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IshitaRocks015 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 May 2011
Posts: 5698

Posted: 13 October 2013 at 8:48am | IP Logged
my frnd asked me 2 read it...
beautiful story yaar!!
lol..the rathod ria convo..awsm...
alexander ki gf ...murder. ni kia!! hehe..
mad grl...
wow..i think rathod n ria wl make grt frnds..
update soon..

n plz pm me wen u update!!!

sharmaayushi Senior Member

Joined: 04 July 2013
Posts: 914

Posted: 13 October 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
awesm story dr
charactersketch was amazing
loved it
thnx for the pm
continue soon
Harman987 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 27 November 2012
Posts: 2470

Posted: 13 October 2013 at 11:05am | IP Logged
nice starting
love it
ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 November 2012
Posts: 7999

Posted: 13 October 2013 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Nice story ..
good start...
waiting to read more update soon
Jo_Pinchy Goldie

Joined: 29 April 2011
Posts: 2290

Posted: 13 October 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Ooh Nice...Thanks Aks for recommending this story to me...
Wow I like your topic and have read the chapters you updated in one go...
I loved every bit of it...from Riya's bravery to her chirpiness to her turning into a sister of Rathod...
Did you just come up with this idea about hello or was it really G.B's wife's name?ConfusedLOL 

So surprise kya hai? Arjun?Embarrassed

Great start... looking forward to more..update soon!
_Shivani_ Goldie

Joined: 04 June 2013
Posts: 2295

Posted: 13 October 2013 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
It was jst awsm
gr8 concept
i loved it
update soon
Aks13 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 28 December 2012
Posts: 9971

Posted: 14 October 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Update soon dr...
aakanksha4 Newbie

Joined: 24 July 2013
Posts: 47

Posted: 14 October 2013 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Hey guys! thanks 4 all ur lovely comments... Big smilem on the seventh heaven...
Here's the next part...Ready 4 d surprise????????????
Read on and do comment...Big smile

It is the next day... Riya stood before the huge gate of Rathod's house. Although she was new to the city, she had no problem in locating his house, afterall she was sooo smart. She opened the gate and was about to step in when a car ,from the parking of the house, in furious speed just passed by her , she was just saved by an inch, she fell on the floor , dumbstruck. But somehow she managed to pick herself up, shout at the driver in voice loud enough to let the driver hear her words,
" Jab gadi chalani nahi aati hai, toh roller skates pehen kar kyun nahi ghoomte"
These words did not go unnoticed by the driver of the car, ARJUN RAUTE. But he somehow managed himself not to indulge in any fight at this time. He had come back to Rathod's home to fetch the file Rathod had forgotten at home... But he could not even digest the fact that a girl, who herself was walking in the middle of the way, shouted at him who was not at fault at all. He also commented on her with similar intensity,
"Jab sadak pe chalna nahi aata toh ghar par kyun nahi baithti"
Both went in their own directions, saying

Rathod was not at home. Riya had realized the fact earlier only when she saw no vehicle parked in the parking lot. She rang the doorbell. She, in the meantime was thinking, what she would tell to Rathod's wife, that she was Rathod's new sister . And what if she asked Riya where on earth was she till today????????
 Breaking her chain of thoughts, the door opened. A beautiful lady, in saree  opened the door. Riya flashed her dimple smile and unable to say something hugged her tight.  Sonali sweetly whispered , "RIYA"

Riya was quite surprised, 
"Kya aap mujhe jaanti hain"
Sonali: "OF course, main tumhe jaanti hoon"
Riya: Par main toh aapko nahi janti. Matlab main jaanti hoon par main to janti hi matlab...
Sonali laughed at her innocence. She was as innocent as Pihu, her daughter, who was of 4 years.
Sonali welcomed her in with an open heart and there began golden times 4 all. Rathod was not at home but  Sonali and Pihu enjoyed a lot with Riya. Even Pihu became so friendly with Riya that they had given each oter nick names. Riya called Pihu as "NAUGHTY GUSH" while Pihu called her as "PUCHCHI". She actually called her Pussy, matlab Mausi but it appeared that she called her PUCHCHI.

After a lot of fun and frolic, Rathod returned home and was extremely overjoyed to see them enjoying. He realized that it was worthless for him to introduce Riya to them... After a lot of enjoyment, a yummy dinner Riya was about to leave as her landlady had already called her ten times.
Rathod held Riya back and gave her a news that would change her life forever,
"RIYA, you are joining ETF as per the Police Department's Orders, from tomorrow positively. IS that clear??????"""
"Haan Riya! that's an order and u cannot  deny as u have already worked at this post in an government agency earlier.. So go home, prepare well and sweet dreams... see u tomorrow at sharp 9 in the morning and dont be late...SEE U TOMORROW"

Riya unable to respond at such an instant decision went home... she does not even have an intuition what all is waiting 4 her... 

Precap: Riya enters Etf... meets all...(special emphasis on the word "all")...

Edited by aakanksha4 - 14 October 2013 at 6:58am

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