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Wonderful update dr!!!👏

Loved the update Milli...
amazing writer u r...

i came across ur ff, 3 days back... n till yester's mornin i was done with alll lengthy 23 parts...

Amazing plot u hav woven,,,
a different concept with execution in best posible way,,,

i just loved ur update,,
finally they got in nikah... now zoya may get better on trusting asad!!

Nice update. But i m confused how became zoya pregnent for 1 or 1/2 months. According to timeline the torture happend more than 20 days ago. Please clear this confusion. I m also confused about the characters now. In every update u enter a new character and i m realy unable to connect each other.If possible can u give now a rough character sketch.Please preety please if posssible ok. Nice that asya nikah happen and zoya is pregnent. But i have doubt is Zoya realy said Qubool Hai or khala said it.But i dont like zoya's pregnency now. I know this is needed for your upcoming track. But i think the child give slight pain to both asya. This always remember zoya that she became pregnent when asad forcefully sex with her. Which is sometime not give her peace because whenever she show the child, deep  in her heart she remember that this child is not the symbol of their love. This is symbol of asad's torture on her. Similarly asad also remember that in which circumstances he impregnate zoya. He remember that due to his torture she is pregnent. Which is also give asad a bad taste in future. He whenever watch the child deep in his heart he felt a slight pain that what he done with zoya. So i think if you dont make zoya pregnet toh jyada better hota. And i want due to any reason Zoya lost this child.Because i think when ASYA sort out all their problems and full in love with each other and trust each other this is the time for  Zoya's pregnency. because this reminds them that this is the symbol of their love, not symbol of torture. So i realy hope u make it this way. Please dont mind. this is entirely my POV. And one thing i m realy very bad in words so ignore my mistakes please.Thanks for pm and update next part soon. Edited by AAK0007 - 10 years ago

i m going to do suicide...
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unres
suicide as u know bcoz i wrote a big comment n i pressed clear form

ok now leaving my dukhbhari kahani i come to ur update...
it was superb dear... as usual 😃
so zoya is pregnant n wow nikaah bhi ho gaya (kaash ye show pe bhi ho jaye) 🤣 🤣...
but one question same as ayra zoya ne qubool hai bola na? ki khala only said. . as zoya was not in her senses...
so nikhat is caught by imraan... but he seems nyc guy na...
n Rose is at siddiquis... wats wid her?
she can easily be killed...
n hope so zoya doesnt misunderstand asad

@some bashers yes bashers bcoz u guys dont know wat is positive criticism if u dont like something...
n i m sure u didnt read her story from beginning... r u guys out of her mind ... from where u think d story is all about rape ...babes this happen in real life n milli potrayed dat.   if u want a mushy mushy story, u will get many in dis forum... pls dont waste ur time n our sanity in writing & reading ur comments respectively..

n millu i luv u ab jaldi jaldi update karna.

hatts of to u sweethrt ..

n ignore some ppl...


bohot lamba comment ho gaya na? Edited by ar-n-only-ar - 10 years ago

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i m going to do suicide...
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awesome work

OSUM DI...SO FINALLY ASAD AUR ZOYA EK HO HI GYE HAI ...

most beautiful part!!!!

Haiii...very nice part...nikaah hogyaa 😳 😲   😳 ...acha aur aik queation b...najma kon thi bhala??mmm..main bhool gai ...aur akram b aagyaa...now i want chineae mummy urf rajveer too in one of the parts 😆 ...allah miaa gee...meri demaands 😆 ...ok once again...very nice part... 👏 😊