Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

A Late Spring Removed. (Page 64)

tina_1234 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 June 2009
Posts: 9399

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Amazin part

Edited by tina_1234 - 29 August 2013 at 1:07pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


vgedin IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 August 2012
Posts: 4772

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Not even Page 1? Uff! Ouch

Jenny, I hope we're getting an epilogue. Embarrassed


Jenny, I am having a hard time coming to terms with this. The end if ALS. But all good things come to an end at some point, don't they ? One would be at risk of taking them for granted if they are eternal. Or if you have never faced the fear of losing it? 
That is what I see as the reason behind the years of separation these two had to endure. You can truly appreciate heaven only once you have seen what hell is like. Tough times make you stronger, and one tends to learn more from failures and hardships than from easy success. All you need is faith.. it could be in God or destiny or goodness or just faith in yourself. But faith gives you the hope to keep going, and thats what matters, doesn't it ? Now this is one happy ending I am sure will last forever. Their love is stronger than ever. Theres also the fact, there would have been no Branny had they not parted ways all those years ago. And methinks Mr. and Mrs. Foster's life would be incomplete without that little bundle of joy, isn't it ? 

What a beautiful story Jenny, it was a delightful journey reading it. Thank you :)  And stories like this, characters like Mr. Foster will stay in our hearts forever. And, since you shares with us such a beautiful poem in this update, I too will let Keats tell you what I think of the joy of such a heartfelt story

A thing of beauty is a joy for ever: 
Its lovliness increases; it will never 
Pass into nothingness; but still will keep 
A bower quiet for us, and a sleep 
Full of sweet dreams, and health, and quiet breathing. 
Therefore, on every morrow, are we wreathing 
A flowery band to bind us to the earth, 
Spite of despondence, of the inhuman dearth 
Of noble natures, of the gloomy days, 
Of all the unhealthy and o'er-darkn'd ways 
Made for our searching: yes, in spite of all, 
Some shape of beauty moves away the pall 
From our dark spirits. Such the sun, the moon, 
Trees old and young, sprouting a shady boon 
For simple sheep; and such are daffodils 
With the green world they live in; and clear rills 
That for themselves a cooling covert make 
'Gainst the hot season; the mid-forest brake, 
Rich with a sprinkling of fair musk-rose blooms: 
And such too is the grandeur of the dooms 
We have imagined for the mighty dead; 
An endless fountain of immortal drink, 
Pouring unto us from the heaven's brink.

- John Keats

Edited by vgedin - 30 August 2013 at 1:55am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


Crazy4Sobti IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 April 2013
Posts: 2834

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Updated - 

Hi Jenny,

First my apologizes for such a late late late un-reserve. This is the longest I have ever taken to comment on any story and especially ALS. But my AD didn't give me time even 5 minutes of me time since Friday and had house full of guests.  

You know even though this is last chapter of ALS and the story has ended and I realize that there won't be any more of Mr. Foster, Khushi or Branny, I know I should be upset, feeling bad about it but I am not. After the last chapter I have this calm in my heart, as if it's at peace, as if it's found its destiny just like Mr. and Mrs. Foster, if its content and fulfilled, just like Mr. and Mrs. Foster are contented in their lives. After reading the chapter I have this smile that's reaching my eyes and is from bottom of my heart and it's for Arnav and Khushi, their love and their happily ever after.

 Arnav reminiscing his childhood, the dark allies of his life, his meeting Khushi, their love, he thinking about higher power, it really shows that finally he has stopped running in his life from his dark childhood, from the pain caused by his parents and of staying away from Khushi and he had made peace with all of it and is able to do all this because of Khushi. She gave him the strength, will power to face his demons, let his past go and move forward in life. She is the anchored of his life, his goal, his destination. As if today he realized that everything he went through was worth it because end of it he found ultimate happiness in Khushi.

This scene reminds of another song by Philip Philips -


Hold on, to me as we go
As we roll down this unfamiliar road
And although this wave (wave) is stringing us along
Just know you're not alone
Cause I'm gonna make this place your home

Settle down, it'll all be clear
Don't pay no mind to the demons
They fill you with fear
The trouble it might drag you down
If you get lost, you can always be found

Just know you're not alone
Cause I'm gonna make this place your home

Settle down, it'll all be clear
Don't pay no mind to the demons
They fill you with fear
The trouble it might drag you down
If you get lost, you can always be found

Just know you're not alone
Cause I'm gonna make this place your home

Theirs is going to be a true marriage, where they will stand by each and every vow they took and unsaid promises they made to each other. They are the most blessed couple too, all the friends, families, the elements of nature, the whole world has come together to wish this couple.

Jenny, this is such a beautiful, poetic and heartwarming beginning to Mr. and Mrs Foster and Branny's life together. I couldn't have asked for more from the last chapter, you just exceeded all the expectations and standards you had set with each and every chapter of ALS. At the outset it's a simple love story, but the depth of emotions you have explored with this simple love is beyond BRILLIANCE and HATS OFF TO YOU.

I want to THANK YOU from bottom of my heart for giving us such exquisite and heart touching story. I just want to say "I LOVE YOU"Hug. 

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 03 September 2013 at 9:14pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


aaradhaya1688 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 August 2012
Posts: 3100

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Loved the update
It was a really beautiful ending to a superb ff
Will miss it though but then everything comes to an end doesn't it
Keep the great work up
Thanks a ton for d pm Smile

Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 29 August 2013 at 11:15pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Chipmunks. Goldie

Joined: 12 March 2013
Posts: 2032

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 10:25am | IP Logged
I am going to miss this one seriously. Awesome chapter. I think I would read it again and again :)
Any more stories up on ur sleeves? ;)

Edited by Chipmunks. - 29 August 2013 at 9:35pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


dieforasr IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 August 2012
Posts: 8486

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Wink "Take my breath away..."

Edited by dieforasr - 30 August 2013 at 12:00am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


meera30 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 January 2010
Posts: 5068

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 11:22am | IP Logged

Hey Jenny!!

Sorry about leaving this res here for so long. Life just caught up and I forgot about this even though I read and enjoyed the epilogue just as much as everyone else. As I said recently in my comment on the last part of the epilogue, I love how you started with a fairy tale and ended with real life and managed the transition perfectly. It's what makes this story special and you one of the most sought after authors on this forum.

Edited by meera30 - 20 October 2013 at 12:11am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 October 2011
Posts: 30355

Posted: 29 August 2013 at 11:57am | IP Logged
oh my my
they got their spring finally didnt they
aww the love that started so many years ago finally found its outlet
and it was allowed to be with them
ahhh their past shaped them and helped them find their way to one another again
and even after what all happened their love for one another never died
and thats what i love about them
perfect ending to one hell of a love story
nothing could be better than this
have not enough words to describe their new beginning
cheers for pm
so enjoy you time off from IF
but please do return back soon

Edited by chavvi16 - 29 August 2013 at 1:16pm

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
A Late Spring...Removed from IF..

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 151 152

Author: IPK007   Replies: 1211   Views: 157118

IPK007 1211 157118 24 February 2016 at 3:02pm by Mus@
A Late Spring Epilogue// IMP NOTE Pg. 164

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 147 148

Author: IPK007   Replies: 1178   Views: 113794

IPK007 1178 113794 08 May 2015 at 9:47pm by IPK007
Dipu's Index:~Spring of Love~ [TaaRey]

2 3 4 5 6

Author: BeingFoodie.   Replies: 41   Views: 35655

BeingFoodie. 41 35655 21 July 2014 at 8:00am by BeingFoodie.

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index