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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 6:48am | IP Logged

On seeing his old sketches, Arnav's bittersweet recollections of bygone days and the pain that was part of his and Khushi's life is a poignant moment. But then, totally unexpectedly,Khushi had happened. If he was like fire, she was like water, falling in sparkling, pearlescent drops from the heavens. Cooling, invigorating, invigorating. Unbeknownst to himself, she had permeated through his defenses and seeped deep in his soul. Slowly, stealthily and with infinite gentleness... Beautiful in its simplicity! His thoughts taking on a philosophical vein seems so out of character! Khushi and Arnav are acutely aware of each other and of their desire and love, too. With their eyes reflecting their hearts' feelings and doing all the talking, they both knew that mere words would have been supremely superfluous... beautifully put! Arnav's naughty yet gentle teasing of Khushi and her rosy cheeks paint a pretty picture of their all encompassing love, with passion lying just below the surface, needing only a spark to turn into a conflagration! Adam and Mark looking forward to roasting Arnav and he dreading it is very amusing. "Dude what's with this brooding, stuck up attitude? I had quickly dismissed him as a Cullen wannabe in my mind." Lovely! Mark's speech had just the right combo of wit and emotion. Arnav's gesture of having Branny nearby, in their suite, is a touching one that indicates that Branny is an integral part of their lives and is not going to be pushed aside for their own convenience. Khushi mesmerised by her hubby's physical charms, and his one-track mind are adorable. Love how poetry is forgotten for more sensual pleasures. The poem is absolutely apt in their context! An emotional conclusion to a wonderfully-written story.

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Beautiful ending!

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Oh...dear...i will truly miss this one... It is soo close to my heart...
U r great writter...thanku for giving us this masterpiece...loved it to core..

Arshi...branny...i will miss you...
Mark and dawn r real good friends...
That poem was a very sweet one...

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged

Wonderful love story with emotional touches. Really liked every chapter of the story and the way you described all the feelings and journey of their souls. Good luck for your other works. Thanks again for the story.

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Jenny I'm so grateful that you write this story and shared it with the world. There wasnt a single point I the story that I was displeased in your writing. You have an amazing gift in writing and I hope you'll grow more as a writer " I don't think that's even possible " you've always exceeded my expectations. I'm sad though i will miss this story that doesn't mean that I won't reread it because I assure you I definitly will. Thank you for such a wonderful ending :)

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Wonderful ending to an amazing story. Love you writing and will miss this story. I am not good at writing long notes but had wonderful time reading this ff and your other stories as well. 

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Thanks Jenny for writing such an amazing story. Will miss u
Wish u all the best.

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 10:31am | IP Logged
your writing is amazing
beautiful ending
loved it

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