Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

SS: My Turn Chapter 1 update page 3 (Page 3)

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Chapter One
Jalal's Pov
"Jodha, wake up" I said as I tried to shake jodha awake, it's not really working out. This would be alot easier if i had my own body or if Jodha had more muscles, note to self make jodha a gym.
One last try, I thought to myself as I reached my hand out again to try to shake her awake. Except this time she grabbed my hand and pulled me towards her. She wrapped her arms around me and snuggled into my neck. Well this is nice I thought, it'd be better if I was in my body. Your getting off topic jalal a little voice in my head told me.
I started to punch Jodha's, well technically my chest as hard as I could, which wasn't that hard.
She lazily opened her eyes, when she saw me her eyes widen to the size of dinner plates. She quickly closed her eyes and opened them again.
She opened her mouth screamed, I quickly tried to cover her mouth but a little high pitched scream came out before I could.
"jodha, I am gonna let go and your not gonna scream, ok?"
She nodded her head and I let her go.
"I never thought I'd be able to scream so high" I mused to her
"This is not the time to make jokes Shahenshahji" she said slightly hyperventilating
"It's ok jodha, calm down" I said putting my hands on her shoulders "breath in, breath out"
"This is not ok!" Jodha said slightly freaking out "I have man f**king parts"
"What do you mean by man parts?" I asked even though I knew exactly what she meant.
"You know" she said looking around the room, anywhere except for me.
"No, I don't" I said moving closer to her "please tell me"
"Um well um" she said flustered "it's sorta like a stick-wait, why I am I telling you this? you should know"
"How did you know what it looks like?" I asked with a smirk "You looked at it didn't you?"
"What?! No!" She said while blushing crazily
"Sure" I said while walking towards my sitting room.
"No, wait I seriously didn't"

Thanks for all your nice words! So there's chapter one. Sorry it's so short, I'll eventually make them longer. So how was it? Horrible or not to bad?

Edited by Iheartpancakes - 20 August 2013 at 1:53am

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jodha swears???LOLnyways its nice..
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i liked it keep going!
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Something new! Good job. Waiting for update.
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nyc update...

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getting more interesting- plzz update soon

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