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addicted25 Senior Member

Joined: 21 January 2014
Posts: 685

Posted: 07 February 2014 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Jen, that was AWSOME, l'm in awe of your talent, the story is complete, beautifully written, the characters arefully rounded, descriptions make the imagination wander. Topped off with a wonderful poem expressing love in its best form.

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kdsubs IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 September 2011
Posts: 3353

Posted: 10 February 2014 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Hi Jenny,
This is such a beautifully written tale. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I loved where you started the story - with the two in school. And you stayed true to their characters through the 10-odd years of this story. In many stories that span such a long time, we find, even with established authors, that they lose track of the characters. Somewhere along the way the psychological and emotional development either does not occur or gets off-track. You kept a tight reign on your characters and their development throughout. Clap

And i adored Branny. Or Brandon as he likes to be called now Smile. What a sweetheart. The interaction and the slow growth of trust and mutual love between him and Arnav was splendidly done.

For me the story ended at this thread. The epilogues were the icing - glimpses into their life later on. Fun to know, but not essential to the story. But the Christmas OS - oh, that was perfection again. They both needed closure with their parents - even though their parents were not there. And you provided the closure so beautifully in that OS. Lovely.

You closed all the loops - except one i think. How did Khushi come back to Landour after Branny's birth? Did you cover that and i just miss it?

Btw - I have been to Missouri so many times but never knew about the gem called Landour. And now i must go there. Wonderful details of the town and what a way to commemorate your own grandmother's fondest memories.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful story Jenny. I will be reading your other works soon - as time permits.

All the best,

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aarrsshhii IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 May 2012
Posts: 3772

Posted: 05 April 2014 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Such a beautiful story...I have no have left me totally speechless...
Simply beautiful...

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princessunara IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 48998

Posted: 29 May 2014 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
res to read! :)

will read this next after my current FF is done n comment!

Finished reading and I just wanna say what an absolutely beautiful story!! awww i fell in love with this Arnav!! gosh the way he loves her!! awww..
And this Khushi is so gentle.. very different to our Khushi from the show..

And they r so perfect together! You write beautifully! just loved it!!

Edited by princessunara - 03 June 2014 at 12:12am

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Aish002 Goldie

Joined: 04 August 2013
Posts: 1685

Posted: 03 July 2014 at 4:41am | IP Logged
found this story a few hours back and read it in one go...this story is like a those English novels...

the setting..Landour..the close knit community...Arshi teenage love...the brooding hero...the weather described...

i found myself remembering of the story Wuthering Heights...the same melancholy setting...I just loved it..

Your writing is very powerful..the scenes you write..the visuals they evoke..stunning and the one with Khushi sitting in cemetery...her riding that bicycle and that red raincoat...the they came full circle...written wonderfully

just realized that there are epilogue updates for this..gonna read it now...

This is an absolute gem of a work...I mean it...Smile...loved reading this...

Edited by Aish002 - 03 July 2014 at 4:37am

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Honkytonk Goldie

Joined: 09 February 2011
Posts: 1464

Posted: 05 July 2014 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Just read this FF in full and absolutely loved it!!!! Will now try and read some more of your work. Many thanks

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Arshi1195 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 2457

Posted: 21 July 2014 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
I read this all in the span of a few hours! One of the best ffs :)

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aamir18 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 17 January 2010
Posts: 8052

Posted: 09 September 2014 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Like I said, I loved it more the 5th time around Embarrassed 
This story. Ugh

I have no words to express how perfect it is... in every freaking way possible. ALS is my absolute favorite work of yours and one of my favorite stories on IF in general. 

Actually, confession time... I've started penning my first FF on IF and this story (along with a couple others) was one of my biggest inspirations. So thank you! Not just for writing, but for inspiring as well Embarrassed

Edited by aamir18 - 09 September 2014 at 7:29pm

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