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jas0308 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 March 2012
Posts: 17584

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 6:15am | IP Logged
do I have to say it...
speechless jenny
superb update
finally they are married and the passion they had was so heartfelt.. really loved the update to bits
PS: sorry for the delay and short commentEmbarrassed really want to write more but words are not coming

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YaSha0512 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 October 2012
Posts: 5229

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Amazing updates
Loved how Arnav dealt with khushis mum not excepting her excuses or crocodile tears
Can really see the bond growing between Arnav n branny , he really has excepted him as his son
God 3 months apart that must have been torture for Arnav especially
Nice the fact he took her to her father's grave b4 the wedding he really is sensitive to khushis feelings
As for chapter 42
Arnav imagining Khushis father giving khushi away walking her down the isle was a nice touch
Loved how Janice n Rachel anticipated khushi n Arnavs need
Consummation was perfect for all ages n well showed their feelings for each other
As for khushis mum betya she never even tried to attend the wedding
At last they're finally one... really sad though this story is ending soon will definitely miss it
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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Seethu Goldie

Joined: 23 November 2012
Posts: 924

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 7:15am | IP Logged

What a beautiful wedding!!!! so captivating ' Arnav has already gone over and beyond for Khushi so flower is no big deal for him :)

Branny was so cute as ring bearer ' love you sweet pie :)

And coming to their most  waited union  - I guess, in their case it more of an emotional need rather than a physical one ; needed to complete the full circle and demonstrate their ache ' had it been a physical need they could have finished it long back taking into their stern/sincere feelings towards each other 'I agree with you regarding keeping in mind various age groups of readers 'and moreover some precious things need to be left brief to retain the beauty of the subject in this case is Arnav and Khushi's unconditional love towards each other'

So you have done fabulous job and I'm totally convinced by the way you depicted their passion'

Love you Hug

Edited by Seethu - 21 August 2013 at 7:17am

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IPK007 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 October 2012
Posts: 6711

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged

Hey friends,

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, I loved reading them and I'm so glad and so relieved that you didn't find this chapter...esp the 'ahem' parts too too..!!Smile

I am going to be inactive on IF for the next week, so the last part of ALS will be posted on Thursday the 29th...

Here's a little teaser..Smile

Arnav sat relaxed in a rickety old chair in Khushi's room with his legs crossed. He held a folder in his hand that Khushi had handed to him with a mysterious smile on her face, just before going to the bathroom for a shower. With a puzzled look, he took the sketches, his sketches out from the folder and looked at them one by one...As realization dawned, a wistful, bittersweet expression entered his eyes. 

"The naive, innocent little Red Riding Hood and the bitter, disillusioned Bad Wolf..", he mused nostalgically with an amused smile. 

He was still lost in thoughts when Khushi emerged from the bathroom, showered and changed in a sleeveless tiered ruffle shift dress in a pleasant shade of mauve. Standing in front of the dresser mirror as she straightened her blow-dried hair, every nerve of her body was tinglingly aware of her husband sitting at a little distance from her. 

No matter how much, how truly and how deeply you love a person...once that person becomes your lover, once you've shared hitherto unimaginable intimacies with that person..things change.. Nothing seems the same anymore. With a drastically increased level of awareness, it is almost like falling in love all over again...

Love you all 

Jenny :)

Edited by IPK007 - 21 August 2013 at 9:11am

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smileyhug7679 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 October 2011
Posts: 4549

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 7:53am | IP Logged
wow looking fwd for the update

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cherrybloom1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 October 2012
Posts: 5798

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged
no update for a whole week? :'(
come back soon please!

and i dont think theres any need to say this...
obviously amazing teaser and i cant wait to read the chapter!
and dont forget, LONGGG hona chahiye!

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akaps Goldie

Joined: 14 March 2013
Posts: 1736

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Nice teaser.

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esamoe Goldie

Joined: 04 December 2012
Posts: 1583

Posted: 21 August 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
cant wait for the update sad its ending loved this story will they be an epilogue?

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