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beenish248 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 September 2013 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
really very awesome concept dear ...
wanted to read more .. Plzupdate soon will b waiting ,..
do pm me

Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Waaooo dr thats a mind blowing concept.

Loved it so much!!!!!!

Riya is too good.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 15 September 2013 at 5:59am
Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Plzzz update soon dr...
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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Hey guys!!!!!!! I am very happy reading ur comments...All set 2 post the next part...

Rathod reaches the meeting place exactly on time but could not find Riya anywhere. He was quite angry. After all he was a police officer and was himself very punctual... After a long wait of 10 minutes, he could see a girl approaching towards him.
She came near him and smiled in apology... Rathod's anger vanished seeing her. She was as beautiful as an angel that has descended on earth and looked much more mesmerizing when she smiled. 
But his heart stopped beating for a second. He felt as if his younger sister Roshni was standing in front of him. Although this girl was so different from her. 
On one hand Roshni never wore short clothes, this girl was dressed in a short top and hot pants. Roshni's face always reflected how calm and patient she was, but this girl's eyes were full of naughtiness and mischief. Confused in his thoughts, Rathod could not make out  why she was so similar to his Roshni although she was so different from her. Rathod was brought back from his thoughts by her pulling a chair to sit opposite to him...

Riya: Hey! I m Riya Mukherjee. If I m not wrong, u called me up to meet u. Mr. Sameer Rathod. right?
Rathod: Ya! I m Sameer Rathod. ETF Chief.
Riya: I m so sorry for being late. Actually I m new to this town n I don't know much about the places here. So I was late. I m sorry.( she smiled and flashed her dimples...)
Rathod was forced to give up his anger. 
Rathod: Ms. Riya Mukh...  Riya interrupted him...
Riya: You can call me Riya only.
Rathod: OK! Tell me something about urself.
After putting up this question to her he was himself confused. He, Mr. Sameer Rathod, who never spoke a word more than required, who never liked talkative girls, who never put up personal questions to anyone except his wife, Sonali, his four year old daughter, Pihu, or the prime suspect of the case, was asking such questions to a girl whom he had jut met 5 minutes ago. He was damn confused how and why this girl was affecting him so much.

Once Riya began to speak, it was hard to make her quiet. Most of the things she spoke, some her actions did and those coal-black naughty eyes spoke the rest of the volumes. She was so expressive, clear in her thoughts. Rathod was bound to smile at her non-stop chatterings. He himself talked a lot to her very openly and even forgot the work for what he was there.
Suddenly Riya spoke.
Riya: Aap se ek baat kahun?
Rathod: Ha kaho na.
Riya: Aapki aankhon me ek aisa dard hai jo shayad aapko pareshan kar raha hai. I know ki main aapko zyada nahi jaanti aur na hi mujhe koi haq hai aapki personal life mein interfere karne ka, par phir bhi I cannot see u in  pain. If u wish u can share it with me.
Rathod first tried 2 control his emotions and not 2 speak anything, but could not control himself.
Rathod: I had a sister like you, Roshni. But I lost her. Seeing you I remembered her.
Riya had a very soft heart. She was in tears. Rathod  felt bad 4 hurting her.
Rathod: I m sorry Riya.
Riya: (composing herself) Oh ho! never mind. Aaj se main aapki Roshni. I know main unki jagah to nahi le sakti but I promise ki main ek achi sister zarur ban sakti hoon. Aur vaise bhi I don't have any elder brother. So please, please Bhai.
Rathod's heart melted listening Bhai from her mouth. It had been ages when someone had called her Bhai. He just smiled and kept his hand on her head. Riya knew that it was a yes from him.
Rathod: OK meri behen ab kuch kaam ki baat kar le. I wanted to ask you about ur qualifications.
Riya: Itna mushkil sawal. Jawab dena zaruri hai kya?
Rathod: Ha bhai...Tongue
Riya: Toh phir suno. I worked in the Research Desk of Delhi Crime Branch. But I left my work because I wanted to be a Police Officer.
Rathod: That's great.
Riya: GREAT!!!!!!!! Aapki behen ne 22 years ki age mein hi job chod di aur aap keh rahe ho great. Are u making fun of me?????
Rathod: Nahi bas aise hi...Star
Just then his phone beeped and he bid Riya farewell.
Rathod: Ek case aaya hai. I have 2 go sweet heart. Kal milte hain dinner pe.
Riya: Kal... Kyon...?????????
Rathod: Tum meri behen ho. Ab apni nayi family se nahi milogi. Aur sath mein tumhare liye 1 surprise bhi hai. To kal milte hai. BYE.
Riya: BYE bhai... Ok...


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zubiya92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 7:04am | IP Logged
superb update
cont soon
zubiya92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 October 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Plzzz update soon
Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Awesome update dr...
Riya n Rathod first meet was fab...!!!!
Precap looks interesting...
Continue soon...
Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Plzzz dr shift it to Arjun Forum... 

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