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Afsha29 Goldie
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Dammit ! I wrote such a long commnt and it wsnt posted..neermind..for dis ff..one mre tym hi sahi..

I cnt believe im.soo laaate for seeeing dis update and commntin
Nw strtin frm the strting

OH
MY
GODDD
!!
THEEEY ARE MAAARRRIIIEDDD!!! FINAAALLT BABBBYYY..CNT EXPLAIN WHT I FELT READIN TAT PART OF THE UPDATE.. FAIRYTALE INDEEED..HONESTLY HD TEARS OF JOY READIN IT :')

AND MY BABBYY MY BRANNNY CAAAMEE !
AUNT RACHEL.AND JANICE R JST TOOO AWESOME <3<3

AAAH MY LIL TEENY ARNAAV..SULKIN ABT THE FLOWER AND PICS :')
THEN WALKIN TO THE HOUSE..THE U PREDICTABLE WEATHER OF LANDOUR..AND THEEEY MADEEE LOVEE..FINALLY TWO SOULS FINALLY ONE :')
THAT TOO ON TAT RUG..WHRE THEY KISSED..BESIDE THE FIREPLACE..A FULL CIRCLE..WHAT A BEAAAUTIFUL JOURNEY..YET THEIR LOVE ABOVE ALL THE HARDSHIP AND PAINS :') AND DUDE IT WSNT GRAPHIC..SOO VEAAAUTIFULL !
AND THIS WS THE SECND.LAST UPDAATE..KYUNNN :( AAH IM GONNNAAA MISS READIN DIS FF JENNY..EARGRLY WAITIN FOR IT.
YOU WRK IS MAAARVELLLOUS JENNNY
TAKE A BOW LUV
LUV YOU :)

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IPK007

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Absolutely brilliant, the best wedding I've ever been too.

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Married finally!:D
God i've waited so much for this update...and it couldnt have been better
Loved it!
The love making was beautiful!
Great work!

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
Waw it was superb fantastic 
I really lived it sooo much 

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Hats off to you! Clap
 
You did a tremendous job!
 
Loved ever bit of the chapter!

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
amazing update
loved it

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 5:27pm | IP Logged

Aww, such a beautiful update. No doubt he wore the flowers and went through all the picture posing, he can always do anything for Khushi, after all she is his own little red riding hood. Whole wedding was just perfect, the way you described the ambience of church, Khushi's overwhelming emotions, Arnav's excitement of finally getting what was his.. everything was amazing. A beautiful, perfect, stunning wedding and my little branny was so happy to be a ring bearer, I am gonna miss him the most. Even Arnav imagining Khushi's dad walking with her, made my eyes moist. You are amazing Jenny, every detail was incredible. And regarding the ahem ahem parts, trust me this is the most beautiful love making I have ever read of IF. You kept the physical aspect away yet all their desires, passions, longing were portrayed amazingly. It was truly a union of two souls in midst of passion and pleasure!!! 

A big hug for you for writing this chapter, it was written far better than what I expected and nothing can be more beautiful than this Hug

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 5:39pm | IP Logged
Pls don't expect any comments 4rm me,Sara ki Mom !!!!
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