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Japonica IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Loved the wedding invitation card, especially the fact that it was Brandon Foster inviting people for the wedding.

Loved the minute details of the wedding ceremony

And the details of what followed!

Everything in this update felt right, Jenny! Smile




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neevankrish Senior Member
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Sooo this one s d last thread eh Cry Cry Cry

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TwilightStar_JP IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Lovely teaser!

The essence is still intact! Btw where is branny? :(

29th hmm long way to go!

Cheers

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sarunsanju Groupbie
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
a beautiful chapter,their wedding and their union was as beautiful as you wrote it.cant belive only one last chapter to go.i haven't had enough of branny and arnav's bonding,hope to read more of them in the comming chapter.
thanks for all your effort to pm ur readers ,we are really greatfull to have such a gifted writer..

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ipkrocks21 Senior Member
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
So the story is coming to its end with the second last part written such beautifully jenny...there is a certain beauty in the way u write ur intimate scenes which very few writers here can come close to... it has been a wonderful journey and I so hope it will continue with some sweet n sour moment post marriage, arnav branny relation...but then u r d best judge...to carry on with it or not is ur call ... nonetheless I loved ALS and there were certain scenes which are my all time fav and I go back again n again to reread them...thank u so much for writing it and also for sending me PM every single time...u r a sweetheart...loved ALS like anything :))


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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Chapter 42 was beautifully and tastefully done!

Red Riding Hood has really come a long way and this was another epic love story by you. Will truly miss A Late Spring immensely and it has been memorable in so many ways! How we all anxiously waited for updates, how we cried with Khushi, and how many friendships were formed on your ALS thread ..
Sad to see the story ending and hope that Foster can reemerge in another one of your stories!!

Will wait patiently for you to return after break and then can't believe it's the last chapter of ALS! What a journey it's been!! Cry

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Wow...what a beautiful wedding.  Thank you for inviting me to it.

This had been such a momentous journey you have taken us on.  Loved this couple to the core and as I used to cry about the sadness of it all...I remember you promising how it will all work out and you definitely kept your promise...it did work out.  It definitely worked out for Khushi who finally I hope feels worthy and special because she ha the love of a very special man and it is she who inspires him.

As for the passion...It was well conveyed and since I am in the right age bracket for it. My Dil mange more...lol.

I do have a wish before the story ends ...and I will express it...hope you do not mind.  I want Branny, cute and adorable as he is to take a little bit of a back seat because I still want to hear the story of his parents to completion before I wave this family goodbye.  

Can we please get Arnav's perspective or reflection  on how happy he is now that he finally had his Khushi and I want to totally hear about Khushi as she realizes that while Arnav can bring all the joys to her and Branny but at the end of the day it is she who is the center of his universe.  This is an awesome responsibility.  I want Khushi to realize this versus waste her time reflecting on how much Arnav is doing for her because at the end of the day...he was just a breathing dead soul without her... And now with her...he is alive and has a life.


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Amiarisme Goldie
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
the second half setting so remind me of tht night in their teens when they were almost abt to make love infront of the fire place.

how happy they must be to finally have each other obviously no one could scold them for being late with all tht happiness reflecting on their face.

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