it soon ...thanks for this update and for the PM also :)

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IshitaRocks015 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5698

Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
this was so emotional...
the video...hmm...
as if she knew each n every reaction of his!!Cry
beautifully written!!
love all ur works...Big smile

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AnatomyAddict IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Resss... Unres tomr Wink .. whatever u wanna throw at me, am ready *squints her eyes* LOL

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through Senior Member

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
It was so beautifully written. I felt like sakshi is actually sitting there on my computer screen and telling those stuff. She nearly blurted out that she loved him. I just hope that sakshi survives and arjun can spend the rest of his life in her couch listening to 'balam pichkari'.
You are such a wonderful writer. Please continue soon. CV's dekho... Look at all these wonderful works on arakshi. Hope you guys get inspired from such works and bring us something beautiful. :-)
Update soon.:-)

Edited by swathi93 - 24 August 2013 at 11:32pm

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Anjali.Mital Goldie

Joined: 04 July 2013
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Really I dont know what to say now...its very emotive..just '' a perfect one ''...
Thank you...and thanks for such a long part...

Edited by mital276 - 25 August 2013 at 1:46am

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