Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update  m liking this stry thnkzz fr restrting it 

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Posted: 10 years ago

 lovlyyy update .. m happy tht u listend to ur heart n wrote wht u want as it is u hav nt hurt ny1's religious belif or senti ments so no need to wrry .. good tht u rewrote u m happy n proud of u  bass thodaa romnce aur mahi mahi momnts zyada hona chahiye thaa πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
just read sll d 4chap. nw ...concept was diffrent nd u portrayed it beautiflly
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm! Read the edited version! Wonderfully written! Maan was always with her n always der 4 her! He waited 4 her! Eventually she accepted him! She required tym! She was traumatised! well handled!
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Posted: 10 years ago
uh i donot know what to say bichari geet ko kitna sehena pada i truly hate dat arjun😑 but mere maanu ne sab teek kar di😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
MAAN'S PATIENCE AND LOVE BROUGHT HER OUT OF HER FEAR
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Great ss dear.bold and beautifull is the defination for this work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
this time even more interesting
she finally came out of her fear
and all thanx to his love and support
though that wasnt easy was it#
but she did and that was just what was needed
am glad that you wrote more again
cheers for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
great work...
bt i am disappointed by sapna...
i knw she is forcd by situation,still couldnt accept her behaviour...
lovd maan's characterisation...
i wish to hav a person like him in my life...