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IronButterfly IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Ahh finally.
Shaadi Mubarak!

Beautiful wedding and your writing made it a delightful read.

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ana-twilight Goldie
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Tat was a beautiful n awesome updt..
Finally they are together as one..
i am so happyyy.. Smile

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 3:17am | IP Logged
M jumping wid joy on par wid Branny if nt more!
Man n wife , Arnav n Khushi , Mr&Mrs Foster :)
**wiping my khushi ke aasoon**
Their lovemaking was sensuous n exhilarating!
Uve depicted it vry beautifully , dear Jenny :)

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deepti1906 Goldie
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 3:28am | IP Logged
I feel like I'm in a different place altogether... This was so so wonderful...Clap  I couldn't stop smiling while reading this update.. Finally Mr. Mrs and Baby Foster are together forever...:') Ohh, nd how much I was waiting to see Branny as a ring bearer and the scene was so endearing and lovely.

Arnav's annoyance with flowers was expected..LOL But it was really cute. And you made Khushi's entrance to marriage hall so angelic, that it looked magical.

The marriage, the vows, the photo session and what came later was just P.E.R.F.E.C.T. The lovemaking near fire place made me remind of the earlier one when Arnav came in winters for Khushi and they end up kissing near the fireplace. They couldn't take it far but this time, it was breadth taking. The way you described their love making, was so passionate yet so soulful and emotional. Hats off to you..Clap

You have written this so beautifully that I just couldn't stop my tears of happiness. Just Loved it! HeartHeart

Can't wait to read the next update but I really feel bad that this is going to end..Cry

Update soon...SmileSmile


Edited by deepti1906 - 20 August 2013 at 3:32am

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 3:53am | IP Logged
It always sad to see a beautiful story ending. But honestly Jenny, this was one of the sweet love stories about Arshi I read. Their childhood friendship - love - the pain- betrayal..at certain stages u were so cruel for eg: Khushi's wedding with sean and Arnav's pain. but you made up for that with the last two updates. A beautiful wedding. I was seriously happy when Arnav took her to her father's grave for blessing and finally now their passion got an outlet..Poor Arnav he had been holding on to his control for long! :-)

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Truly awesome update 
M surely gng to miss this one badly as the last chp remains

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Congrats on new thread.
loved it.

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avni_barun IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 5:57am | IP Logged
They r together...M soo happy...
Beautiful update...

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