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OS - The Most Precious Gift Scene 2 in Page 2 (Page 3)

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Geethsn

Read both parts. So realistic. Great job. Thumbs Up
Part 1, during separation track, when sandy wakes up late, n when she ends up eating instead of fasting during teej, I was expecting a scene just like ur  OS. I wish they had shown it like what u have written. So sweet. Loved it.

Part2 : u have captured sarun convo so well. Again wish dabh cvs, had made babho realize suryas real motive for leaving just like u described it. 

Great job. Clap
Do keep writing more. 

thank u Geeth.

Yes I expected bhabho to realise and to know the real reason behind their move. But they don't show that. So satisfied myself by writing this part

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Agree with you Hemaji, evn when I feel bad about some things I write OS so that atleast I am satisfied and people are liking it.

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
this s the perfect scene...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Nice os hema. Continue...

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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Nice OS Hema aka...ClapClap I just loved it...Please continue the OS

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nice hemakaStarStar
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great OS!!

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