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Posted: 24 September 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
after friday u should be update it.

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Jannat94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 5:12am | IP Logged

Hello Beautiful...This is my Gift for u hope U like it...Read from PC or lappy...happy Reading




Dangerous Love



Chapter 4



Diya stands there for some moment like a statue, her mind was numb. Tray is slipping from her hand but she come out from her trance and holds it tightly... She was damn sure Manvi was convinced and stop Virat with her innocent or stupid but here everything is opposite. Virat is much smarter than she think and now She is with him or cuddling with like no tomorrows might be bare... That's means Virat and Manvi did that...

She was hurt and closed her eyes tight don't want to see anything more.. And moved out from the room...





Virat saw her face which tells what she think and he more cuddled to her for giving her proof and he is happy now... Virat hears her soft snoring which gives him sweet smile on her face. He feels so relaxed when she is with him. In London so many girls came to him but he knows what he wants and that is her and only her. No girl gives the pleasure if they do something but she gives him without doing anything...





Manvi again stir in her sleep and hers soft supple lip create havocs in him as he say she didn't do it intentionally but gives him immense pleasure... He pulled her more closure to feel her on his skin more... Now he can't bear this torture more and starts giving soft kisses on her face, neck area of sensitive skin which disturb her sleep and she start soft moaning... Which gives him happiness and he smile or smirk, the effect he had on her? He stops his torture and looked at her lovingly.




Some moment later Manvi open her eyes and saw him staring at her with love... He remove fringe from her face which disturb her...




"Good Morning Jaan", Virat peck on her forehead and in return her face is crimson red.




"Morning Virat", she said sweetly her lashes is down




Virat pinned her under him and "so how u feel" he asked mischievously




Manvi don't understand his meaning or him said, "I'm good Virat what happen to me" very innocently




This time he won't smirk only but smiled on her innocence... But he won't stop



He come closure to her and she is looking into her eye to search "What" he exactly want her to ask but due to closeness and mischiefs she didn't find.



"Tell me Virat what u want to ask" she asked innocently




He come more closure to her ears and said "how u feel, sleeping with me, in my arms"? With smirk this time




Now she register in her innocent mind what he trying to ask and moreover she now register that what happen last night and she was sleeping with him in his arms and on his bed and that too in that dress... She is beet root red and she closed her eyes... Virat smile on her antics and kisses her tip of nose and get off on her with a wide smile...



"I didn't do anything and she behaves like this what will happen when I do something" he think and smiled at his own thought."



"He gets off from bed saying go to ur room and fresh up... We had to share marriage news to Jeevika and Jiju..." he declared



Scene Shift



Diya was furious, angry how her plan flops again... She through everything here and there



"He is Mine Only Mine, No Manvi in this world snatch u from Me Virat" she scream and crying



"I love him, I don't want to hurt u but now u cross ur limit Manvi and Now u have to die otherwise Virat will not love me" She think

She made her room clumsy and crying to saw Manvi in that condition with Virat."




Breakfast Table



"Di, Jiju, I want to marry her within a week." Virat declared



Diya food was choked and she start coughing badly

 "Di R U okie" Manvi asked with concern



All looks at Diya and Manvi immediately gives water... Diya drink it and excuse herself without saying anything...



Leaving smirking Virat




"But what is so hurry Virat" Viren said



"Bhai Manvi complete her college and Me also achieved everything which I desire so I don't think so, it is hurry" Virat determinedly said



"Virat, Manvi is still young to relationship u knew it right" Jeevika made him understand



Manvi somehow agree with Jeevika but she can't deny any of his decision



"Di, I know Manvi inside out and I only said marrying her nothing else, I'm with her and made her understand what is relation and its duties." Virat declared




Manvi listen to them and thought... Virat loves her that the biggest reality everybody has some good quality and bad, no one is perfect and he never intentionally hurts her but his anger overpower him and he scare her but if he decide to marriage than its better for both of us... And finally she made her mind, she is his already than why she back out from this. She is with him in every condition.




"Di, Jiju, I'm also with Virat, if he is with me than I don't need anything... He is good teacher and will teach me further." she said innocent




"Now Virat is top of the world hearing her, his happiness is beyond any limit... He is happy Manvi, herself accede with him in his decision" He looked her surprisingly yet lovingly




Yes he had to work hard on her as she didn't know what a husband or wife relation but he is not in hurry, he slowly-2 made her understand if she is with him.




"If u both made decision than what we say, its ur life and we are happy for both of U." Jeevika and Viren said




"There are so many functions before marriage and we had very less time and more work" Jeevika said in tension




"Di Jeevika don't take tension" Virat and Viren said




"Di first I want to made our engagement officially so arrange it first", Virat said



"We'll arrange everything and tomorrow u announce ur engagement with her" Viren said




"But" Jeevika



"No but Jeevika, everything goes well" Viren said



"I'll talk to priest first" Jeevika said




They all nodded



"But Don't forget, we already made program 4 dinner outside" Viren said with smile




All again nodded their head



Later Jeevika call priest talking about ceremony and marriage decision...



 "Jeevika Beta, there is a problem in Manvi's Kundali" Priest said



"What problem" Jeevika asked panicky



"Beta Virat and Manvi are made 4 each other but in Manvi Kundali, it show there is something will be happen to her if she cross it successfully only then Virat and Manvi will get into marry", Priest said




"Something happen to her mean I mean" Jeevika said in low voice




"Don't worry Jeevika now she will be with u all, nothing bad happen to her." Priest said

"I'll pray to God to give blessing to Virat and Manvi" he added and later he left



"Jeevika is worried like anything, what gonna happen next now in their life"





In Evening



They all get ready for the dinner party which is given by Viren... Jeevika wore a pink netted sari looking extremely beautiful and Viren wore casual wear Simple royal blue jean and white shirt looking hot. Diya wear a red color gown looking good.

Other side Manvi wore a simple black suit which enhance her skin tone and made her look gorgeous, Virat on the other hand matched Manvi's dress and wear black jeans or black shirt (U can imagine how he looks.) He decide her dress for today's evening, he always decide what she wear or what not and everything...



Viren, Jeevika and Diya went in one car and Manvi, Virat in other car... They both reached the destination...

They Gave car keys to hotel employee and made their entry in hotel.





Viren already reserved their seat and waiter escorts them to have their seats...


They order their dinner and take time so Diya in husky voice asked Virat for dance...



"Virat, If U don't mind let one dance together" Diya asked


Before he replied to her


Viren And Jeevik said, "No Diya, its not look good now on."



Diya is extremely frustrated with them and at yet she is more... Her face dull with ignorance...



Manvi watched her and said


Manvi: if Di insists U go for one dance.

Diya: Evilly smirk and take him on podium for dance...




Virat want to deny her but how could he say No her innocence and same time little angry "Why she can't understand Diya's real intention."



But he nodded in yes



Then Viren also asked Jeevika and they also left to dance floor area and music is so passionate which give different aura..







Diya pulled him more close to her and want to stick but Virat gaze was fixed on her Innocent Princess but he feel disgusted but control his anger not want to create scene here...



When his attention again goes to her Princess and one guy talk to her or asked her something...


Virat: boiled in rage seeing Manvi talking to other Guy...


He can't see her face but it's enough for his to control... His hand which placed on her waist squeeze so hart that she hissed in pain and let him Go and Virat without looking at her goes to Manvi...




"Excuse Me" he roars



The Guy straightens himself and Virat saw her frighten face.




"What happening here" Virat said in anger



"Dude she was alone so I thought of giving her company and I asked for dance but she constantly refuse so..." he said




But before he said something more Virat pulled her closure to him and said "she ain't alone, get away from here." his voices clearly show rage or authority that she is his and only his...




The guy left without saying one more word due to his angry eyes...



Virat take her forcefully to safe or isolated place so that no one can see them, Manvi tries to talk to him but no use, his anger overpower him...



He pinned them to the nearest wall...Virat blocked her way and reduce gap between them and closed to her dangerously his eyes was red in anger this time... , before she said anything



He slammed his lips on hers and takes his all frustration on her, kissed her fiercely...



This is too much for innocent soul and her eyes shed tears due to pain or hurt, she can't stop him now so she let him do.


A minute later Virat come back on his sense and pulled out from kiss, saw her teary face... He immediately hugs her tightly




"I'm sorry Jaan, I don't want to hurt u but" Virat explain his action



But Manvi cuts him



"I... It.. Its o..ok...okay V... Vi... Virat, I... I understand" Manvi replied but stammer a lot not able to talk and hugs him tight from her tiny hands...




"Manvi I don't want to dance nor does anything other than U...Get it. Do force me ever again..."



"She nodded" with her teary eyes



Virat come out from hugs, wipes her strain of tears from her angelic face and take her to dance floor... The same passionate song and Diya saw them the whole scene and heartbroken again




Virat pulled her closure to him place her both hand on his shoulder, his both hand securely place around her tiny waist and they dance with rhythm... Viren And Jeevika saw them and happy for both but still worried for Manvi...




...What happen next she thought...









Thanx for ur responses... And Thanx for everything...Misty love u little sister.. Thank you so much, Jia Thanks a lot Sweety, Rosefarvin thanx a lot sweety, Kicha thank you so u all

Sidrah Heart

Edited by Jannat94 - 27 September 2013 at 5:23am

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prathe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged
wow super...something will happen to manvi...hopefully nothing serious dear...loved manvi innocence  and virats angry young man avata in ur story dear loved it...and that was possible cos u have written it very well ..hats off to u ...dear loved the continue soon dear

and yes me first to comment yipeee...Smile

Edited by prathe - 27 September 2013 at 5:29am

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hangok IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 5:31am | IP Logged
im happy to read that virat kissed manvi im relieved Smile
but poor manvi she is soo innocent,
hope nothing happens to her...

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Kicha111 Senior Member

Joined: 01 July 2013
Posts: 616

Posted: 27 September 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Wonderful update
Smethng bad gona happen 4 manvi...hope hr saviour helps hr frm evils
Diya misunderstood d situation nd virat enjoying hr expression
manvi s so innocent 2 understand diya's real intention
Nw virat wl bcme manvi's teacher
 Do cont soon dear
wait'g eagerly 4 nxt part

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pink1 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7401

Posted: 27 September 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged
nice update what will happen to her in future
and what divya planning to hurt her
he will save her or he also hurt
her and update soon this time
don't be late

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manuthi Senior Member

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 5:53am | IP Logged
nice update...
thanks for pm...

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preethi18 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Wonderful update...ur really sweet was nice  n i luvd itHug

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