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SS: Infamous Streets { Chap 2. Pg 2}

Carabelli5 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 9:44pm | IP Logged

Hey Peeps,

I was watching a documentary today that forced me to grab my laptop and write this out. I always refrain from explicit writing but the content of the SS will be mature so reader's discretion is advised.

 In addition, the characters of this SS have no resemblance to Asad/Zoya, except that you can imagine the protagonist being KSG and Surbhi Jyoti.

Chapter 1: Incidental Encounters


The young man in his early twenties peeked through the window searching for her; he finally stumbled on her reflection in the mirror. He pushed open the door and paced towards the table she was seated on. Her head was buried in the book in her hand. He pulled out a chair and sat down placing his backpack on the floor. He grabbed one of the books lying on the table and opened it to a random page. However, his nervous shaking and distracted gaze made it obvious that he was the least bit interested in the book.  He continuously stole a peak at the girl sitting across from his, oblivious to his presence.

Some thirty minutes passed by and she hadn't even looked at him once. She was so deeply engrossed in the book, or perhaps forcing herself to bar the outside world from her frame of reference. She had a constant blank expression on her face. Her brow tightened against her glasses, and her lips parted every now and then to sip on her large chai latte.

Suddenly Daft Punk's Get Lucky infiltrated the entire library; the girl finally looked up from her book towards the boy jumping on his chair trying to reach his pocket for his cell phone.  Her expressions were not of surprise but of a familiar nuisance, the expression one can't help but give when stumbling upon a deja vu moment. 

Karan jumped out of his chair and walked out of the library with his phone.

"Hey birthday boy what are the plans for tonight?" asked Vikrant on the other line.

"Trying to win my date here" 

"It's been a week, give up already!" teased Vikrant.

"Never! Listen I will meet you at the Blue Note at ten!" and he hung up the phone and paced back to the library.

But she was already gone. He grabbed his bag and ran out the door through the crowded corridors. But like always she managed to hide into her loneliness, behind this crowd.

Karan managed to escape the confines of the campus but he was disappointed to see no sign of her, unsure when he would find her again.

It was a chilly November night. It was colder than expected for New York weather, it felt like the first snow would fall tonight. Karan reached his party venue and handed the keys to his Aston Martin to the valet.  He headed into the club to be greeted by an entire brigade of people. He wouldn't call them friends but a crowd. He knew most of these people for years but he felt like he didn't really know any of them or vice versa. Vikrant his step brother was perhaps the closest friend he had.

"Here comes the most eligible bachelor of town!" greeted an excited Vikrant with a warm hug.

Karan rolled his eyes at the phrase, "most eligible" he didn't know what exactly qualified him as that, though he was way too arrogant to accept that in front of everyone. 


He headed straight to the bar and ordered a Kamikaze. He turned around to look at the variety of girls just waiting for one gesture.  His eyes made way to the girl sitting a seat away from him. She gave him a smile that indicated her approval.

Karan picked up his drink and moved next to the girl. He ordered her a drink; both chatted for a few minutes, and soon both rose from their stools and headed towards the back door.

Karan pushed her against the wall and pushed himself onto her lips. Slowly, he reached for her dress, and pulled it just above her waist and then his pants'.

The party ran till late ending with the crack of dawn. Karan was the only one left by the end, knocked out on bar.

Pulled out of his intoxication by the bar tender Karan looked at his watch and rubbed his eyes. He picked up his blazer and headed out.

He headed outside where his car was already waiting for him. However, he called up his driver to pick up the car and he walked out into the cold.

It had already snowed. He continued to walk on the virgin snow, leaving a traceable path.  He continued to walk aimlessly until he ran out of breath. His feet felt as if they would fall right off.  He found a bench covered with snow but he didn't think twice before sitting down. The cold had managed to augment his headache to a throbbing migraine.  He closed his eyes and tried to recall the events of last night, but he remembered nothing. 

There was not a person in site in the fog covered street. The snow continued to fall down mercilessly piling up quickly against the bench.

He stood up and reached out for his phone, but the battery was already dead.

"Shit" he muttered as if it was someone else's fault. He walked down a block to find a faint light coming from the block's corner. He walked quickly, and reached for the door of the building. He made his way inside to find a beautiful hall ornate with old hardwood benches. His eyes fell onto the altar and he realized what this building was.

"I need to find a charger!" he mumbled looking around to find someone.

"Excuse me, do you have an I phone charger, my phone'."

But he stopped midway seeing that it was her.


Chapter 2: PG 2 

Edited by Carabelli5 - 19 August 2013 at 7:06pm

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QuboolHaiLover1 Groupbie

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
It's nice continue soon
KulfiBai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
This looks very interesting, great start!
Are your protangonists going to be called Karan and Surbhi? You mentioned there would be explicit writing so just a friendly suggestion, you might not wanna use their real names, butthurt fangirls will be after you LOL
Looking forward to the next update Smile

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rosamale IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
i loved itBig smilecontinue soon
Ruchi-interest Goldie

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KulfiBai

This looks very interesting, great start!
Are your protangonists going to be called Karan and Surbhi? You mentioned there would be explicit writing so just a friendly suggestion, you might not wanna use their real names, butthurt fangirls will be after you LOL
Looking forward to the next update Smile

I agree with Tanvi its a rocking work but real names can land you in trouble Embarrassed 
Ceon IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 7:37am | IP Logged
it ws beautiful. I loved it. Cnt soon
Enchantress IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Hey this is just so good. Love it.. Please pm me next time.
kankabhor IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Nice start ..But as other members said, it will be safe not to use real names else some fans will bite you..

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