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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
i'm in seventh heaven right now! such a lovely, beautifully etched chapter! i 'm so going to miss this story...! the little things, like arnav's annoyance at wearing flowers, the couple forgetting the existence of the rest of the world as they kissed their wedding kiss, branny's adorable excitement, the grandmothers' tactful sceme to give the newly wed couple some time to themselves, that is what makes this story such a fine read. you feel like the characters are for reaal! and, the consummation scne- wow. there are very few writers who can pull it off with such balance. loved it!!! will be eagerly for the last *sob* chapter. please hafe lots of branny on it! i love the little guy! ( please ignore typos. i'm typong pn a touch phone while sitting on a speeding, shaking government gus. i mean, bus) LOL

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orchids8888 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Dear thanks for the pm.Smile I loved the update.Big smile The update is beautiful.Clap

Finally Arshi became one. Arshi love making is pure and very romantic.Heart Arshi deserve to be happy. Arshi is the epitome of true love. Heart

Hats off to you dear for this beautiful update of true love.Clap

Dear I am feeling very emotional because this FF is coming to an end.Cry

But dear you told me that one additional update and 2 epilogues.Party I am waiting for 2 epilogues.Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

I want to read Arshi to have a baby Day Dreamingand Arshi behaving like parents to both kids.Day Dreaming


Edited by orchids8888 - 19 August 2013 at 10:39pm

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prati_incept Senior Member
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
perfect perfect perfect!!!

perfect bride 
perfect groom
perfect kid
perfect granny n aunt 
perfect wedding
perfect rain
perfect fireplace
perfect lovemaking

what else can i say?... "you made my day"

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pmpm1 Goldie
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update! They have indeed come a full circle. But above all, they really did get a second chance in life. Smile

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Not like, i wish if there is a super like button.
I feel a frisson of excitement while reading this sublime chapter.
Arnav and Khushi's holly matrimony was blissful, perfect and heavenly. 
you articulately depicted the most wanted wedding. 
When they were finally blessed with God, naturally they became impatient to consummate their marriage. They completed each other like an ocean meets its shore.
you aesthetically wrote the love making.
An absolute wonderful chapter.
Loved it to the core.


Edited by sohara - 19 August 2013 at 10:28pm

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indhuza Senior Member
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
awesome ...story... :)

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Ooo ooo that was a PERFECT update Jenny - beautiful mingling of souls - nothing less, nothing more - just perfect - heart consoling togetherness - My Wolf and his Red Riding Hood deserved this union -
Lovely update Jenny - I just read once - need to read again - thx dear for this beautiful update -

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
beautiful one
loved it
thanks for the pm
Twinkle

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