|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 - Page 3

Phew! I almost had a heart-attack and was prepared to come after you with a hockey stick, but ah.. I read the next lines and phew..

So, you're going to be a sweetheart and finish off the ones you started, right? Err.. PC, Perfect Two, Muse of fire, the reckoning and purgatory masquerade! Phew.. Kuch choota toh naahi?! 🤔

Anyhow.. I just realised I'd been holding my breath until I read the last bit.. 😭

Noo.. Please tell me she's not gone! And that he's not going to be shattered once again..

Happy's the ending's..

Loved it to bits, seksy! And you say, you can't write serious stuff?!! 🥱
Honestly, this one's one of the best I've ever read on AF! 😉

Pah! I know it all depends on your inphamous Fifty.. Well, lets hope for the cutie-pie Tahi to take over for a while when u pen down the next bit.. 😉
Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 10 years ago

frikkin Tahi ishtyle n me lubh it!!

see below pileej!
msg double poshtedEdited by Sumu4JayD - 10 years ago

So beautiful but too sad yaar!
Rulane ka theka lia hai kya??
BTW which song were u listening to??
n u r so nt leaving the forum di!!

Ami Pm pai nai ken??
*pout*

bac2 Os
L❤️vd it!

hi dhriti di🤗...

 

awesome 👏👏👏...well jitna mujhe pata hai it was not ur genre😉...but loved it...

 

n alll the very best 😃...do ur best...well i'm too shockd but yeah i know how much time aapne boss se chu chup kar likha hai😆...

 work is more important 😊...

 

but phir bhi try karna na ...kabhi time mile toh😃...will miss ur tahi style😉...will miss ur crazy stuff always...bhollna mat mujhe warna bhootani banake daraungi😆

Awesome TS... Loved It...  Waiting For Next Part... Please Don't Make It Sad Ending...

Aweee😕😭 it was damn miserable to see this sweet heart of mine losing his sunshine all over again...

my heart bleeds seeing this...
gosh itna sad haye... i missed my arakshi...

arghhh😡 why the hell sikandar has to hurt arjun by making his loved ones victims... 😡PUNCH...KICKS...(THUDDD...) i wish i could have the privilege to do this paticular karnaama...

Ek bar to tears sab ki eyes mein aye hi hoge...
but loved this genre as well... something sensibly different...

keeping writing tahi...love you for loving my hotwa arjun
stay blessed😉😆

Oh no please I am crying why u do this to us we never imagine that after Riya sakshi also left arjun please don't do it again I can't bear it

Originally posted by: shararatisuhana

REALY NC AN EMOTNL PIECE

OF WRITING..WTNG FOR NXT UPDT😊

Originally posted by: Payal_156

😉 unres
di beautifuly writen
heart touching
lov it
emotionally drained
finally sik dead bt
sakshi bi omg
really dnt give up on bhaiya
rr bro dosti tere dam se h
lov it
claps di
ps. missing u loads
next pm kr dena
ur pagal payali
love u tc
n al d best 😃

Originally posted by: miss_bennet

OMG this is so good, yet so sad and painful!😭