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"Raksha''Bandhan : OS (Page 3)

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged

'Nai chahiye aapka plan... aur waise bhi iss baar meri baari hai.. jo Mannu kahegi wohi didi karegi''

''Haanjiii kyun nahin.. jaisi aapki ichha baalike'''

Loved this bit. A simple thing but really gets to the heart of them and simple sibling teasing. Their realtionshop has more than one shade abd you have incorporated as the range. Showing that they are not bound by what they are perceived.       

'Mannu koi aur samajh paaye ya na par Tu toh jaanti hai na hum shuru se Rakhi kyun baandhte aaye hain..  yeh Rakhi chahe hum ek dusre ko kalayi pe baandhte hain par hamesha se iski dor humare dilon ko ek saath baandhe rakhti aayi hai...  Humne kabhi yeh dor kamzor nahin padne di aur naa hi main ise kamzor ya tootne dena chahti hun wapis jaa ke... toh ek baat gaanth baandh le mannu.. Teri di tere liye thi, hai aur rahegi... Tere saath main Mar ke bhi jee sakti hun, par tere bina jee ke bhi main zinda nahi reh sakti Mannu aur yeh baat tu ache se jaanti hai..Aur woh jise log pathar se banaa ke poojte hain..woh ek baar toh jeet gaya humse.. lekin iss baar main use jeetne nahin dungi...Itnaa door kar chuka hai humein par ab aur nahin karne dungi...'

 

Jeevika's speech to Maanvi. Beautiful. Period. I am falling short of words. The way you explore their relation with the sincerity it deserves, is just outstanding. It just showed the ones we first fell in love with. The way they have grown but also stayed the same. As that is what happens in life. We move on but somewhere and for some people, we are always the same. We never change for them as they know us too well to even think it.      

I have to reread the last part again, you know why. But I love the philosophical side of it, that you brought out. I will read it properly and comment on that. Neha a fab job, you have excelled yourself and the way you write these two, no one else can. We all a speck in your dust.   

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
awesome
loved it
nowadays jeeman are alive only through these stories
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:50am | IP Logged
awesome os
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:53am | IP Logged
This is undoubtedly the BEST and most PERFECT jeeman os I have ever read!! Keep makin more! <3
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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 6:33am | IP Logged
omg ..i just read it ...
this is just exceptional ... kithon leande ho eh idea ... as i said earlier if one dies other will not cry but will be dead from inside and u gave life to that imagination ...

this is just ... words ni mil rahe
will post a looonggg comment as soon as i reach home ...

thank you so much
this has given me the peace i wanted
rest u know everything

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This is an awesome piece of work...Love the way u write...Smile
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 12:35am | IP Logged
beautiful...flawless...loved it
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u always leave me speechless with ur stories  <3
uve nailed it!
ur the best jeeman writer ive ever come acroos :))

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