Rishbala SS- Junoon Tere Ishq Ka (Part 15 page 41) 21/10 Completed. - Page 14

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by punam2712


REMINDED ME OF CHENNAI EXPRESS
BUT RISHAB IS TAKING A BIG RISK
BALRAJ WILL NEVER ACCEPT THEIR MATCH
Lets see what happens next😉...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by titli4love


Nice updt. Bt u didnt pm me last updt? Very bad!!
Really very sorry by mistake it must have happened...once again sorry titli...thnks for cmmnting...
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Janani24


nice update dear n after the leap i hope they have a more closer relationship😊
Thanks!!!!😊😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by mydrashti


deepali is rk s sisterr😲🤣wooow amazinggg eagerrr to knw moreee as i m reading this ff fr the first time jst read the prolouge n dips catch  my attention😆 will comment further after reading all parts bt the concept is realyy worth to read👍🏼

Thank you very much dear!!!!!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by akankshasehgal


i read it one go nice waiting for next .
Thank you!!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by singhshailesh86


superawesome update
this story becoming day by day intresting & taking a lovely route which will lead a beautiful relationship
thanks for pm & continue soon
Thank you!!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Prarthna.B


Lovely update :) loved the stairs climbing scene :)
Thank you!!!!😊😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sneha.98


Ghosh it was seriously the effect of chennai express from the rishab's entry. The famous dialouge of s.r.k don't underestimate...just read all ur updates and loved it. If u can then surely pm me ur next updates please.

I luved Chennai Express a looot...so thought of putting it here...😊 thank you very much for liking it and will surely pm you the next time...😊😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by azrazaid


Awesome updates !! read today only I read ur other ff so I got pm for this also
so much thanx for d pm
bcoz of d pmsi came across this awesome story new concept jst loved read today in a go !!!!!!!1
jst loved it <3 <3 <3 <3
Thank you very very much!!!!!😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10

Rishab put her down in the seat before the idol of god. While Madhu was too astonished to speak anything, RK was taking quick short breaths and panting a bit.

Panditjee- (to RK)- Tumhara naam batao beta.

RK- Rishab Kundra.

P- (to Madhu) Tumhara?

M- Madhubala Sh...

Befor she could complete, Panditjee had already started to do the puja. He spoke the mantra, "Om pujya Rishab Kundra dharampatni Madhubala Rishab Kundra..." Madhu was hell shocked and was about to interrupt when RK softly said, "Puja ke beech Panditjee ko rokna theek nahi hoga. Chup ho jao."

After completing the puja, Rishab and Madhu came out of the mandir. RK could sense Madhu's discomfort and to lightan the atmosphere he said, "Ab neeche bhi kya utha ke le jaau??"

Madhu gave a faint smile and started to go down.

RK- Iss bar tum mujhe uthake le chalo na Madhu...

Madhu did not reply and continued walking.

Now RK was very much angry with Madhu's strange behaviour. He pulled Madhu's hand and said, "Yeh kya chal raha hai Madhu? Itni roothi roothi si kyun ho?"

M- Kuch nahi hua Rishabjee.

RK- Madhu jhooth bolna band karo main jaanta hoon ki kuch to hua hoga.

M- Nahi sach mein

RK- Madhu, kyun tum mujhse itni door door bhaag rahi ho?

M- Kyunki mujhe yeh sab accha nahi lag raha hai.

RK- Kya accha nahi lag raha hai?

M- Yehi sab. Aapka aaj yaha iss tarh se mujhe utha ke mandir mnein le aana. Uss din Mahaveer se mujhe bachana, meri shaadi ko leke jor dena, aaj panditjee ko puja ke waqt nahi rokna...aapko pata hai...panditjee ne meri pooja mein mujhe aapki patni ka sambodhan kiya tha...kyun aap itna sab kuch kar rahe hai Rishabjee?

RK- Kyunki main tumhari bhalai chahta hoon Madhu.

M- Rishabjee meri bhalai both log chahte hain...par unmein se koi bhi mujhe shaadi karne ya khushiyaan manane ko nahi kehta hain..

RK- Sab mein aur mujh mein fark hai Madhu. Mujhse tumhara yeh haal nahi dekha jata hai. Nahi accha lagta hai mujhe tumhaara iss tarah se dukh mein jeena. Nahi sah sakta main yeh sab.

M- Kyun nahi she sakte aap yeh sab? Yeh sab kuch to mere saath ho raha hai na? Aapko kyun accha nahi lagta?

RK- Kyunki agar tumhe dard hota hai to mujhe bhi dard hota hai, tumhare dukh se mujhe bhi dukh hota hai. Tumhe khushi hoti hai to mujhe bhi khushi hoti hai. Issliye nahi dekh sakta main tumhe takleef mein.

M- Kyun Rishabjee? Yeh meri zindagi hai,mujhe agar kuch bhi ho to aapko kyun kyun fark padta hai? Kyun aapko takleef hoti hai mujhe takleef mein dekhke? Kyun Rishabjee?? Kyun??

RK- KYUNKI MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON!!!!!!

 

Madhu was taken aback. She did not expect this from RK. She felt an anger creeping down her body and a sudden urge to slap RK tightly.

RK himself was surprised. He knew that he liked Madhu a lot but did he love her? Of course he did or else it would not have come out so flawlessly from his mouth. Deep inside his heart he felt his love for her. He held Madhu by her shoulders and said, "Main jaanta hoon Madhu ki tumhe yeh sunke bilkul bhi accha nahi lag raha hai...I...I am sorry Madhu, par main tumse sach mein pyaar karta hoon. Tum mere liye dusri ladkiyon se bilkul alag ho, pata nahi kab kaise yeh hua mere saath, itna pyaar, itna lagaav kissike liye mujhe kabhi nahi hua...pls Madhu samjho..."

Madhu jerked him back and started backing with hatred filled in her eyes.

M- Mujhe...aapse...nafrat hai...

Saying this she ran away. Rishab was very surprised  with Madhu's statement. He never thought that Madhu would hate him one day. He thought that both of them needed some time. RK returned to haveli at evening. But Deepali gave him the saddest news of his life. Madhu had moved into choti haveli and had asked Deepali to tell RK not to keep any relation with her. RK was heartbroken but he decided to respect her decision.

 

Six months later

 

These six months were the dreadliest six months for Rishbala...both missed each other so much but did not meet each other. Madhu did not want to meet him and Rishab decided not to meet her. Everyday they used to think about each other a lot but never went to meet each other.

One morning a maid came to Choti Haveli and called Madhu, "Choti Chaudhurain.."

M- Kya baat hai???

Maid- Wo mujhe Deepali Bhabhi ne bheja hai...unke bhaisaab aaj sheher wapas jaa rahe hai to unhone kaha ki main aapko khabar de doon...agar aap unse milna chahti hai to mil lijiye

Madhu's heart skipped a beat but still she did not let any expression cross her face and said, "Mujhe nahi aana hai...unse keh dena."

Finally RK was ready to leave. Deepali who was now six months pregnant, was also coming with him as the girl's first child is always born in his/her maternal uncle's house and in city there would be more good facilities for Deepali. RK searched for Madhu everywhere but could not find her. Finally he went to choti Haveli.

Madhu was thinking about RK's departure. She did want to meet him for the last ime but she could not. Suddenly she came out of her thoughts when she heard RK's voice.

RK- Madhu...main jaanta hoon kit um meri shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahti ho. Par ek baar meri baaat soon lo...main jaa raha hoon. Humesha ke liye. Aage kabhi hi tumhari zindagi mein nahi aaunga. Bas ek aakhri baar tum mujhse baat kar lo. Please...

Madhu got inside another and closed the door. RK understoond that she is not going to talk anymore and so e left.

Madhu crying inside the room. She couldn't hold her tears anymore. She started questioning, "Kyun aaye aap meri zindagi meinRishabjee? Aapke aane se pehe sab theek tha...kyun aap mujhse pyaar karne lage...aur jab pyaar hi karne lage hai to ab wapas kyun jaa rahe hai?? Mujhe yaha akela chorkar??? Main...nahi rah sakti aapke bina...aaj aapse main aakhribaar mil sakti hoon...mujhe jana hoga...ek aakhri baar unse milne..."

Saying this she stood up and opened the door. She did not find him there and went to Badi Haveli to enquire. There she was told that RK and Deepali had left in a car. Madhu ran towards the main road from the cars travel. After rumming for a quite long time she found there car and ran in another direction from where she she could see the car sideways.

RK was looking out of the window of the car and thinking about Madhu. He had told Deepali about his feelings and Deeplai supported it but since Madhu was against it she could not do anything. Suddenly RK saw a female figure standing a bit far from the ca sideways. He recognized her and thought, "Madhu yaha kya kar rahi hai?"

Rishbala could see each other now. Both of their eyes met. Madhu constantly stared at the car until it disappeared from her vision. She cried her heart out. There RK, who also saw Madhu, felt a tear escaping from his eyes. He thought, "Kash tum meri hoti." 

BG- Waqt Ke Kitne Nishaan Hai 
Zarei Zarei Mein Yahan
Doston Ke Saath Ke Pal 
Kuch Hasen Kuch Gumjada

Sab Hua Abb To Fanna
Bas Raha Baki Dhuan


Ab Sare Bandhan tod Ke
Yaadon Ko Tanha Chod Ke
Mein Ghum Se Rista Jod Ke Jau Kahan

Ab Sare Bandhan tod Ke
Yaadon Ko Tanha Chod Ke
Mein Ghum Se Rista Jod Ke Jau Kahan???


{Jaaoon Kahaan- Billu}

 

...

 

Madhu went back home and directly came to her room. She closed the door and started to cry pitifully. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. Madhu wiped all her tears and opened the door. But after seeing the person in front of her, she was shocked.


Precap: Madhu's marriage has been fixed with Mahaveer...RK's sixth sense tells him that something is wrong...


Sorry for the mistakes...

Edited by rg0782 - 10 years ago


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