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SwaRon OS- Tu Hi Dil Hai,Tu Hi Jaan Bhi (PMs sent) (Page 5)

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kamlesh32

Lovely os! Swayam and sharon are meant for each other! 


Thankss...fr the cmmntSmile

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by d3fan4eva

Mujhe frst cmnt karna tha...!!Cry
No fair!!Cry

But still...do I need to say??
Chalo keh hi deti hu..nhi to mai gyi!!LOL
Killer..!! Bohottt Acha tha!!
Luvd it so much!!Big smile
Beautifully written!!Smile


Ab ff update kar na!!!!!!Unhappy


Aww..shorry !!! Agli bara se pakka...
I'll kill u nahi to na...LOL

Thanksss..Embarrassed..n abhi FF not at all sure !Ouch
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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nature2

simple Awosm


ThanksssSmileSmile
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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zk456789

Cute n lovely os


Thank u !Smile
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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetdivya

amazing dear.. Smile
it was sweet..cute and romantic... Wink
loved it totally... Big smile


Thanku so muchh !!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cenation123

Awesome os sakshi dii
the way you penned this one down is fabulous just loved
I liked how you kept the character real
Swayam is such a sweet heart and sharon is a darling love them both
the romantic moments spent together were complete bliss to read
awesomeee
loved it


Thanks fr the long commnt...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surbhimathur

Sakshi you wrote such a long OS! Delightful!
And it had so many wow factors in it like the room scene, attack and dance! It had a flow to it so nothing seemed abrupt. But the best was when sharon hugged swayam in the end which cooled her down, it was a genuine moment which is on my wishlist. I wish CV's show this, it would be a treat for the viewers to see how powerful is the feeling of love and especially power of swayam and sharon's love.

A bunch of super dates! Loved it totally.


Thanks fr the lovely commnt...Hug

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by HSFA

The OS was a delight to read :)
Loved it. The situation and the characterization is just amazing.
Do write more.


Thanku...Smile
Will write soon...Embarrassed

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