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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Amazing, yet quite a emotional and heart breaking update.

Poor Shyam, wants to question his mother as well as wants comfort from her. 

Feeling so sorry for Shyam when he was at the hospital, his feelings and emotions are confusing him so much. 

The conversation between Arnav and Shyam at the hospital was so heart breaking and emotional. 

Loved the way he questioned Shashi about Dharmachand, his forceful way definitely helped. 

Awww poor Prem at the end was listening to Shyam threatening his dad, told him that only he or Yash can decide his dads fate. 

Loved the update, it was a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx 


Edited by P4rveen12 - 10 September 2013 at 5:42am

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 5:48am | IP Logged
i have no words  today 
this update perhaps is the strongest and powerful piece of writing i have read in a long time
esp. what shyam says ...i can connect him somethings Krishnaji says in the Gita. Below is the precise portion i identfy most in this story perhaps also due to my personal circumstances
Facing some truths kills a man," he said to himself, rather than to Arnav, "and weakens him in every possible way. Swallowing one's pain gives him immense power... a will power to destroy the person who inflicts him with this unbearable pain, Arnav. Reducing a broken heart's burden makes him a dead meat.

Prems pain is almost coming in fumes ...ah

the intensity the angst the pathos superb


Edited by AnjuRish - 10 September 2013 at 5:55am

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
glad that Prem said that.. hope Shashi & DM face worse in their lives..

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged
nice...
honesty,sincerity ,truth will win
Now Sashi gupta can't see his son's face because of his deeds...

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Love the transformation of Shyam and the way he handled Shashi.

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That was a fabulous update with strength of Shyam displayed. The cold strength inherited from bloodline mixed with strength  imbibed from Arjun and Arnav!
Its like Mahabharata. Each have their strength and their weakness.
But who can control their weakness is the winner! But winner at the loss of certain blood relations! Loved it dear.

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Is prem want kill shashi by own hands...
Arjun and shyam relation is strong...awesome up date

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 6:27am | IP Logged
portraying shyam as a strong headed and giving him ability see things in adverse condition is quite awesome

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