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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged

Part 18

few days passed as zoya and hummy finally got discharged from hospital.Both khan brothers thought that now that life have tested them , they will make sure that everything would only get better for their princess..little did they know things were not the same..espeacially for asad and zoya.

From the day zoya was awake from a long deadly sleep ..asad tried his best to make her comfortable around him..but it all failed..every attempts of asad got washed off in fear by zoya..she was never the same...

asad could sware to give on his life to make her speak a word to him...but she dint ever said anything..the moment asad tried to touch her , she used to jump of bed in fear and scream like anything ..screams were evident of her pain..coz no words involved in it..sometimes humera presence would make her calm otherwise doctor have to take care of her and that would be painful view for asad..those needles were not only piercing her body but in his soul..

"zoya!" asad spoke between his hicups as a tear drop fell from his eyes. a knock at the door pulled him out of his reverie..

"bhaijaan" ayaan spoke in low tone..

"hmm.." asad just hummed him

"bhaijaan...ap theek hai na?" ayaan inquired as asad was looking too broken..

asad catch his tears with his index finger and turned to look at him.they both were sitting on cold floor..

"hummera kaise hai?"asad asked concerned

"she is fine... i am with her bhaijaan she will recover soon.." ayaan said as controlling himself to break in front of his bro

ayaan lied to asad coz he dint wanted to add another burden on asad of guilt..No doubt that ayaan have tried to take hummy out of this shock..but as you say every loss brings sadness and sorrow.The loss of pregnancy is no different.ayaan tried to spend as much as time he gets with her which was almost full minutes of a day..when ever hummy eyes got teary he immediately use to hug her tight contantly repeating words in her ears.."everything is good...everything is fine" where she use to sob constantly under his arms..
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asad piped a little in ayaan's room and found the couples weeping in each other arms..he too had tear..all he could blame to for now was himself..because of him this things took place..he sighed and walked towards zoya room to serve her supper..
he was mentally prepared for her reaction and so after taking few long deep breathes he finnaly courage to open the door.


he found zoya sitting at the edge of the room beside bed , pulling her knees against her chest. she was lost as always ..head burried between her knees..
asad swallowed hard as he saw her condition..his mind screamed that it was all his fault..it added to his guilt more and then doctors voice played in his head all over again.." she is been forced again and again..who ever did this is no human!" asad shook his head inorder to stop the words flowing his ears,  eyes had turned red by now..he gather more courage to walk towards her..
as he reached, he kept the bowl aside and sat beside her on floor..he brushed her hair tenderly and holded her arm mildly causing her to raise her head..

she looked all torn , eyes had swollen coz of crying ..she look no different just lost pale and torn..

asad felt more pain in him as she looked at him softly and then her eyes went wide of fear followed by another anxiety attack..it was 9 in the row she had in past 4 days..

"baby..dont...dont!" asad tried to touch her as she panicked and jerked his hand away..she moved rubbing herself against floor in order to move away from him..

asad moved closure to her trying to cup her face..
"baby..please..please baby..dont get scared of me..baby!" he said as he succesfully cuped her fand in both hands but the next moment zoya pushed his hand away making him actually ofbalance on his knees...asad quickly kneeled back and holded her tight ...

"zoya...zoya...please ..zoya.." asad tried touching her but she just pushed him away...

asad had enuf of her silence and now he wanted his zoya back as normal..his lively innocent zoya and not this living corpse..


the moment asad face got near her she started screaming badly..which made ayra run to their rooms..

"bhai bhai...chorro use bhai.." ayaan said trying to pull asad away from zoya..


"zoya zoya...talk to me...zoya ...zoya!! r u listening?? zoya...answer me damn it!" asad said as he holded her hand tight not letting her go while ayaan tried to take his bro away..

zoya started screaming badly which made humera flinched.
she literally ran to zoya and hugged her tight.." kuch nai aapi ..kuch nai..!" humera said as she brushed her face wiping teras off..she pulled asad's hand off her sisters  quickly and buried her in an embrace..

ayaan  now was succeded in pulling asad away ..ayaan made him stand at a distance away from zoya..
"bhaijaan mat jaiye unke paas...you know she gets all panick and scared the moment she feel your presence..to ap kyu karte hai aisa?"
ayaan gently kept a hand over asad's shoulder like an emotional support..


"nai ayaan aj nai!...she have to speak to me..wo aise kab tak jiyengi...nai ..unhe unka dard gussa sab bahara lana hoga ..if it means by hurting me..its ok but i will make her talk today..

asad walked towards zoya breaking the barrier of humera and ayaan in middle ..he picked her up on feet and lifting her on his arms he moved to other room bolting it from behind..humera ran behind him to stop but ayaan holded her and nodded his head in no..

he wiped her tears and pulled her in tight hug...watching asad leave..

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"hello mr siddique..!!" rose spoke from other end..

"hello!" gaffur said stern

"apki talash main khatam kar sakti hu...if u give me what i ask for.." rose replied

"what u want?" gaffur asked..

"zoya's life.." rose said it softly yet dtermined...


she clutched the piece of paper in her hand which has written

A B C D E F G H I J K L
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 01 02 03...

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asad walked in the room with zoya who was now struggling in his arms to get his hand off her..

asad put her on bed softly making her sit with help..

he too sat beside her..

"zoya..jaan ..look at me!" he said calmly so as to dont scare her more..but she was already freaking here..

asad took his hand close to her hair when she fliched and tried to escape...
asad quickly holded her back...

"stop it zoya..!! dont run!" he said as he holded her tightly in his arms..

he felt as if zoya was trying to attempt to speak a word..

he quickly slipped his finger near her ear and kissed her lightly..

she jumped off to sway his hand off her..

"you have to come back jan..u know how much i love you baby...if not for me ..come back to life for hummy...she need you jaan ..i need you!"he said as he released his grip over her..and trail of tears flowed thru his eyes...

as soon as his hands left her she started to move off bed...when he holded her hand again..."dont run ! face me!! take out what ever you have in you..all the emotions take it out on me jaan!" he said as he holded her head with one hand..burying fingers deep in her hair..

it was looking like zoya axiety attack was getting worse..so as to calm it down ..he left her for a while and walked off the bed..

"i am sorry ..i am so sorry jaan...i know i messed up everything...but i wanna fix it back badly...please baby..come back for me..i cant see you like this" he said as he took his head in his hand...

"le-leave..leav me!" words uttered after days from those pale lips...and as asad got his world he looked at zoya with a unbeleivable smile and got close to her to hug her..but zoya again jumped off.

asad pulled her close to his heart and made her forcefully rest her head on his chest..

she struggled but dint do anything particular to get away..so he hugged her tighter...

he pulled her a little and kissed her forehead and then gently leaned to take her lips..she was shivering in pain in fear..come what you think but she was...
this time he dint stop he made it sure to shower every drop of his love on her..he cuddled with her..he rubbed her back ...he kissed on her forehead occasionally..his heart beat was like a soft lullaby for  zoya ears which made her eye lashes to hug each other tightly nd soon she fell asleep...finally after days she was peacefully sleeping..asad looked at her at she slept and brushed her hair over face pecking it lightly on her lips...he promised himself that come what may..he wont leve her side even for a second now..he dint wanted to have her another round of attack or another series of nightmare ...he looked t her sleeping so calm with a  satisfied and a broad smile on his face coz he knew tomoro morning will bring every happiness back...and soon the sleep covered his eyes tooo...

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nikhat are you ok? came a voice from the door..

nikhat nodded her head in yes..

the man walked in ..he was imraan...

imraan looked all worried as he saw nikhat in hospital bed..
he sat beside her holding her hand tight..what shocked nikhat more was the watch in imraans hand

"where did you get this?" she asked as he kissed on her forehead

"um..uh its a gift" he said
its just like armaan's watch...or is it the same...she thought drowning in the thought in every second ...
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 i frenz now you can run to get the name on it,,,,LOL

hey before that i want you all to wish my dear frend SOWMU aka ASYA MANIAC...
she had turned a red light now!!! signaal kahinkiLOL i mean she had turned rocker nowBig smile
 
please dont forget to wish her...
thanks to every one who had commented and who had tried their best in breking the code specially two bandiya here..
1) honeybunch
2) zubbi...
 
jaan le li tum dono ne..ap jawab mila???LOL 
thanks milli
 


Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 26 August 2013 at 7:30am

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Milliii!!!! Ye toh fir se best wala part hai yaar! I mean wow! Yaar how can u write so well ha?

Zoya's condition...OMG! And Asad's guilt...yaar tune toh mar hi dala...

Aww! Poor baby hummy...feeling bad for hummy and ayan...

Finally Zoya kuch boli...yeee! And the scene after that u described...hayye! ye toh star scene hai yaar...

Haila! Ab iss rose ko kya huyi? Zoya's lyf chahiye matlab? Zoya zinda chahiye ya dead? Confused

I tell u agar kuch ulta sidha huya na toh partner k sath milke mei bhi iss rose k petals tor dungi! Angry

Ab immy ko Armaan ka watch kisne gift kiya? Shocked

Aur ye code ka raaz hai kya yaar?!


Jaldi cont kariyo...m waiting...

Ps. Part itna mast tha ki raat tak wait nehi kar payi...vagte vagte comment kar diya Embarrassed LOL



Edited by Fimmy - 24 August 2013 at 6:30am

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 9:41am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 10:51am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged

MES ab mein kyaaa kahoon iss update ke bare mein ...Embarrassed 

 
IM SPEECHLESS... Embarrassed 
 
ghooor mat...LOL bolti hun...LOL
 
MES this was my favourite update... Embarrassed 
 
I know I know har update meri favourite hoti hai...Embarrassed LOL 
 
but I caant help it tu likhti hiii itnaaa achha hai tht im bound to say ths...EmbarrassedThumbs Up
 
this was my so favourite update ... im ought to say moore favourite than mangalpur...Embarrassed 
 
albeit im a huuuge mangalpur deeewaaaniiiDay Dreaming
 
but mangalpur was something that I dint expect from this story ...
 
and ALLL THAAANKS TO YOU MY SWEET HEART I GOT IT THAT IN A MOOOST BEAUTIFUL WAY...EmbarrassedClapClapClapClapClap
 
but ..but...but this was something I WAS DIENG TO READ...
 
REGRET AND REDEMPTION IS SOMETHING I was looking forward to since the very beginning n I think I mentioned it tooo in 1 of my comments!!!!
 
welll MES beilive me this was written sooo nicellly...
 
U DESCRIIIBED ASAD'S GUILT and ZOYA'S FEAR sooo welll...
 
KUDOOS TO U... ClapClapClapClapClapClapThumbs Up
 
asads continuous efforts to make zoya speak up despite of zoyas constant disapproval was something worth reading...
 
n worth praising tooo...EmbarrassedStar
 
LOVED THE UPDATE FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART N I THANK YOU FOR THE SAME...EmbarrassedHug
 
 


Edited by ZUBIDUBI1 - 26 August 2013 at 9:16am

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Your last lines scared me...
What are you planning???
Asad's guilt is increasing every moment... Zoya won't remember any of these events n probably will blame Asad...
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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
This was one hell of a violent update!!
So Humz has lost the baby..and Zoya is no longer Asad's?? 

p.s- main nahi soyi...ye bolna bhi meri ab aadaat si ho gayi hai...lol
sorry for the late comment...was really busy at work:(
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