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aycma98 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
I apologize for this late comment. 

Oh wow! Jenny, you really do have a knack for words. You put together such beautiful sentences, that although it wasn't too graphic, it conveyed exactly how they felt. I didn't have to watch them doing the deed to know how they felt. 

It was a beautiful update. Years later, their dream finally came true...

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
awesome...beautiful end... 

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sushan Senior Member
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
Wow!!! amazing. I am not a writer so I can not express very well myself,but I have to tell you this I controlled my emotions real hard till part 19 but part 20 on wards  I could not stop myself I cried first time reading that part and after that I stopped even trying and let  my feelings flow. You really have bring out Khushi's lonely feeling , her hesitation in accepting anything from Arnav, not able to stand for herself in front of her Granny because she took care of her as her own mother left her.I could tell that you have wrote it all very well as I felt the same as I am adopted and feels the same.I had no say in my marriage got married at 19 ,but the good thing is I have a loving husband he has all the characteristic of  this Arnav including the use of flowery language,only thing is missing is- he is not rich business tycoon, but I love him.Sorry I got carried away coming back to the story it is so true staying away from real parents does bring some permanent changes in a persons personality I wonder how do you know this ? but I loved reading it.Please keep writing you are amazing writer 

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
its 29th!:D

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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Missing you Jenny and waiting for Mr. foster and his Khushi Wink

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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
superb Hug

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priyalovely IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
waitinggg...misss uuu...comeee soonnn...

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged
finally 29th!!!:D
cant wait for the chapter anymore!

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