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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Jen edited my comments here Smile

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
Pure Justice Jen! I swear!!

You justified the whole concept!! Be it the story, theme, concept, characters or the readers! (Age wise wala part)

Loved it completely!

Picture perfect and the wedding card couldn't have been better! Suits them so well!

Every small detail, gesture that you have shown has indepth meaning if you read between lines! Be it Arnav seeing Mr Craner next to khushi whe she walks down the isle to the alter! That gentle squeeze during the exchanges of vows!

When she opens up about sean n he makes sure she.ll neva get back down that lane again! All so good!

How can I miss mentioning Branny?cutie pie! Janice n Rachael are smart gave time for the newly wedding but didn't give out on Brandon too! Sweet! He calling our maama n daddy was uber cute! Loved it to bits!

And then become one! Finally giving an end to chinese torture :p but this was the best! Nothing more nothing less both would have hampered the feel n essence of it all! Passion I agree but more that is the love they share!

Pure bliss

Cheers

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
The second half was beautifully written!

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
So much in luv vid dis update...

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Written brilliantly Jenny, with just the right amount of detail to represent their want and need, but still leaving enough to the individual imagination for us to make our own impressions!!!  Clap

P.S... I loved that they didn't make it to the bedroom...and rather he finished where he had originally started!!Wink


Edited by --Nargis-- - 19 August 2013 at 1:37pm

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written
Amazing loved it
finally they became one

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
superb updt

luvd it

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Haiyee foster is taken by kushi ab hum ladkiyon ka kya hoga...hehe just kidding
i loved the wedding the way you wrote it...n branny as the ring bearer...
Congrats Mr and Mrs.Foster...may u live a long life together and forever...
Awesome awesome awesone...
I was blushing furiously while reading the second half...arnav n kushis union..
Loved the update
thanks for the pm

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