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SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :) (Page 24)

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
A very unique concept...
Loved the way u wrote it...
& i am happy tht u chose this subject coz this is the reality of our society but very few ppl try to narrate it...& i must say u r successful in making us aware abt it...
There r much more unusual things which happen in our society but we ignre them as we feel tht they r against the society so we shld stay away frm tht otherwise ppl in the society will throw us away...

Hmm..coming to the updates...
This b*****,kutta,kamina,*****,**** arjun...main jitni bhi gaaliyaan use karu utni kam hai uske liye...such a filthy lerson...bloody disgusting b******...
Achha hua Sapna ne use maar diya...otherwise mere haath se toh marr hi jaata..
But he deserved much more brutal punishment..
Poor Geet...ssooo much of suffering...
But loved the way Sapna supported Geet in every phase...

Mujhe laga hi tha yeh kamina dev shaadi ke liye mana kar dega..
Yeee...here comes our hero...kya enrty maari Maan ne...
Hmm..he married Geet not bcoz of pity but he actually loved her when he first saw her...

Feeling very bad fr sapna...

Finally Maan made Geet to overcome her fear...
But i am disappointed with thevway i u ended it abruptly...
But thank god u r giving an epilogue..
Waiting fr it...

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Good as well as saddy part, good the way you potrayed today's on going lively situations, that are also a part of our society. Nothing wrong in posting such things which indeed are truth of our modern culture and changing notions of relation. Your writing always carries freshness and would expect you to carry the same.
One thing I would add Writers never need permission from their readers, they are free to express, free from good or bad, and the readers are we who are on hunt for you writers to quench our thirst of adventures, excitement, tragedy, humour, romance, actions and ofcourse a little bit of greed of gaining a pen friend like you.
Thank you a lot spending time for us writing your creations and yes never stop your imagination and posting, becos there are some in deep crevices of your very own world waiting for your just hi every day.
Sad that it ended as sooner as it started, wish you could have continued further, nevertheless lovely part.
Thanks
Vidhi

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
part 2
last part
awesome...
poor Geet...
had gone through so much...
but shes lucky to have got Maan in her life...

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
its not ur style..
the way u ended 
im not happy with the way u rushed
u must hv given it like u thought..
but anyways..
u tried 2 finish it with a gud end
not leaving half way
nice story

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Wowww maan made heroic entry n married geet against all odds
geet in depression wanting to Knw d reason maan married her was tht pity or lust
yeh pammi n dev good tht they r kicked out
nw maaneet leading will live their life happily

Edited by trishadcute - 25 August 2013 at 1:23am

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot for giving epi Big smile
Will be waiting for it

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 4:33am | IP Logged
yaar ye razza kab milegi

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