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SwaRon OS- Tu Hi Dil Hai,Tu Hi Jaan Bhi (PMs sent) (Page 3)

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Awesome os sakshi dii
the way you penned this one down is fabulous just loved
I liked how you kept the character real
Swayam is such a sweet heart and sharon is a darling love them both
the romantic moments spent together were complete bliss to read
awesomeee
loved it

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Sakshi you wrote such a long OS! Delightful!
And it had so many wow factors in it like the room scene, attack and dance! It had a flow to it so nothing seemed abrupt. But the best was when sharon hugged swayam in the end which cooled her down, it was a genuine moment which is on my wishlist. I wish CV's show this, it would be a treat for the viewers to see how powerful is the feeling of love and especially power of swayam and sharon's love.

A bunch of super dates! Loved it totally.

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
The OS was a delight to read :)
Loved it. The situation and the characterization is just amazing.
Do write more.

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Awesome dear...thnx for d PM

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
beautiful os!!
swayam completing her wishes!!
lovely!
ty for the pm.

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 12:26am | IP Logged
aww such a cute n sweet os..
both swayan n sharon pov are awesome..
loved it alot..
thanks for the pm :)
n do write more..

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged
nice  update

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrushaan

yeh first to res... Dancing
will unres soon...
unres
it was ossam dii...Tongue
i simply luvd it...
u perfectly described both swayam as well as sharon...
the rehersal room seq was just out of the world...Embarrassed
n hugs n kisses were...Day Dreaming


Congo..fr frst commnt ! LOL

Thankss fr the comment..Smile

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