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ARIYA FF :JINHE KABHI NA MILNA THA (Page 11)

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Posted: 23 October 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Awesome Update !!!!

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Posted: 23 October 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Awwsssmmm part
loved it
great story
egarly waiting for Ariya meet
cont sooon
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Awesome update..
Continue soon.
Love your style of writing! Wink
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AW!!!!!!!
I AM REALLY DELIGHTED READING ALL UR COMMENTS , APPRECIATIONS AND SUGGESTIONS...
INFACT I AM OVERJOYED. SO I COULD NOT WAIT MUCH TO POST THE MOST AWAITED PART...
SO, HERE IT IS...
                                  ARIYA MEETING TongueWink

TongueHer phone rang and she woke up with a jerk. It was Sonali who had promised Riya that she would ring her up so that she gets up on time and does not get late for her very first day at the ETF. Riya got down from her bed, directly stepping into her pair of cute slippers and walked towards her washroom,. She took a bath humming the song ''RANG JO LAGYO!''. After her musical bath, she dressed into a white top and a blue jeans that she had brought yesterday with the kind help of her bhabhi. She made a plait of her hairs and looking into the mirror, flashed her cute dimple smile. Then suddenly her doorbell rang, and she found her landlady with a plate of breakfast in her hand. The landlady made her eat in front of her as she always neglected her food many a times. After the breakfast, the landlady went off blessing Riya for her new job.
Riya also locked her apartment and proceeded towards the office. She stopped a taxi and asked the driver to direct her towards the ETF office. On the midway, she suddenly shouted and the brakes of the taxi were heard screeching. Riya got down as she saw three boys abusing a girl and not allowing her to move away. Riya was far too angryAngry seeing this...
Then she suddenly thought of an idea, Afterall now she was an ETF officer. She walked towards the boys and stood before them as a superhero( a super heroine, rather).
Riya: Ise jaane do.
One boy: To tum aajao...Hahahahah...
Riya: Shut up...You know who am I??
 She had decided to show her ID Card to them and they would definitely leave the girl. 
(Par jahan Riya ho, waha gadbad na ho, this is impossible)
As soon as Riya put her hand in her pocket she realized that she had forgotten her ID Card and revolver at home. "''''''Ab to gayi'''''''''Confused

Riya thought to herself" Beta ab to tu gayi...us laddki ko to side mein rakh, ab to khud ko bhi kaise bachaegi...". 
Then suddenly she found the visitors card of the shop she had brought the jeans from, in her pocket. She thought of a prank. She very confidently took out the visitors card as if it was the ETF ID CARD, and showed it to them, keeping it so close to their eyes, so that they are unable to see it clearly. She instantly pulled the girl towards her and asked her to run away. Before they could respond, she herself also went off leaving behind three stunned loffers... She instructed the driver to first drive back to her house so that she can fetch her real ID Card and revolver. But she realized that the 3 were following her. As  the taxi stopped in front of her house, she ran upstairs and brought her things. 

After a long drive, she found herself standing at the threshold of the office. But luckily for her, her watch showed 8:59 am. Her reporting time was 9:00 am. She thanked the almighty, paid the fare that was actually double because of her carelessness. But she cared a damn. She walked in and found that the office was vacant. She called up Rathod.
Riya: Bhai, Riya Mukherjee, reporting...
Rathod: Surprisingly, unbelievably. ON TIME...
Riya: Vaise aap kahan ho?????
Rathod: Main case k silsile m crime spot par aya hoon.
Riya: Well, Excuseme, main yahan akele baithkar office k jaale saaf karoon?
Rathod: Nahi baba... Main dekhta hoon... I'LL call u back. Tab tak wahin mere cabin mein chup chap baithi raho, no mischief.
And he cut the call.
Riya to herself: "Aise baat kar rahe the jaise m 2 year old kiddo hoon."
She went towards his cabin, walking as if she was in a garden, when she  suddenly sensed someone approaching towards her. She took out her revolver as she thought that someone might have tried to get hold of something finding the place vacant. As soon as the person came into the cabin, she attacked him with all her might.The man was no less ,so he twisted the hand of Riya, making the gun fall on the floor. Riya, could not bear someone holding her hand, so she again attacked him resulting her to fall onto the man, with her face dug into his chest. 
The man looked into those black talkative eyes that could speak a million words. He could feel an unexplained emotion in her heart and his heart skipped a beat.But he didnt accepted even a single emotion, he did not wanted to.
Riya looked into those black eyes which appeared as a sea of pain. But this stubborn girl, did feel an emotion, but an explained one, ANGERAngry

The eyelock was broken by the buzzing of the man's phone. He picked up the call and a voice said,
"Raute, tum arrest warrant lene office gaye ho, ek kaam karo. Office m nayi officer, wait kar rahi hai. Bring her along and don't u dare hurt her or say anything to her, got me"

Yes, this man was the super cop ARJUN SURYAKANT RAUTE. He cursed himself for his feelings that he had for a second. But this man was too stubborn, he would never accept that. So, he thought to himself

ETF Officer, aur vo bhi ek ladki."
He said,
''Hame crime spot par chalna hai. Let's go."
Riya angrily followed him, babbling like a small kid.
Arjun smirked inwardly.
They both sat into the car, while Arjun drove, Riya sat next to him. Riya was far too weak in getting angry, so she forgot all what had happened and began drilling Arjun with questions to become friendly with him, as was her nature. Arjun got too irritated and poured out all his anger on Riya saying,
"Tum ,ek ladki ko ETF m aane ki kya zaroorat thi?"
This was too much for Riya to digest, so she too commented,
"Insaan ki shakl achchi na ho to kam se kam batein to achchi karni chahiye..."

This was a too much insult for Arjun. In the entire drive, he neither looked towards Riya , nor said a word.
It was a silent drive. When they reached the crime spot, she hugged Rathod. She took no time in becoming friends with Shree and Chotu. They both liked her a lot. But as soon as Arjun and Riya faced each other again, the three spectators were able to recognize that a new chapter has begun and the two standing in front are poles apart...




How was it????? Do comment...
Precap: Riya- fun with the two
                         - sisterly with one
ARIYA WAR----------ARJUN VS RIYA 
   
NEXT PART- PAGE 15



Edited by aakanksha4 - 01 November 2013 at 2:05am

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Posted: 24 October 2013 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Awesome update
love it
cont soon
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Posted: 24 October 2013 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved riya
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It's such a fantastic update dr...!!!!

Wow coz of Sonali lady kumbhkaran woke up on time...!!!

Awww her land lady is so cute...Loved Riya's bonding with her...!!

OMG she she went there to help the poor gal but land herself in trouble...!!!

Phew...Her tricked worked otherwise she will be in a big mess...!!!!!

Her jaale saaf karnay wala comment was quite funny...!!!! Only she can talk like that to Rathod...!!

Wow she attacked Arjun... n Arjun felt something for her... Unbelievable...!!!

Loved the way Riya gv a reply to Arjun's taunt...!!! Aww Arjun ki bolti bandh kar di...!!

Precap looks damn interesting...!!

Continue soon...



Edited by Aks13 - 24 October 2013 at 8:13am

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