The Titli...Part Three Page 14 updated 20 Aug - Page 12

Beautiful update , Sagi.. And a lovely end of a cute story ...

Beautiful Update..👏 👏

Sagi, throughly enjoyed reading your FF. I have to say, I admired the maturity and clarity in your writing style, If the first part brought tears to my eyes, the second part made me laugh like mad and the third part satisfied my soul. I can vouch not many 16 year old can write so well ( at least  those who are in Delhi schools )  to raise such varied emotions in so many adult's mind. I always enjoyed reading your spams in Suvika's thread,  and knew that you ahev a very good sense of humour, but this FF was really a special. All the best dear. Lots of  love. Look forward to many more writings. 

Sagi, I will come back to you over the weekend over Dr Anjani and her questions...   😳  😛  😆

Wonderful story.

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Sagi that was just fabulous..specially the spamming part..
Big big hug to you..keep rocking..

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Dear Sagi... Thank you sweetheart for this superb OS.

Loved part-3. Awesomely written!! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

What a heartwarming finish...a story that began with despair ends with hope for the future.

Happy to read the happy ending, Sagi...I am a sucker for one...!

Congratulations on this wonderful first attempt of yours...hope this signals the beginning of a wonderful future for a truly promising writer...who has understood in her very first attempt that writing is not about stringing bombastic words together or about complicated plots...the first sign of a good writer is the ability to communicate with clarity...and to engage the reader emotionally and intellectually...you have done both in each of your updates...I truly love the touch of ever present humor..


Keep smiling 😊

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

sweet sweet os ...think just like you...Sagi !👏...budding writerji...bade hone ke bad hum aunties ko yad rakhna.

Alkaji ki kundali and finding Nidhi this way was superb...super liked it dear.

Originally posted by: gargpoo

fantastic part sagi..👏

so raja ko uski titli mil gai..superb...beautifully written...thanks for this lovely story😊