Ariya ss : piya aye na(last part -page -8)27/8 completed - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: khemanisarita

WOW
AMAZING START


Thax dr
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Jorja

Awesome start plz cont soon



Thaxx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

hey dear awesome update
poor riya
i hate this arjun
i know that he suffered a lt but what was riya's mistake???????????
hey dear if possible plz pm me the next update
awesome concept
continue soon
eagerly waiting


Thax .will update 2day
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: unishaz

nice start.. Continue..


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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Aks13

Waaooo wht a superb start n a amazing update dr.

Arjun blasted on Riya n that too without any fault of her.

Why u stop at such an exciting point???????

Precap looks damn interesting.

Continue soon n if possible do it tomorrow plzzz.


thax dr
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mastmegha22

Awesome update dear.
Love the title.
So arjun is remembering his and riya moments.
How he proposed her but before six monts he fight with her and also scold her.
What is her fault?? She dont know about roshni anniversary.
Precap looks scary.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.


Sabar rakho
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Posted: 10 years ago
thax everyone 4 likes & comments .., 😳
Here is the 2nd part

Part -2

Arjun frustratedly entered into his house & sat on the sofa bowing his head down .wanted 2 calm down himself .

but suddenly he realised what he had done few moment b4 .He now bcame angry on himself .

Arjun :dam it !!!!ye meine kya kar diya ????riya ko itna batein suna diya ... 😑
Riya ki to koi galti v nehi thi .wo mere liye itna kuch karta hai aur mein ...
how can i b so selfish !!!!!mein apna gusse par kav control hi nehi kar pati hu ...
I have 2 say sry 2 riya .

Arjun called 2 riya 's number .but it was switched off .

Arjun :sayad riya mujhse bohot naraj hai .mein kal subha office jakar usse maafi mangungi .

Next morning he went 2 the office earlier 4m his usual tym .
He went 2 the conference room .
There he found everyone had already come & was sitting with gloomy face .
When he entered everyone turned 2words him .seeing him rathod just burst out -

rathod :hw dare u rawte !!!!
Tum ne riya ko dukh pouchaya .riya ne kya kya nehi kiya tumare liye & u ... 😑

Arjun :sam just listen 2 me ...

rathod :kya sunu mein tumari ...ha !!!!!

arjun :sam i know mujhse bohot badi galti hue hai .but trust me mein usse kav chot nehi pouchan chahti thi .but pata nehi mujhe kya ho gayi thi...
rathod :oh just shut up rawte !!!!! 😑 mein ne tumhe pehle v kaha tha just try 2 control ur anger .but no !!!tum sunte kiska ho !!!!
mujhe laga tum badal chuk ho but i was wrong .tum kav nehi badal sakte .

Arjun :sam i know mein ne jo kiya wo maafi k layak nehi hai ...mein ek baar riya se milkar usse maafi mang lu ...
(arjun just wanted 2 go 2 riya cabin but rathod stopped him )

rathod :ruko rawte !!!!
riya yaha nehi hai ...

arjun :nehi hai maatlab πŸ˜• ???

Rathod :riya etf chorkar chali gayi ...

arjun was shocked -

Arjun :what !!!!!
wo aise kaise kar sakta hai ???
Mein avi usk ghar me jakar usse milti hu ...

(he just going 2 leave but shree stopped him )

shree :rukh jayie sir ...
Arjun turned 2 him with questiony eyes

Shree :sir riya mumbai chodkar ja chuka hai ...
arjun was hell shocked hearing that

Rathod :i have 2say arjun tumne firse apne hato se sab kuch khatam kardi

Saying this everyone left the room

Arjun was all alone in the room .after few minutes he broke down & burst into tears .

Arjun :riya !!!!!!!!(he shouted )

after that arjun went 2 kolkata 2meet her .
But unfortunately reaching there he came 2 know that she had left kolkata & no one know where she had gone .
Every day arjun called her fone but it is still switched off
Every day he asked shree ,chotu .ayesha ,liza abt her but no one know abt her .



after 6 months later -
arjun is sitting in his cabin & remembering that incident .
Tears drop coming 4m his eyes .

arjun :riya tum kaha ho .ek baar bas ek bar mujhse milo ...i swr tum jo kahoge wo wahi karungi ...
plz riya lout ao

Suddenly his chain of thought break by shree 's voice .
Shree :sir rathod sir sabko conference room me bula rahi hai .
Arjun :tum jao mein ati hu .


After 10minutes every one is in conference room .

Rathod :team we have an important case .kuch terrorists ne dehradun ki ek school ko kabja kiya hai .
there r stucked many students & teachers ..we have 2 go there .cm ne un logo ko bachaneki jimedari hume di hai .
We have 2 save them at any cost .so team get ready .hume avi k av nikal na hoga .

They left 4 dehradun


Precap :
                            
                    Fight with terrorist
                    Arjun found riya
                    Arjun is shot


Enough 4 2day .plz give ur opinion .i need both likes & comments !!!
saritak thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
NICE UPDATE
LOVE IT❀️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part... Arjun regret the way he spoke to Riya but she left... 
Intresting precap update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear
was waiting 4 it
arjun ne bahut der kar di apni galti ralise karne
awww riya left
rathore blasting on arjun was mend to happen
6 months ...riya not found
i guess now bring riya back nd make arjun pay 4 what he has done 2 riya
riya is too much hurted
precape is great
update soon
will be waiting eagerly